导图社区 雅思写作(观点类)
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编辑于2024-11-19 07:23:18雅思写作 (观点类)
问题举例
① [SiomonP72] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
④ [SiomonP95] Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work, To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
开头段
句① 引出他人观点
Some people believe that... Many people argue that... It is sometimes argued that... It is often said that...
句② 表明观点
完全同意
l completely agree that... Personally, l support the view that... In my opinion,...
部分同意
I can therefore only partly agree with the assertion that...
完全不同意
However, l completely disagree with the idea that...
主体段1
句① 承认另一观点的可取之处
On the one hand, l accept that... On the one hand, it is true that On the one hand,... and l see this as a positive trend.
句② 举例说明
Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technology giants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try to create.
句③ 解释
Employees are encouraged to dress casually, and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans.
句④ 除此之外
On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful.
句⑤ 总结
In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
主体段2
句① 主要观点
On the other hand, ...
句② 角度一
One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them.
句③ 举例
For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. Perhaps the best example of this would be...
句④ 角度二
I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportioof their profits to support local charities, environment projects or education initiatives.
句⑤ 总结
Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payment by using accounting loopholes, l believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
结尾段
句① 总结
完全同意
In conclusion, l believe that...
部分同意
In conclusion, l support the..., but l do not see it as applicable to all...
完全不同意
In conclusion, l would argue that...
题目中包含两个不同的观点
雅思写作 (观点类)
问题举例
③ [SiomonP88] Extreme sports such as sky diving and sking are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
⑤ [SiomonP109] Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
开头段
句① 描述现象确实存在
lt is true that... lt is undeniable that...
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them.
句② 表明观点
均不同意 (这样好写)
I completely disagree with the idea that..., and l therefore believe that...should not be... l completely disagree with this point of view.
主体段1
句① 反驳这一现象
In my opinion, so-called...are not as ... as many people think. In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that....
句② 举例说明
Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technology giants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try to create.
句③ 解释
Employees are encouraged to dress casually, and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans.
句④ 除此之外
On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful.
句⑤ 总结
In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
主体段2
句① 也反驳这一观点
l also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources.
句② 角度一
One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them.
句③ 举例
For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life.
句④ 角度二
I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportioof their profits to support local charities, environment projects or education initiatives.
句⑤ 总结
Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payment by using accounting loopholes, l believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
结尾段
句① 总结
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and l believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
题目讲了一个描述然后跟了一个观点
雅思写作 (讨论类)
问题举例
① [SiomonP59] Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think thatit will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to lifeon earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
③ [SiomonP99] In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some peoplebelieve that this is good for the country, but others think that governments shouldnot allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion.
开头段
句① 描述人们的争论
People have different views about whether...
句② 承认一方有道理 但是另一方更好
While in some ways it may seem reasonable..., l personally believe that...
主体段1
句① 承认一方有道理
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people...
句②~⑤
Firstly,...Secondly...Finally They belive that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research
主体段2
句① 自己更喜欢的观点
However, l agree with those who argue that there should be..
句②~⑤
From the...perspective. Foe example...From the...perspective.
结尾段
句① 总结
In conclusion, l am convinced that..., in spite of its potential risks
雅思写作 (问题对测类)
问题举例
① [SiomonP63] In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
开头段
句① 背景引入
It is true that... had an influence on..between people.
句② 承认问题存在 提出有解决方案
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate(减轻) these potential problems.
主体段1
句① 会出现很多问题
As people...several related problems can be anticipated
句②~⑤
The main issue is that there will obviously be more... On top of these... Furthermore,....
主体段2
句① 有解决办法
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above.
句②~⑤
- Firstly, a simple solution would be to... - A second measure would be for governments to encourage... - Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens
结尾段
句① 总结
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as...
雅思写作 (追问类)
问题举例
① [SiomonP67] Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
开头段
句① 背景引入
It is true that... had an influence on..between people.
句② 有好有坏
Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects
主体段1
句① 在不同方面存在影响
Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life.
句②~⑤
Firstly,...Secondly...Finally
主体段2
句①~⑤ 一方面,另一方面
On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. On the other hand,...
结尾段
句① 总结
In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
雅思写作 (小作文)
替换词
表示上升
increase, go up, rise up, grow, jump, surge, keep an upward tendency, rocket, soar
表示下降
decrease, go down, decline, fall down, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency, plummet, plunge, drop
表示波动
fluctuate
持平平稳
remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant
修饰变化幅度
slightly 轻微地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地,steadily 稳定地,rapidly 迅速地,moderately 温和地,significantly 明显地,sharply 猛然地,dramatically 急剧地, drastically 急剧地
最高点
reach the peak, arrive at the highest point, reach the top (reach可替换为increase或rise)
最低点
reach the bottom, drop to the lowest point (动词也可替换为fall, decline等表示下降的词)
占比最多
占比最多:occupy the largest proportion of (occupy可替换为make up, take up, account for, proportion可替换为number percentage)
占比最少
occupy the smallest proportion of
表示倍数
double 两倍;increase three times 增长了三倍;twice as many as 两倍;three times big than 比...大三倍
表示大约
about, around, approximately, roughly, just over, just under
表示未来
is expected/forecast/predicted/projected to
比例
25%:exactly a quarter;26%:roughly one quarter/ slightly more than a quarter;32%:nearly one-third, nearly a third;49%:around a half/just under a half;50%:exactly a half;51%:just over a half;
超过
exceed / surpass / overtake
开头段
替换词
描述
depicts/represents/provides/describes/shows/illustrates; gives information about; compares;
不同类
different types of;different categories; different modes; different forms;living in poor;who were classed as poor; living below the poverty line;
年份
between 2000 and 2022;from 2000 to 2020; (in 3 different year) over a period of 20 years; in the years 1980 and 1990
数量
the proportion of;the pecentage of;the number of;the figures of; the amount of
表
the chart;the table;the figure
人
people;population
雅思写作 (小作文)
概括段
思路
写图上最明显的两个特征,不出现具体数字描述,而是高屋建瓴的写,最好写能描述整张表的,实在不行就写最低最高
例句
table chart
描述变化 趋势
It is clear that the total number of miles travelled by English people using all modes of transport increased significantly between 1985 and 2000.
描述最值
Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.
In each of these years, the US produced more waste than lreland, Japan, Republic of Korea, Poland and Portugal combined,
pie chart
描述最值
...made up the largest proportion of... the majority of...
描述变化 趋势
It is clear that the total number of miles travelled by English people using all modes of transport increased significantly between 1985 and 2000.
line chart
描述波动
It is clear that average global prices of both food and oil rose considerably between2000 and 2011, although many price fluctuations can be seen during those 11 years.
相关性
Furthermore, the trends for both commodities are very similar, and so a strong correlationis suggested
最值
It is noticeable that overall spending by international visitors to New Zealand was at itshighest between the years 2000 and 2003.
上升下降
It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period,while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly.
交点
The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.
bar chart
描述最值
It is clear that the majority of Americans ate in fast food restaurants between once a weekand once a month in all three years shown on the chart.
描述变化 趋势
We can also see that there was ashift towards eating in these restaurants less frequently by the end of the 10-year period
mixed chart
描述最值
It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children's participation insports over the 6-year period.
In terms of the number of children taking part, football wassignificantly more popular than athletics and swimming.
flow chart
描述流程
It is clear that there are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the inputof raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, foudifferent materials are mixed together
有几个步骤,从哪里开始到哪里结束
描述变化 趋势
雅思写作 (小作文)
描述段
思路
每段差不多3句话。永远不要孤立的描述数字,而是要与其他数字进行比较。注意时态。
例句
table chart
按照同样趋势 的一起分类
[段A] Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnesand rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan's waste outputincreased from 28 to 53 milion tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totalsincrease from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.
[段B] The trends for lreland and Republic of Korea were noticeably different from thosdescribed above, lo reland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only o emilion tonnes in 1980 to 5 milion tonnes in 2000. Republic of Korea, by contrast, cut iwaste output by 12 milion tonnes between 1990 and 2000.
按照数量分类
In 1999, $witzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at e 3 million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at e 15 million.
flow chart
流程材料分类
[段A] At the first stage in the production of cement,limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder.This powder is then mixed before it passes intoa rotating heater. After heating, the resultingmixture is ground, and cement is produced. Finally,the cement is put in large bags.
Cement is one of the four raw materials that areused in the production of concrete, along withgravel, sand and water. To be exact, concreteconsists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and10% water. All four materials are blended together ina rotating machine called a concrete mixer.