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首段 引文 三句话
单句描写 1.人物/事件+动作+环境 人物加 表情加 服装 2.扩充：细节描写 连词成句 3.文字描写：直接翻译/换句话解释说明
哲理文字
相关狭义定义，图中定义
when we use the world ’love“，we do simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex，which is a very narrow definition of the world，the picture below illustrates the real meaning of love，by stressing the fact that love is a emotional strength，which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes，As a matter of fact ，throughout history people of different cultures have regarded love as the most sublime崇高 庄严 of human emotion
现象 (2010)As is symbolized showed,there is a steaming hot pot fulls of all kinds of ingredients of multi-cultures(pluralistic).
To our surprise，(情感词），comparing with traditional hot pot,which combined with a variety of vegeatbles,meats and sauce，the hot pot is full of various “culture foodstuffs”of both Chinese and foreign origins (食材）：Confucinism,Shakespeare,Daonism,Greek Mythology,etc
We are informed (from captions)that:’Cultural "hot pot"is both delicoius and nutritious'
(2011)As is portrayed in the cartoon ,two tourists are sightseeing on a small boat while discarding their picnic leftovers causually into a lake
Unfortunately,the lake is already filled with litter and teaming with flowing rubbish like platic containers ,fish bones,banana peels ,watermelon rinds, bottles food wrappings and so on
And below the drawing ,there is a caption which says "after "the travel(the leftover )旅程之余
(2013)As is vividly showed in the picture,there is amounting number of college sudents to make a decision on what to do after graduation
Normally,for the vast majority of students,the choice is among finding a job ,pursuing postgraduate studies,going abroad and starting their own business
And below the drawing,there is a caption which is "choice"
(2015) As is----,four youngsters are sitting at the table ,ready to have dinner
Unfortunately,instead of drinking and eating from a variety of delicious and nutrious dishes,each of them is holding a mobile phone and staring at their screen,with no thought to chat or eat at all
-----shows a typical gathering in an era of mobile phones
(2018) As---a young student is sitting in front of a computer
Browsing a course selective system on online,he is considering whether to choose a courses which with new konowledge,emphysizing on innovation and difficulty or to choose one easy to pass with high scores and little homework
the caption indicates :Selecting courses
（对话2021）in the portrayals above are a tall father and his cute son
Dressing in a monkey king custome,the lovely boy is murmuring sadly,"Dad,many of my classmates dont think the Perking OPERA is appealing"Smiling at his son,the father answers,"dont you enjoy it yourself?That is enough"
对比(2012）As is demonstrated in the cartoon,two individual respond to the same event in absoultely different ways
Faced with the same situation(or仿照现象描写）a man is saying “Everything is ruined" while another man is saying :"it is lucky to have some ink left”
We are informed/learned /get notice of that "various folks taked different attitudes toward the same occurence"
(2016)---a father and his beloved son
In the left-hand picture,the father is smoking a cigareete,and sitting comfortably to watch a football game and shouting:'son.study hard"On the contrary,in the right-hand picture,at 9:00 P.m,the father is studying together with his son,absorbed in their book.
----"Instead of merely making a request,setting an example
(2017)---two men treating books in completely two oppositive ways
in the first caricature ,facing hundreds of book on the shelf,a man is saying in pride"i have so many books" while the other one,facing merely one book on the desk, another person is saying to himself"i will exert my efforts to finish reading 20 books this year
----owning books and reading books
（2020）it is subtly revealed in the cartoon that two young people are on their long distance journey up a mountain
Sitting on the stairs with sweat pouring down his face,the person on the right says，i am too tired to climb.In contrast,the left person responds,"Dont do that,come on.Take a rest that we can continue
----On the road
结尾·
结论句（呼吁解决措施或者主题重申）
As a consequnce,it is imperative for us to take effective actions
our government should inrtoduce a new law against those who shrink their ability of taking care of theie parents，while we should change the outlook that people live only for themself
立法 make a law to limit---
media adovating
教育 educate give lessons change outlooks
According，it is vital for us to derive positive implicatios from these thought -provoking drawing
on the one hand，on the other hand
the best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture--
when we confront with---we should be ---enough to do
therefore.it is necessary for us to use internet in a resonable way and restrain from overindulgence
when it comes to---,there is no absolutely right or wrong choice
from the preceding discussion,it is appearent that the mobile phone,as an increasing popular tool of communication,have both its upsides and sownsides
to sum up，it is a tradition in China to respect the elders and take care of the young
提出解决办法
i assume this hard can be cracked if both ---take effective steps
for---
in my view ,---can alive by the poeple with time to do so,which is vitial in ensuring a community‘s future development and prosperity
we should always be ready to do--no matter ---
期望 展望 （强调句 倒装 虚拟）结论
only by making constant efforts and never stop making progress can we show grace under pressure and turn our dream into reality
in conclusion，it is persistent work that is conductive for you to grasp the considerable vocabulary
it is high time that we enhance the awareness to rectify this by taking enviromental protection into consideration
body 意义阐释
功能句+五大角度论证/六大论证方法
现象说明 功能句the cartoon has been poetrayed to call atention to a phenomenon that
nowdays /recently/over the past decade
1.sb,particularly 具体sb +态度 willing to/be addicted to/be obessed with
2.the number of---are increase/decrease，regardless of 一类人，or 另一类人
which show that instead of being considered outdated and of little value in a rapidly modernizing world，cultural integration should be encouraged and maintained
2011 from the portrayal，we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message:the scenic spot are flooded with visitors,who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind God-knows-much-trash
社会现象-引发共鸣，解释原因
2018 The portrayal is intented to tell us that when people face an either-or choice,some are intimidated by difficulties and take a shortcut,while others deem them as good opporyunities to strengthen their will
the aim/purpose of the picture is to illustrated/show us the utmost significance should be attach to forming good habbits
To begin with .people who know how to form good habits will be able to ensure strong academic performance. As an illustration，those students who prioritize their commitments，schedule their time reasonably and avoid procrastination拖延 are certain to make steady gains in their grades. What is more,forming excellent habits can help us to develop confidence and maintain a healthy mental state. In other words.forming good habits can play a major role in keeping us spiritually fit and reducing the pressure and anxiety that accompany modern life for most people
举例·解释 观点加论证
五大角度六大论证
原因
2005 many factors have attribute to this phenomenon，but there stand out
经济 over the past forty years，China has experienced a rapid economic development,which help many chinese family become well-off.As a result that young people from those families could aford to buy concert tickets and products endorsed by their idol
社会媒体 many business hype(炒作）stars by talking about them a lot on social media，making them looks all-around全能，in fact they may be not
社交关系 most idol worshippers tend to share with their friends how excellent and charming they are. imaginably,it takes only a couple of days for some of their friends to become devoted fans死忠粉 of their stars（虚拟结果）
背景 ：政治 文化 科技 经济 社会环境媒体 关系利益
with the development of---- with the spread of media--- with the popularity of----
结果
doing---could be faced with---，or end up this would be unfortunate and indirectly cause to
讲事实 there is no denying the fact that：社会普遍现象 the delicate flower is naturally associated with young people,to the specific:---
分类论证
有对比递进按对比递进---不赡养父母 一类：没钱 二类：有钱没时间 三类有钱有时间没道德
定义解释
what is---? people usually defines it as ---
数据统计（虚构）
Acoording to recent survey/ data/figure study by the Chinese Academy of Social Science ,70% of teenagers in China worship superstars
举例 自己个人例子-考研 /中国革命/共产党
the history of China in the last half of the 20th century has provided a whole pack of vivid and convincing experiences，both of success and failures in that consideration（在此方面）
there is no denying that all things are difficult before they are easy. this is because people usually meet many challenge when they start doing something new. Therefore, the rate of possibility that people have a good start to overcome these challenge and sucess largely increases Take students preparing for postgraduate entrance examination for example. when they start enlarging english vacabulary ,they likely to be puzzled by many confusing words---cooperation and corporation,for examle. However,this problem can be solved by learning word-forming theory .Consequently,to those who have know the theory before,memorizing the 5500 words is only a matter of time.
比较对比
同向 on the one hand ,tourism,as a multibillion-dollar business,is booming everywhere.some poeple,under the benifit that tourism serves an engine of ecnomic growth,seem to ignore its negative effects on the enviroment.Nevertheless,these are not concerns that we can strug off lightly 我们必须充分关注这些现象 on the other hand，tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment that we are living on ：our water is polluted，our ecological system is disturbed，and our natural resources has been excessively used
on the one hand ，mosamic cultures are part of universal heritage of humanity and are powerful means of bringing together diverse peoples and social groups.consequently,cultural integration has become an indispensible as a means of promoting further culture development and perservation on the other hand,for china and many further repidly developing country,there is a danger that age-old customs and traditions may become lost in the shadows of modernization
To begin with ,thinking postively or negatively may lead to different outcomes.Thinking positively is key to sucesss.(主要观点） when we start to do a thing,we may meet some situation that is not what we want want or even the worst we can ever iamgine.(前提） At this time ,if we think negatively we may give up the hope that we can do it well at the distance of one step from the success.on the contrary, with positively thinking，we will be able to comfort difficulty and never give up until we acquire success,What is more,thinking negatively may result in unbelievable damage.in real life,we always meet some barries as we grow up.some poeple cannot face the hardship in their lives end uo killing themselves(对比 论证加例子）
假设
On account of the quickening peace of life, competition is becoming increasingly fierce in all walks of life,imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment 现象 We must maintain persistence and perseverance in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed.suppose we are inclined to over estimate our rivials or problem and neglect our ability,we will become hesitant and doubtful of ourselves ,unable to fulfill evem a simple task