刘晓艳写作笔记

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写作成文

• 图表作文
  • 描述图标+中心总结
    • 第一二句话用用主语从句引出描述图表
      • What proves common knowledge is that+描述图表：图表作文一定是一幅图两个主体两个动作，并且这两个主体是确定的:要么是什么什么的数量增加∨减少，要么是百分比什么的、要么是百分比的什么做了什么事
    • 第三句引出文章中心的过渡语
      • The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that
        • 视频5，1小时4个分钟，12选一选的
    • 第四句话，文章中心需要自己写
      • 再用双重否定、插入语、强调句型进行加工
    • What proves common knowledge is that the quantity of urban citizens, from the year of 1990 to 2010, rocketed by 370 million sharply. On the contrary,the number of rural individuals,in the same period,shrank to 680 million dramatically.
      • 图表作文把状语写在主谓之间，作插入语使用
      • 增加
        • increase
        • rise
        • rocket
        • 动词表达
        • increase
        • on the rise
        • 名词表达
      • 减少
        • decrease
        • shink
        • decline
      • 大幅度的
        • sharp
        • dramatic
      • 慢慢的
        • slightly
        • modestly
    • The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that
    • It is a growing number of farmers that tend to pour into big cities in recent 20 years.
      • tend to
      • be likely to do
      • 图表常用的词
  • 第二段
  • 第三段：总结段，四句话
  • 和图画作文一样
• 图画作文
  • 第一段
    • 图画描述+中心总结，三到四句话
    • 第一二句话，用主语从句引出描述图画：What proves common knowledge is that
      • 一幅图一个主体两个动作：in the cartoon,sb(定),doing sth次要动作（定、状）,is doing sth （主要动作）（定状）
      • 一幅图两个主体，两个动作： in the cartoon ,Sb1(定) is doing sth1(定、状); and/but sb2(定) is doing sth2（定/状）
      • 两幅图： in the former picture ,Sb1(定) si doing sth1(定、状); and/but in the latter one sb2(定) is doing sth2（定/状）
    • 第三句：引出文章中心的过渡语
      • The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that
        • 视频5，1小时4个分钟，12选一选的
    • 第四句：中心总结
      • We should do sth
      • We should never do sth
      • Sth is very important
      • Sth is very serious
      • 被动、as..as..、so...that、比喻、强调句型，五选一
        • 再用插入语，双重否定或者是强调句型稍作加工
    • What proves common knowledge is that a host of graduates (young as well as confused),standing on the cross road of their life, are confronted with four choises (such as hunting for jobs and going abroad ).It is apparent that the author of the drawing tries to reveal to us : It is option that should be argued exceedingly indispensable by children and adults.
      • such as hunting for jobs and going abroad是定语，写不出来可以写万能定语
  • 第二段
    • 第一句：引出原因分析的句型
      • There be
      • A multitude of experts and professors would agree that the issue has its deep roots as follows.
      • 书128页，10选一。先对这句话进行单词替换，再用插入语或双重否定或者强调句型进行加工
      • A multitude of experts and professors would never fail to agree that the issue has its deep roots as follows.
    • 第二、三、四：具体原因分析（见段落）
  • 第三段：总结段，四句话
    • 第一句话
      • In other words
      • To be short
      • To put it crudely
      • 简而言之
      • 被动、as..as..、so...that、比喻、强调句型、If虚拟语气
        • 再用插入语，双重否定或者是强调句型稍作加工
    • 二三句话，采取措施
      • 双重否定
        • never fail to
      • 虚拟语气，他人采取措施
        • It seems urgent that
    • 第四句，喊口号
      • 总结法
      • 建议法
      • 反问法（最推荐）
        • Should not we place great emphsis on the topic of respecting the elderly.
• 段落
  • 段落论证方式
    • 定义和解释
      • 该原因分析在第一个原因分析的时候使用
      • 模板：Sth1 is sth2 which means that
        • sth2
          • a severe global issue
            • 严重的全球性问题
          • Chinese traditional virtue
          • a social pervasive trend
            • 社会流行趋势
          • an active/negative mentality
            • 积极或消极的心态
          • a hot social subject
            • 热门社会话题，考研的内容都是热门话题
        • which means that +三个主语一致的简单句+when引导的时间状语从句
      • 什么是追星？
      • Pursuing stars is a popular trend among youngsters
      • which means that
      • we buy their cds,
      • we take part in their concerts
      • and we learn to sing their songs
      • when we are still young.
      • 什么是孝敬父母？
      • Respecting parents is a Chinese traditional virtue
      • which means that
      • we buy gifts for them,
      • we wash clothes for them,
      • and we cook delicious for them
      • when they grow old.
      • 什么是乐观？
      • Optimism is an active attitude
      • which means that
      • one keeps smile,
      • one fails to be afraid of frustrations
      • and one is brave to face any diffculties
      • even when he lives in the drain pitifully.
        • 甚至我们可怜地生活在阴沟里
    • 举例
      • 可举小例子
        • 作文中只要出现复数名词，都可以考虑举小例子，一篇作文写一次就够了
        • I love reading masterpieces
        • such as Gone with the Wind,Pride and Prejudice and Little Prince
      • 可举大例子
        • for example
          • although a mutitude of cases can support my simple view,the following one is the most favorable
        • I , the other day,had a high fever
        • because it rained heavily last night,unfortunately, no families or roommates took care of me
        • at the moment,a dormitory assistant entered to give me some medicines.
        • then, i recovered the next day
        • so the story vividly tells us a truth that loving heart seems like a lamp which will become lighter in darkness.
        • 举例一般都用一般过去式，一定使用自己拿的准的单词和语法，在单词正确的基础上尽量准确，注意逻辑关系词的正确使用d
    • 引用名人名言
      • Once, there seemed a writer
        • 把seem和writer换掉
      • who has gained great reputation
      • in 国家 named 人名
        • 写个小国家
      • stating that: 推荐句型:
        • the more .. the more
        • as ... as...
        • so...that..
          • 最好写成倒装
        • if
          • 虚拟语气
        • 比喻
        • 选一个就行
    • 数据列举
      • in light of
        • 根据
      • the recent
        • 最近的
      • survey
        • 统计
      • by the department of Social Science in Sichuan University
        • 去阅读理解里抄一个机构名
      • an increasing number of 人 或者 the majority of 人
      • hold that +文章中心主题
  • 如果能用中文想到原因分析，就用以下句型写原因分析
    • the more...the more
    • not only ...but also
    • 同位语从句
    • although让步状语从句
    • if 虚拟语气
    • 如果某个原因分析写出来比较短的话，就加定语或状语把这句话拉长，如果加不来就用which引导的非限制性定语从句，或者是万能状语把它拉长
  • 如果用中文想不到原因分析，就用以下的论证方式
    • 定义和解释
    • 举例
    • 名人名言
    • 数据统计
  • 原因分析一般写三点，建议最好从句型里选2个，从论证方式中选一个
    • 比如，the more..the more+万能状语、定语+ 举例(其中最好的一个是)+ 同位语从句（the evidence that +manifests that）
  • 结构词
    • 首先
      • First of all
        • 小作文
      • What appears as the first reason is that
        • 大作文
    • 其次
      • moreover
      • in addition
    • 最后
      • at last
      • in the end