考研英语 大作文一

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大作文

第一段 七行以内 三句

单图题

第一句：大体信息：谁，在干吗？（★时间，地点，背景

模版A：As is graphically/explicitly/satirically/picturesquely/ironically/ movingly/encouragingly depicted/demonstrated/revealed/portrayed/reflected/displayed in the illustration/caricature/cartoon/photo, A is doing sth/ (A and B) are doing sth *+ adv.

As is graphically and satirically displayed in the caricature, four siblings are kicking a football, which symbolizes their old father.

模板B：倒装句 Graphically/explicitly/satirically/picturesquely/ironically/ movingly/encouragingly depicted/demonstrated/revealed/portrayed/reflected/displayed in the illustration/caricature/cartoon/photo is/are sb/sth, who is/are doing sth + adv. 注意：主句和从句的主谓一致；不规则的复数变化：man-men

Graphically displayed in the photo is a young and beautiful American girl, who, with a bright and sweet smile on her face, is dressed in an amazingly exquisite traditional Chinese costume. 注意口红原则的运用：并列、修饰开头句锦上添花

修饰方法

1.插入表情

sb/who, with a ・・・on his/her face, is••• •・・a young man, who, with a confident and triumphant smile on his face, is running towards the finish line of his challenge.

常见表情 喜:bright/confident/victorious/patient/proud smile （adj.+n） or smile with confidence/pride/satisfaction （v.+介短做状） 怒：seems furious/worked up 哀 ：looks miserable/depressed/melancholy/disheartened sighs in despair cries loudly 冷漠：look at sth with indifference/contempt 漠地；鄙视地） 困惑：seems bewildered about 专心 ：seems totally absorbed 疲劳：looks absolutely exhausted 积极：looks positive

…a young man, who, with a confident and triumphant smile on his face, is running towards the finish line of his challenge.

2.定语从句/分词，来讲名词的特征、属性、突出点

As is graphically and satirically displayed in the caricature, four siblings are kicking a football, which symbolizes their old father.

Graphically depicted in the illustration are many young men, who, all staring at the computer screens in front of them, are sitting on a giant net. Graphically depicted in the illustration is a hot pot, which, with the soup boiling, arouses our appetite.

3.带伴随的不重要动作…while doing sth

As is explicitly and graphically depicted in the illustration, two young men are boating on a lake while reading books and talking with each other.

4.同位语，说人、物的身份地位

Graphically and explicitly displayed in the set of photos above are two young men, who are big fans of David Beckham, one of the most famous and handsome football stars in the world.

第二句

细节描述的四种方法

ａ静态图，列举图中的名词

1、一一列举+总结类别

Under scrutiny, we can see that there are ・../ sb does ••- / sth has …，including A, B, C, and other 同类总結.

Under scrutiny, we can see that her accessories, including a pair of long earrings, a stunning hat with amazing pearl ornaments, and a complicated and eye-catching necklace, are all characteristic of Chinese traditional style.

Under scrutiny, we can see that the lake has already been covered by a mass of wastes, including used bottles of beverages, discarded boxes of instant noodles, fruit peels, fish bones, and other stinky garbage.

2、分类+每类典型

Under scrutiny, we can see that what are being cooked are not meat nor vegetables. They are a variety of Chinese and foreign celebrities, artistic works and culture, including Einstern, Lao Ni, The Swan Lake, Buddhism, etc.

b动态图：图里的动作至少有三个（不算表情）

要有: 大体动作谁在做。用于第一句话） 细节主要动作 （用于第二句话主干） 细节次要动作 （用于第二句话伴随，可前可后可插）

Doing/done C, sb does B. Sb does B, doing/done C. Sb, doing/done C, does B.

Kicked away by his eldest son, the old father, who seems miserable and helpless, is rolling on the playground; while his daughter, stretching her arms widely, is ready to protect against the intrusion of the ball. Meanwhile, the other two sons are looking at this scenario with indifference.

Picturesquely and encouragingly displayed in the cartoon are two handicapped men, both of whom have only one leg. However, supporting each other firmly, they are walking normally and swiftly, with two pairs of crutches left behind.

C.动静結合

和主体有明显位置关系的细节，所表现的意义

方位介词+主体+is/are+主体二+which展升细节 Under/Above/Around+主体+is/are…，which

Around the oil lamp is the darkness, which makes the light of the lamp brighter.

Behind these two handicapped men are two pairs of crutches, which used to sustain them to stand and walk.

In front of each of them is a computer, which they use to commucate with the people who just sit next door.

D.对话图：情绪+对话内容

一句用直接引语，一句用间接引语 有的时候可以用动作做主句，说的内容做伴随 ——如果动作是不可持续的词

The man on the left(, with a・../doing...,) says + 修饰 ，while the man on the right,who …remarks 加修饰 that he intends to… 修饰"说”,可以用副词，如desperately, patiently 也可以用介词短语，如in despair, with patience "

The man on the left says meserably, “it’s all screwed up!’, while the man on the right, rushing to get the bottle up, remarks with a broad smile that he feels lucky because there is still some water left in the bottle.

The boy on the right suddenly sits on the steps, saying that he is too tired to continue the climb; while the boy on the left gives his companion a bottle of water, and encourages him to continue the journey after a rest.

第一段最后一句：字幕、标题翻译或者大意总結

a.字幕/标题

Under the cartoon, the caption reads:" ”・ 1.Under the cartoon, the caption reads: "Choosing Courses”. 2.Under the cartoon, the caption reads: " The flowers in the greenhouse can not weather the storm.

如果是概括性的标题，就首尾词+实词大写（1）；如果是完整的一句话，就 首词大写（2）。

b.无标题:可成说,图中的人们代表的现象

Conspicuously, these two young men are representative of numerous modern young people who chase pop stars in an unreasonable way.

c.无标题，或者标题你觉得无关紧要，用强调句型突出现象

Conspicuously, it is her fondness of China and its culture that adds to her beauty and charm. Undoubtedly, it is the greed of mankind that has given rise to the alarming decline of marine resources.

Conspicuously, it is her fondness of China and its culture that adds to her beauty and charm.

Undoubtedly, it is the greed of mankind that has given rise to the alarming decline of marine resources.

双图题 对比为主（一图双主体往往也是这种） 同方向06/07/14 时间推移 00

ａ对比：通过双图/两边的动作的区别，来突出不同的态度

第一句

(1)What arrests my attention most in the caricatures is the drastic difference between modern people's attitudes towards sth/doing sth.

（1）As is explicitly demonstrated in the set of the caricatures, modern people/parents/adolescents' /college students ' ways of doing sth/approaches to sth/attitudes towards sth may vary vastly.

第二句

左右图

In the left picture is a boy (are A and B), who, doing B, is/are doing A / be adj/ says---. However, in the right one, another ** is doing C and he---.

左右边

The boy on the left/right does sth, doing ***. Then/however , the boy on the right/ left, + 表情、情绪、动作，does sth/says that../encourages his friend by doing••-

双时间

The first picture shows that in 时间 A, there are *** while 反面情况.However, in the second one,主体，after ** years, has + 变化， and另外一主体情况。

b・双图同方向：写双图/双边的不同，来说明同一现象。

The set of cartoons/photos/The caricature explicitly and picturesquely portray(s) a prevalent phenomenon that an increasing number of young people /the touching and warm love between. ••- In the left picture/On the left, , while in the right one is/are Under the illustrations, the caption reads:"

The caricature explicitly and picturesquely portrays a prevalent phenomenon that numerous modern young people oftentimes exaggerate the difficulty confronting them. So massive, from the goalkeeper's perspective, is the goal that he is by no means able to keep it. On the right side is his opponent, who considers the goalkeeper a giant and deems scoring the goal as a mission impossible. Apparently, it is the lack of confidence that gives rise to this embarrassing and awkward situation.

第一段最后一句：字幕、标题翻译或者大意总結

a.字幕/标题

Under the cartoon, the caption reads:" ”・ 1.Under the cartoon, the caption reads: "Choosing Courses”. 2.Under the cartoon, the caption reads: " The flowers in the greenhouse can not weather the storm.

如果是概括性的标题，就首尾词+实词大写（1）；如果是完整的一句话，就 首词大写（2）。

b.无标题:可成说,图中的人们代表的现象

Conspicuously, these tuo young men are representative of numerous modern young people who chase pop stars in an unreasonable way.

c.无标题，或者标题你觉得无关紧要，用强调句型突出现象

Conspicuously, it is her fondness of China and its culture that adds to her beauty and charm. Undoubtedly, it is the greed of mankind that has given rise to the

第二段 深层意义阐释段

子主题

中心句

The cartoon, simple as it looks, transmits a thought- provoking message that……注意主谓一致

Although the cartoon looks/the pictures look simple, it transmits/they transmit a thought-provoking message that + 图的目的.

让步状语从句倒装 Although + 主系表/主谓 主句 Adj/adv + as + 主系/主谓， 主句不变．

最后版本：The cartoon, simple as it looks, transmits a thought- provoking message that……

To our dismay, the phenomenon reflected in the cartoon is far from rare in the modern society. Numbers college students are confused about where their future lie when they are going to graduate. It can be said without fear of exaggeration that a mass of modern parents lack essential knowledge skills to nurture their kids. Stretching her arms widely, the daughter is ready to protect against the intrusion of the ball.

the phenomenon reflected in the cartoon, to our dismay, is far from rare in the modern society. (令我们沮丧的是。。。） Numbers college students, when they are going to graduate, are confused about where their future lie A mass of modern parents, it can be said without fear of exaggeration, lack essential knowledge skills to nurture their kids. （说一个很绝对的、听上去有点骇人听闻的事实时） The daughter, stretching her arms widely, is ready to protect against the intrusion of the ball.

that 后面的全文中心句

A.褒义： 1.为了。。（想一个好的远景），我们应该（按照图中的方法做） 2.我们应该。。。。。so that 会有什么好结果

1.… in order to be…/achieve…/realize…/do…, sb ought to…… 2.…sb ought to…… so that our society/they will be able to../young people can…

1.“途中”… in order to achieve their desired goals, young people need to develop persistence. 2.“选课进行时” …in order to acquire knowledge beneficial for their whole lifetime , college students should choose courses which can impart them with creative and practical knowledge, though these courses might look daunting. 2. “有书不如读书”… young people should attach more importance to reading books so that they can acquire knowledge and skills needed to create a bright future of their own.

毕业 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to realize our dreams and earn a good living, we ought to realize that there is nothing as an absolutely right way in our life, and we all have a variety of options in front of us.

B. 贬义 1.图中这个不好的行为对于。。。（一个好事）已经产生了很坏的影响。 2.其实某不好的现象在当代社会是非常常见的。 3.大家太常常关注某事的好，而忽视了它的坏。（科技超好用） 我们应该怎么做 + 最主要、概括的原因。（大的社会问题）

1.…A/Doing A has already made tremendously negative impacts on B. 2.…A/Doing A/the phenomenon that…, which sounds utterly/faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in our so-called civilized/… society. 3.…too often people focus on the benefits of A while taking its drawbacks for granted. 4.everyone is responsible for doing sth because…

1.（旅途之“余”）…the selfishness of humanity has already made tremendously negative impacts on our Mother tfature. 2.（旅途之“余”）..everyone is responsible for protecting our beautiful planet because it is the homeland to all of us. 2.(养老足球赛）…neglect of elderly parents, which sounds utterly ridiculous, has become far from rare in our so-called civilized society. 3.(手机桌上的聚餐) …too often people focus on the benefits of smartphone while taking its drawbacks for granted.

手机网 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that too often modern people focus on the benefits of the internet while taking its drawbacks for granted.

貌似“贬义”的图、有对比的图，可以转为褒义的来写。毕竟，讽刺的漫画，大多也是告诉我们该怎么做。

…in order to overcome the challenges, we ought to build/develop/boost self-confidence.

主体句

A 抽象优良意志品质型：分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好；(万能人群细分）

分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好； 考过：坚持、自信、乐观 有可能：耐心、好奇心、诚信 第一句：中心句。为了。。我们得坚持自信、乐观 第二句：过渡句。必须承认该品质对各个阶段都好。 第三句：对于学生，有了该品质，便能学习好、成绩好、提升自信。 第四句：对于工作党，这样的宝宝效率高、老板爱、升职快。 第五句：生活中，这样的人能力强，解决问题高超，朋友多。

A.抽象优良意志品质型：分三个阶段来讲改品质为啥好 The illustration, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to realize our dreams/achieve our goals/score a success in our life/…, we ought to develop A (self-confidence/curiosity/patience/…). A, it can not be denied, plays a key role in all the stages of people’s life. Firstly, students who have strong__ oftentimes have better academic performance, because it can drive them to improve efficiency, become more initiative, and always stay positive. Moreover, in the workplace, if an employee is__ , he can definitely create a good impression on his colleagues and superiors, thereby moving up the ladder more quickly. Besides, A helps a lot in our daily life, too. Those who have such personality are charming and attractive, and people around them are absolutely fond of making friends with them.

抽象意志品质类之： 好习惯，不拖延 The illustrations, simple as they seem, transmit a thought-provoking message that in order to achieve our desired goals, we ought to form a habit of taking action immediately. Such habit counts in almost every stage of our life. Firstly, students who show high power of execution generally have better academic performance, because they usually study more efficiently. Moreover, in the workplace, if an employee always finishes his tasks promptly , he can definitely create a good impression on his colleagues and superiors, thereby moving up the ladder more quickly. Besides, such habit helps a lot in our daily life, too. Those who have such personality are charming and attractive, and people around them are absolutely fond of making friends with them.

这些插图看似简单，却传达了一个发人深省的信息:为了达到我们想要的目标， 我们应该养成立即采取行动的习惯。这种习惯几乎在我们生命的每个阶段都很重要。首先，执行力强的学生通常学习成绩更好，因为他们通常学习效率更 高。此外，在工作中，如果一个员工总是能迅速完成他的任务，他肯定能给他的同事和上级留下好印象，从而更快地晋升。此外，这样的习惯在我们的日常生活中也有很多帮助。有这种性格的人很有魅力，周围的人都很喜欢和他们交朋友。

A.抽象意志品质类之作业练习：好奇心。 The illustrations, simple as they seem, transmit a thought-provoking message that in order to open up new worlds and bring excitement into our life, everyone ought to develop curiosity. Such strength, there is no exaggerating, counts in all stages in one’s lifetime. Firstly, students who display strong curiosity often have better academic performance, because they dare ask questions and explore the unknown. Secondly, in the workplace, curious employees are always observant of new ideas and able to see possibilities normally invisible, and they surely have the ability to climb up the ladders more quickly. Besides, curiosity helps a lot in our daily life, too. By no means is the lives of curious people boring, dull, and routine, which make people around them fond of making friends with them.

这些插图看似简单，却传达了⼀个发⼈深省的信息:为了开辟新的世界， 为我们的⽣活带来刺激，每个⼈都应该培养好奇⼼。毫不夸张地说，这种品质在⼈⼀⽣的各个阶段都有价值。⾸先，表现出强烈好奇⼼的学⽣往往有更好的学习成绩，因为他们敢于问问题，探索未知。其次，在⼯作场所，充满好奇⼼的员⼯总是能观察到新的想法，能够看到通常看不⻅的可能性，他们肯定有能⼒更快地往上爬。此外，好奇⼼在我们的⽇ 常⽣活中也有很⼤的帮助。好奇⼼强的⼈的⽣活绝不是⽆聊、枯燥和例 ⾏公事，这使得他们周围的⼈喜欢和他们交朋友。

超强提升句型

状语从句的省略～同时剩去从句的主系

1. confronted with difficulties, we are supposed to stay positive so that we can come up some solutions to bring these problems to their conclusions.

2.Although busy with earning a good living, young people are supposed not to ignore their parents entirely. Even occasional visits to their parents would help, because inadequate care is better than no care at all.

可能性句型

Moreover, if an employee is perseverant when facing challenging tasks, chances are high that his superior will be impressed and thus offer him quicker pay rise and promotion.

If a college student just get over with his study by choosing the easiest courses, chances are high that he will not be able to find a high-paying job and live a decent life.

If we keep turning a blind eye to environmental pollution, chances are high that our Mother tfature will severely punish us by taking away what we have.

二段思路B B.非常负面的现象：三个具体现象+三个具体后果（个数可变） 考过：破坏环境、过度开发、狂热追星、手机成瘾 有可能：AI/manless driving等科技的坏处、隐私泄露、保护主义 第一句：中心句：坏事很严重、很常见、我们只看到了好没看到坏 第二-四句：讲现象。可以细分对于人群：小孩、上班族、老年人 可以细分方面：对学习、对工作、对生活 可以细分场景：关于话题的三个具体场景的影响； 第五句：过渡句：然后，如果继续下去，会产生更多恶果。 第六句+：根据上面的细分分别讲恶果。

B. 纯负面的细分模版 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that sth, which sounds absolutely ridiculous, has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society. In our daily life, the stories of sb doing sth（普通常见现象） abound; on the social platforms, we can often see that + 网络普遍现象; people from time to time feel appalled by the news that + 听过的极端事件，完整主谓宾. Apparently, these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit. (青少年有关）/negatively impacting our traditional virtues（社会风气有关）/severely jeopardizing the development of … （文化交流、科技有关）. If we keep turning a blind eye to them, there will surely be more unexpected and uncontrollable consequences

养老足球赛 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that neglect of elderly parents, which sounds absolutely ridiculous, has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society. In our daily life, the stories of sons and daughters fighting for their parents’ wealth abound; on the social platforms, we can often see that some old people are abandoned or even abused by their kids; people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some elderly people die alone at home because they lack the care and attention from their children. Apparently, these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit, and negatively impacting our traditional virtues.

这幅漫画看似简单，却传达了一个发人深省的信息:在这个所谓的文明社会，忽视年迈的父母，这听起来绝对荒谬，已不再罕见。在我们的日常生活中，儿女们为父母的财富而奋斗的故事比比皆是;在社交平台上，我们经常可以看到一些老人被孩子遗弃甚至虐待;有些老人因为缺乏子女的照顾和照顾而孤独地在家中死去，这一消息令人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经引起了一系列的不好后果，导致越来越多的年轻人开始效仿，并对我们的传统美德产生了负面影响。

追星 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that worshipping pop stars crazily, which sounds faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in this era. In our daily life, the stories of pupils stealing money to buy their idols’ CD or concerts’ tickets abound; on the social platforms, we can often see that numerous adolescents curse each other because their idols are rivals; people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some kids even save money to buy incredibly expensive birthday presents, such as a car or even an aprartment, to their idols. Apparently, these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit, and negatively impacting our social tendency.

这幅漫画看似简单，却传达了一个发人深思的信息:疯狂崇拜流行明星在这个时代已经不再罕见，虽然这听起来有点荒唐。在我们的日常生活中，学生偷钱买偶像的CD或音乐会的门票的故事比比皆是;在社交平台上，我们经常可以看到无数的青少年因为偶像是对手而互相咒骂;有些孩子甚至会省钱给偶像买昂贵的生日礼物，比如车甚至是房子，这让人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经造成了一系列的影响，导致更多的年轻人开始效仿，并对我们的社会风气产生了负面影响。

沉迷手机 The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that the addiction to smartphones, which sounds faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in this era, especially among young people. In our daily life, the stories of students failing to pass their exams for being obsessed with mobile games abound; at cafes, restaurants or bars, we can often see that numerous young people, just like screen- addicted zombies, stare at the phones, totally ignoring their friends who sit beside them; people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some young people even cut out their organs and sell them so that they can have enough money to buy the phones of latest models. Apparently, these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit, and placing normal interpersonal relationships in jeopardy.

这幅看似简单的漫画传达了一个发人深省的信息，即对智能手机的沉迷，虽然听起来有点可笑，但在这个时代已经不再罕见，尤其是在年轻人中。在我们的日常生活中，学生因为沉迷于手机游戏而未能通过考试的故事比比皆是;在咖啡馆、餐馆或酒吧，我们经常可以看到无数的年轻人，就像沉迷于屏幕的僵尸一样，盯着手机，完全忽视坐在他们身边的朋友;一些年轻人甚至把自己的器官割下来卖掉，这样他们就有足够的钱买最新型号的手机，这一消息让人们不时感到震惊。显然，这些现象已经造成了一系列的影响，导致更多的年轻人开始效仿，并将正常的人际关系置于危险之中。

C. 例子的写法 如果文章要求要举例子是必须举的 而且要主要要求的段落（一定要读题！！！） 反之，可以不举 当然，也可以穿插短例子在文章里当论据

第一句：中心句 第二句：这个现象的例子不胜枚举。 第三句：那我举一个吧。从前。。。。/有一个。。。第四句：人、事、物的发展（按照文章的主题） 第五句：人事物的结局（必须和原样强对比、有抓马） 第六句：这个例子展现出的道理（中心句改写）

第一句：The cartoon, simple…, transmits…that…far from rare. 第二句：The examples concerning this phenomenon are too numerous to list. 第三句：For instance, sb used to…/ there was… 第四句：Then, ,,,, 第五句：In the end,…… 第六句：This example subtly demonstrates that……

方法一

长例子

Simple as the cartoon seems, it transmits a thought-provoking message that the reflected phenomenon of young people chasing idols crazily is far from rare and detrimental to young people’s psychological growth. Examples are abundant to illustrate this viewpoint. Numerous people must have heard the story about Yang Lijuan, who used to worship Andy Lau, one of the most famous singers and actors in China. In order to see Andy’s concert, she sold her apartment, which forced her father to take his own life. Although this case is a bit extreme, other instances are still alarming. Take a girl in my class as an example. She always compels us to vote for her idol, and she never stops talking about her dream that one day he will marry her. However, she always gets terrible scores in the exams, and we do not like talking with her at all.

如果你很会编花篮，二段两个例子，一名人例子，一周围例子，叠加使用，也是非常好的solution

虽然这幅漫画看起来很简单，但它传达了一个发人深省的信息，即所反映的年轻人疯狂追逐偶像的现象并不罕见，而且对年轻人的心理成长有害。可以说明这一观点的例子不胜枚举。想必很多人都听说过杨丽娟的故事，她曾经崇拜中国最著名的歌手和演员之一刘德华。为了看安迪的演唱会，她卖掉了自己的公寓，这迫使她的父亲自杀。虽然这种情况有点极端，但其他情况仍然令人担忧。以我班上的一个女孩为例。她总是强迫我们投票给她的偶像，她从未停止谈论她的梦想，有一天他会娶她。然而，她总是在考试中取得很糟糕的成绩，我们根本不喜欢和她说话。

The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that worshipping stars crazily, which sounds faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society. The examples concerning this phenomenon are too numerous to list. For instance, there is a young girl named Yang Lijuan. Like countless adolescents, she had her own idol. In order to see Andy Lau, the most remarkable singer and actor in China, she sold her apartment to raise funds so she could go to HongKong in the hope of seeing her idol. In the end, her father committed suicide because of the psychological and financial burdens imposed by his daughter’s insane behaviors. This actual story tragically demonstrates that the irrational way of chasing stars may breed unforeseeable and uncontrollable consequences, which may even become life-long regrets for some young souls.

这幅漫画看似简单，却传达了一个发人深省的信息:在这个所谓的文 明社会里，疯狂崇拜明星的现象并不少见，虽然这听起来有些荒 谬。关于这一现象的例子不胜枚举。例如，有一个年轻的女孩叫杨丽娟。像无数的青少年一样，她也有自己的偶像。为了见到中国最杰出的歌手和演员刘德华，她卖掉了自己的公寓来筹集资金，这样她就可以去香港，希望见到她的偶像。最后，她的父亲自杀了，因为他的女儿的疯狂行为给他带来了心理和经济负担。这个真实的故事悲剧性地告诉我们，追求明星的非理性方式可能会产生不可预见和不可控制的后果，甚至可能成为一些年轻人一生的遗憾。

短例子的写法： For example, A, who/which used to…., became/did…. because….

For example, Yang Lijuan, a girl who used to live a normal life, made her father commit suicide, because in order to see her idol, she secretly sold the house their parent bought.

For example, my younger brother, who used to be an ambition boy when he was in his high school, became lazy and aimless, because he chose some courses which required little home assignment and whose contents were out of date, making him less and less motivated.

超短例子：如果你知道某个相关名人的相关实际的话。

The example of Yang Lijuan, whose father commited suicide because his daughter was crazy about her idol, can best illustrate this viewpoint.

The example of Madame Curie, who discovered an scientifically important matter after thousands of failures, can best illustrate this viewpoint.

例子的写法二：假设的例子 1.If 假设出一个如题的情景，＋可能发生什么结果？ 2.Suppose 一个如题的情景＋设问（你会怎么做？）＋解释回答

If a kids suddenly falls in love with a star, what will probably happen? He may begin to collect all the information about him, which will waste a lot of time; he may buy his CDs, watch his movies, and go to his concerts, which will cost a lot of money; then, the topics of conversation between him and his friends will centre about him, which can upset his friends. Even worse, his friends may dislike this star, which can rupture the friendship.

如果一个孩子突然爱上了一个流行歌星，可能会发生什么?他可能会开始收集关于他的所有信息，这将浪费大量的时间;他可能会买他的cd，看他的电影，去他的音乐会，这将花费很多钱;然后，他和朋友之间的话题就会以他为中心，这就会让他的朋友感到不安。更糟糕的是，他的朋友可能不喜欢这个明星，这可能会破坏友谊。

Suppose one of your dorm mates is a pessimistic person and he always looks at the bad side of everything. When it rains, he is always worried about collecting the clothes rather than appreciating the beauty of rains; when the teacher imparts abstruse knowledge, he only complains about the difficulty rather than be content with acquiring new knowledge. What will you probably do to him? I am afraid that you will try your best to avoid even talking with him for fear of letting him ruin your mood and positivity. Common sense informs us that pessimism is so destructive that it will do nothing but sabotage everything.

假设你的一个室友是一个悲观的人，他总是看到事情不好的一面。下雨的时 候，他总是担心收集衣服，而不是欣赏雨的美丽;当老师传授深奥的知识时， 他只是抱怨困难，而不是满足于获得新的知识。你可能会对他做什么?我怕你会尽量避免和他说话，怕他会破坏你的情绪和积极性。常识告诉我们悲观是如此具有破坏性，它只会破坏一切。

万能诡辩

贬义的文章： 第一句：图的目的，揭示很严重、很常见第二句：给一个具体的、有概括性的现象 第三、四句：双原因解释为什么会有这个现象 第五句：这样下去要不得 第六句：威胁句型：如果。。。，就很有可能。。。

1. 万能诡辩模板 （贬义）： The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that ……. tfo matter in our daily or on the social platforms, we can often see that……. This is partly due to the fact that……, but also because……./ tfot only does A…, but, because……, B……. However, this phenomenon is utterly detrimental to……. If……, chances are high that…….

The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that the addiction to smartphones, which sounds faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in this so-called civilized society, especially among young people. tfo matter in our daily or on the social platforms, we can often see that numerous adolescents waste a mass of time on mobile games, short videos, and online stories, at the cost of their study and normal social life. This is partly due to the fact that a majority of modern young people are the single child of their family and their parents often spoil them, tolerating them to do whatever they want, but also because the social media always hype the power and charm of smartphones, thereby making people crazier about them. However, this phenomenon is utterly detrimental to young people’s mental health. If they spend more and more time in the virtual world instead of interactive with people in real life, chances are high that they will be turned into screen- addicted zombies and be deprived of the ability to live a normal life.

双原因，最好从两个不同的出发点来写： a.个人-外在（他人、社会、媒体等） b.物质-精神（由浅到深） 一个事物的攻受双方

a.个人-外在（他人、社会、媒体等） tfot only are most modern young people the single child in their family, which makes their parents spoil them, but, because social media always hype the charm and wealth of idols, the life of stars looks exceedingly mysterious and enchanting to these kids, whose life is mostly empty and lonely.

b.物质到精神 This is partly due to the fact that modern parents have become increasingly wealthy and they are more than happy to give their children money as long as these kids do not spend money on very bad things, such as gambling, but also because most kids are the single child in their family, thereby living a relatively boring and lonely life.

C. 一个事物的攻受双方 not only are most young people the single child in there family, thereby living a relatively boring and lonely life, but, because contemporary idols are mostly in possession of both stunning appearances and outstanding talents, modern pop stars ooze irresistible charm on their fans, making these kids frantic about them.

双原因总结： 1.说是“双原因”，每个原因结构里还可以并列； 2.原因可以带结果：…, thereby making…; 3.原因还能有原因，…but, because…, … 4.日常中要习惯多角度、多层次地分析常见现象的原因。

2. 万能诡辩(褒义）： 第一句：图的目的：为了。。。我们应该 第二句：现实却不是如此+一个现实的样子 第三、四句：双原因 第五句：这样下去要不得/这个情况真有害 第六句：威胁句型：如果。。。，就很有可能。。。

The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to achieve our desired goals and achieve success in our life, we ought to form a habit of finishing our tasks as soon as we can. However, the reality is something else. A considerable number of people, especially young men, have low execution power and always keep postponing their tasks until the last second. This is partly due to the fact that numerous young people are spoiled by their wealthy parents, thereby becoming less and less motivated about earning a good life of their own, but also because there are a variety of temptations ranging from online games and videos to parties and diverse activities in their life, distracting them from finishing their assignments sooner rather than later. But the lack of execution power is extremely detrimental to everybody’s life. If one is used to delaying the tasks that ought to be fulfilled quickly, chances are high that he will pass up a lot opportunities that can make his life more spectacular.

一些常见的理由：

1.个体、内在：

父母有钱、独生子女，因此有钱、孤独、被宠、执行力低（low power of execution)、独立、缺乏动力（less motivated） 追求轻松、空闲、效率、方便、节约、从众、好工作、更好的生活 想交朋友、没朋友、常追星、诱惑多（特别是网络） 人性的恶（evils in the human nature): 自私、懒惰、贪婪 普世价值观（universal values）：孝顺（show filial obedience to）、勤奋（diligence） 正直（integrity）、良心（conscience）

2.外在

家长：富有、爱纵容、忙于工作而不管、不急需孩子赚钱养家、支持梦想老师与学校：多沟通、多引导、多信任、主动地做出安排、调整、新课程媒体：炒作与放大（always hype sth）、应起到监督作用（should act as a monitor for…)、隐私的窥探（invade privacy)、广泛传播（go viral）、信息过量（information overload）、假新闻（ fake news）、虚假宣传（misleading propaganda and false information） 政府：推出有利的政策（favorable policies）、更严格的措施（tougher restrictions)、鼓励与补贴（encourage and subsidize sb/sth）

最后一段 总结 褒义（意志品质等）： 总结优点+ 展望未来（Only in this way) 贬义（万能诡辩段等）：提出两个解决之道

A.褒义（意志品质等）： 总结两个优点（+展望未来*） So adj, to sum up, is A that it not only helps/enables/ facilitates/makes it possible for us to/boosts/benefits/ enhances…, but also……. Only when……can we/this society/younger generations/this planet become more…

So important, to sum up, is optimism that it not only helps us to stay positive no matter what we do, but also provides us with infinite power to come up with solutions to bring any difficulty to its conclusion. Only when a person masters optimism can he become fearless and invincible.

如果前面写长了，最后一段则简单总结： A/Doing A, to sum up, is of unparalleled importance to everyone. Only in this way can we + 好的结果 Developing curiosity, to sum up, is of unparalleled importance to everyone. Only in this way can we push our limits and actualize our dreams.

B.贬义的文章 or 万能诡辩段第二段讲了问题+可能的不好最后一段我们得做点什么鸭！ 第一句：我们要采取措施来变好、解决、预防、控制、引导第二、三句：措施一、二，要两个不同的主体 *第四句（如果还有格子）：Only when..can we句型

第一句：呼吁、警醒 Several measures, to sum up, should be taken to reverse this trend/ stop this trend from worsening/ stop this scenario from happening/bring this issue to its conclusion Everyone, to sum up, should do sth…

应该怎么做： To do so, A ought to do sth……, which can help… 谁应该做什么呢？

1.Parents（teachers) should encourage their kids more/ guide their children to do sth in a reasonable way/ spend more time with their kids so that…/ set a good example for their children by doing sth/

2Everyone should improve their awareness of sth/doing sth. 3Media should serve as a monitor for…/a bridge between…/ play a bigger part in promoting …. 4It is imperative for A to do sth.

A和B要一起努力： A and B ought to make joint/collective efforts to do sth… to create a better environment for kids to grow up happily. to guide children to use mobile phones in a reasonable way.

早该 ”句型里，没有“该”字！ It is high time that A did sth… It is high time that authorities concerned/our government took tougher action over sth/launched more favorable policies to support those who….

环保： To sum up, several measures can be taken to bring this issue to its conclusion. Firstly, it is imperative for social media and online platform to promote the necessity of conserving our nature and caring for the environment, because modern people get information mostly from the internet. Besides, it is high time that the authorities concerned launched tougher restrictions and punishment on pollution, which can be an effective deterrent to such behaviors.

意志品质文章结尾之：我们要变好： Actually, there are a range of ways that can help us do sth. Firstly, we’d better make friends with those who…, because their positivity can gradually influence us; besides, setting a realistic goal helps, too. Try to avoid the fantasy of ‘becoming a ** person in a week’, and let’s make slow but steady progress towards our objective. 亦可：多读书、多请教、多尝试、失败不气馁

浮动主题

今年四篇必背： 19 途中 18 选课进行时 16 提要求不如做榜样 10 文化的火锅

作业：用万能诡辩来写“文化的火锅”The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a though-provoking message that in order to promote common development and prosperity for all countries, everyone should embrace and encourage the trend of globalization and take the essence from other nations’ culture. But sadly, the reality is not the case. Currently, a few political leaders in some countries just promote the nationalism and protectionism, hampering this trend. This is partly due to the fact that these countries are well- developed and wealthy, thereby wanting to retain their positions in the world, but also because some political leaders are rather selfish and narrow-minded, and they focus more on their own fame than the well- being of humanity.

作业：第三段例⼦段 踢球Actually, this is my second time to take this life-changing examination. Last year I failed miserably mainly because I exaggerated the difficulty of this challenge, thereby letting fear and anxiety get the best of me. However, this year I brushed aside the meaningless emotions and just focused on reviewing the contents every day. I liberated myself from my ‘enemy’ and felt way more confident about myself. I am positive what is waiting for me is the taste of victory.

作业： 手机桌上的聚餐的第二段。The cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought-provoking message that the addiction to smartphones, which sounds faintly ridiculous, has become far from rare in this era, especially among young people. In our daily life, the stories of students failing to pass their exams for being obsessed with mobile games abound; at cafes, restaurants or bars, we can often see that numerous young people, just like screen- addicted zombies, stare at the phones, totally ignoring their friends who sit beside them; people from time to time feel appalled by the news that some young people even cut out their organs and sell them so that they can have enough money to buy the phones of latest models. Apparently, these phenomena have caused a range of repercussions, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit, and placing normal interpersonal relationships in jeopardy.

作业二：与其提要求，不如做榜样 As is picturesquely and explicitly depicted in the set of cartoons, parents’ ways of educating their children may vary vastly. In the left caricature, a father orders his son to do homework, while he is watching TV, a cigarette in hand, However, in the right picture are another man and his son, who, sitting side by side, are studying together. Under the illustrations, the caption reads: “Setting a good example is way better than just calling shots.

作业：选课 Graphically and explicitly depicted in the cartoon is a college students, who is choosing courses for himself. In front of him is a computer, whose website offers two categories of lessons: the ones with up-to-date knowledge, higher difficulty, and innovative content, and those that are easier to pass with better scores and require less home assignments. Conspicuously, he is bewildered about what to choose.

正是… （强调）尤其环境类很好用！标题用废话也很好用 it is/was …that 后⚠️主谓一致 原因状语 it is because of …that

以小见大句型It is/are representative of number modern young people who (文章主题）．

缺乏自信：lack confidence