导图社区 雅思写作
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编辑于2024-07-03 09:48:46雅思写作
TASK 1
数据类图表
动态图(有时间推移)
introduction:改写题目
overview: 最大值/趋势
主体段两段
按上升趋势为一段,下降和不变为一段
按数值较大的为一段,数值较小的为一段
静态图(无时间推移)
introduction:改写题目
overview: 最大值
主体段两段
数值大的为一段,数值小的为一段
非数据类图表
流程图
introduction:改写题目
overview: 一共有多少步骤,第一步&最后一步
主体段
三要素:原材料、动作和工具
地图
introduction:改写题目
overview: 整体变化,如经历了许多变化、更多现代化、工业化了
主体段(要描述的地点、动作、方位和参照物)
第一个图为一段,第二个图为一段
适合只有新增的图
对比写法
遵循一定的方位顺序描述
TASK 2
观点类
单边讨论agree & disagree
推荐一边倒写法
introduction
改写题目 + 表明观点 I completely agree...
body paragraph 1
完全同意或者不同意的第一个理由
层进式论述
body paragraph 2
完全同意或者不同意的第二个理由
层进式论述
conclusion
重申观点
双边讨论
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
introduction
改写题目
表明观点: 最好就是赞同一边观点
body paragraph 1
让步段:论述不赞同的那边观点的合理性
层进式论述或并列式论述
body paragraph 2
转折段:论述赞同的那边观点
层进式论述
conclusion
重申观点
Do the advanatages outweigh the disadvantages? Is it a positive or negative trend?
introduction
改写题目
表明观点:利大于弊或弊大于利
body paragraph 1
让步段:弊端
并列式论述
body paragraph 2
转折段:利
并列式论述
conclusion
重申观点
报告类
利弊类
What are the advanatages and disadvantages?
introduction
改写题目
写作计划:In this eassay, both the advantages and disadvantages will be discussed.
body paragraph 1
罗列优点2-3个
并列式论述
body paragraph 2
罗列缺点 2-3个
并列式论述
conclusion
重申主题:虽然xx具有很多优点,但是缺点也不容忽视。
问题解决型
What are the problems? How can it be tackled?
introduction
改写题目
写作计划:This essay will look at the problems and propose some solutions.
body paragraph 1
罗列2-3个问题
并列式论述
body paragraph 2
罗列2-3个相对应的解决办法
并列式论述
conclusion
重申主题:尽管XX现象存在着问题,但是政府或个人可以寻求解决办法去应对。
What are the causes(reasons)? How can it be solved?
introduction
改写题目
写作计划:This essay will look at the reasons and propose some solutions.
body paragraph 1
罗列2-3个原因
并列式论述
body paragraph 2
罗列2-3个相对应的解决办法
并列式论述
conclusion
重申主题:尽管XX现象存在着问题,但是政府或个人可以寻求解决办法去应对。
混合类
What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
introduction
改写题目
分别回应这两问
body paragraph 1
罗列原因2-3个
并列式论述
body paragraph 2
回应是都我们已经习惯负面新闻& 回应是否更多正面的新闻被报导是好事
层进式
conclusion
重申introduction的第二个句子
并列式论述
主题句子:XX 有两个弊端。
第一个弊端是...
论述第一个弊端(举例论证+结果论证)
第一个弊端是...
论述第二个弊端(结果)
层进式论述 (论点-是什么-为什么- 举例子- 条件论证-结果论证等)
sentence 1:论点句子 Playing violent video games can cause changes in young people’s behavior.
sentence 2:解释论点句子中的抽象名词是什么 These games make it fun to fight and kill and also teach young people to use violence to solve problems.
sentence 3: 举例子:For example, in situations where there is a disagreement to be resolved, individuals often resort to believing that a confrontation is the most effective solution rather than considering other possible alternatives.
sentence 4: 解释论点句子为什么是对的 Actually, teenagers are immature mentally and are likely to mimic what they have seen on the games.
sentence 5: 结果:As a result, many young people become aggressive (有攻击性的) towards their teachers, classmates and even their parents.
动态图句式
动态图必备句式
过去式
There was an upward trend in +描述对象/There was an increase in +描述对象
描述对象 +saw/ witnessed/ experienced an increase.
描述对象 + increased.
将来时
There will be an increase +描述对象
描述对象+ is expected to increase to (上升到)...
Projections show that the number of XX is likely to increase by(上升了)..
上升&下降的表述词
上升
increase, climb, rise, grow, go up...
下降
decrease, dip, decline, fall...
描述幅度的词
slightly, gradually, considerably, significantly, enormously, sharply, dramatically
linking devices
The nunber of X started at + 数据;then, which is followed by, after that, after which, subsequently, finally, at the end of the period....
静态图句式
比较句式
最高级
比较级
原级
as... as...
其他句式
slightly more popular than...
which is larger than...
just ahead of
while or whereas引导的状语从句
compared to, compared with, in comparison to, in comparison with, as opposed to
地图句式
Introduction: The maps illustrate the changes to + 地方 (注意介词的使用是to)
overview 需要描述整体的变化,如更加现代化了,更能满足XX的需求等。
方位表述
in the east
on the western tip
on the west wide
to the east
in the middle
动作
新建
build, construct, erect
拆除
demonlish, tear down...
移位
relocate..
变大变小
increase/decrease in size
整体变化
urbanlized, industrialized...
流程图句式
introductory sentence:The given flow chart illustrates the steps involved in producing...
overview: Overall, there are a niumber of steps in the X production, starting from XXX to XXX.
Body Paragraph: 1.Then the powder is sent to a mixer, where it is mixed. 2.After the mixed powder is placed in a rotating heater, it is rotated and heated. 3. Once the mixture is sent to the conveyor belt, it is ground in a grinder into cement. 4. After being sent to the conveyor belt, the mixture is ground in a grinder into cement.
linking words
第一步: The first step is that...; Initially
中间步骤:then, after that, in the following step, subsequently, which is followed by...
最后一步:Finally, the final step is that...