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编辑于2022-04-14 16:53:00四级作文模版
正面话题
总纲
第一段:题干的重复描述 | 图画描述+主旨引出
第二段:我的观点+主题的好处(1...2...3...)+五大弘扬句式+举例(可加)
第三段:总结+呼吁 | 提建议 | 名人名言
秘诀:
正面弘扬词组:
1.be of great benefice / significance / importance + in+(时间/地点)
2 .A is key to B(名词/ doing sth )
3. A lay a solid foundation for sb to do sthe
4.A have a benefit effect on sthe
主题词多变:
1.a high quality of (self -confidence / self -respect )
2. diligence = hard work = strive for = make constant efforts = personal endeavor = perseverance
五大弘扬句式:
1 .主题词+ can transform (改变/ change) one’s way of thinking and living in a positive way, and an increasing number of people have become the practitioners of +主题词
2 the importance of +主题词 cannot be overstated.
3 in the face of A and A1, B is C
a= difficulties, failure, setbacks, challenges; helplessness and isolation ; painstaking task(艰苦的任务); suffering ; dilemma; ups and downs; ; drepession:
b=主题词
c= powefull weapon ; eventual option
举例:first and foremost, what I agree is that the importance of family education cannot be overstate during the personal growth of their children and in the face of painstaking tasks and dilemma, parenting guidance is a powerful weapon.
首先,我认为家庭教育在孩子成长过程中的重要性是不容忽视的。面对艰难的任务和困境,家庭教育是一个有力的武器。
4 . nothing is more important than +主题词+in sth / doing sth.
举例: nothing is more important than the high quality of honesty in our daily life
5 one could hardly attain adj (ultimate/ maximum ) success without + 主题词(it ;such quality)}
具体段落:
第一段:
图片/名人名言
惊讶!
what an+ adj(encouraging / touching moving / familiar / discouraging / annoying) scene is the cartoonist showing us!
如果是名人名言则:As the old saying gons"".后面 是一样的
描述图片(简单句)
Presented in the picture is a teacher (who is telling her student that reading is of great benefice to our daily life.
主题主旨:
It aims to illustrate that book learning is key to acquiring abundant knowledge.
万能句:
it aims to illustrate us that 主题词+ is a valuable contributor / element indispensable for us to succeed in life journey. academic performance and career prospect。
第二段:
通用
第一句:(表达我的观点):
From my perspective is that 主题词带来的具体的好处/五大弘扬句式.
第二句:
Such an (attitude / manner / spirit / method) can produce a lasting energizing effect, granting us a fruitftul, meaningful and fultflling life.
这样的(态度/态度/精神/方法)可以产生持久的激励效果,赋予我们丰硕的、有意义的和充实的生活。
第三段:
通用
第一句:(概况总结)
Based on the above points discussed above(to sum up ; in short;), we can draw a conclusion that
第二句:(呼吁正能量)
主题词+ lays a solid foundation for us to set specific goals overcome various obstacles and achieve ultimate success.
适合高贵品质:自信、友善成功....
主题词 + really counts(重要) in+this+adj(quick-paced/contemporary/modern)society(full of competition) to arm ourselves.
重要性的词组:people, especially the young, should 重要(focus on/ pay attention to ;highlight / underscore/ place a high value on /put emphasis on ) +主题词
名人名言
区别在第一句
1.A is to B as C is to D
2.主题词+is the catalyst(催化剂) for the development of individual and community
3.主题词+is the pyramidal cornerstone(金字塔) for success
负面话题
总纲
第一段+第二段(分析原因)+第三段(解决问题)。
第一段+第二段(提出建议)+第三段(总结)
第一段
负面话题
如:global warming; the employment difficulties
Today , the topic / issue /(inevitable / annoying / serious) question of +主题词 constantly (不断持续的) captured wide media attention, occupying the newspaper and wreaking-(引起)-horror-among people.
新趋势作文
如:app; online games; online classes; A robot
With the rapid growth brought about :引起 , have/has become increasingly important in our daily life
举例: With the rapid growth brought about by science and technology, the (widespread use / application of) +主题词 has become increasingly important in our daily life
第二段
分析问题,提出建议(具体题目而定)
第一种:第一段+第二段(分析原因)+第三段(解决问题)。
第一句:
It is crucial that we analyze the causes of this disturbing issue and explore the effective solutions. From my perspective the causes are multipe. 分析造成这一问题的原因,探索有效的解决办法至关重要。在我看来,原因是多方面的。
第二句:
第一步: 表示第一: firstly; first of al; in the first place; on the one hand; first and foremost; for one thing, 表示第二: Second, secondly, next, besides, in the second place, for another, furthermore, moreover, in addition, what is more, more importantly
第二步:原因分述的表达句 (引导句)。 1. one of the plausible reason is that 2. it largely seems to result from the fact that
如何找原因:
主体缺乏类(什么样的人缺乏什么样的东西)
主体:
大主体
国家 country ; society; nation
政府 the authority; Administration ; govermment
相关结构: relevant / concerning department.
媒体: the mass media
小主体
年轻人: teenager, youngsters, adolescents ; juvenile
老年人:the aging population ; the elder
职业: average citizen ; gradate; college students; salespeople;consumer ; head
缺乏:
lack (vt)= lack sth; = absence of =in short of = be in shortage of
忽视+ ignore =neglect = overlook / oversight / overpass
未能 fail to
东西:
有力的措施: powerful/ feasible / applicable / reasonable / effective measures / steps
健全的体制:Sound institutions
严格的监督: strict supervision
职业道德: professional ethical codes / values
优缺点: advantages and lameness
明确的目标: specific target /aim / goal
必要的警惕: necessarv vigilancel
正确的教育: correct / proper education
合成:公式
主体+缺乏+客体+ when dealing with this problem. consequently, such grave situation is getting furgent and irreversible.
处理:tackle; deal with ; do with;cope with ;handle; solve; approach;
adj: inevitable ;prevalent普遍的 ; hazardous危险的 ;severe
举例:
firstly, one of the reason is that our society lacks sound employment system when dealing with this problem。consequently , such grave situation is getting Ergent and itreversible. What's more it largely seems to result from the fact that the fresh graduates fail to realize their advantages and lameness.
首先,其中一个原因是我们的社会在处理这个问题时缺乏健全的就业制度。因此,这种严重的情况正在发生,它是可逆的。更重要的是,这在很大程度上似乎是由于这个事实,应届毕业生没有意识到他们的优势和跛足。
第二种:第一段+第二段(提出建议)+第三段(总结)
对于环境问题、社会问题的模版
To tackle the problem, it is surely necessary to complete well-enforced laws and regulations and firmly implement them. But rules alone will not be sufficient, which must be accompanied by persuasion and education that helps raise public awareness of( moral codes / social responsibility / environmental conservation). All these are beneficial, not detrimental; to +主题词 .(这些措施对主题词的 发展百利而无一害)。
其他问题提建议的写法
主体应该类(什么样的人应该做什么样的东西)
第一句(概况) : Given the severity of this phenomenon we have no option but to take immediate steps to address the situation . 鉴于这一现象的严重性,我们别无选择,只能立即采取步骤解决这一情况。
第二句:
提建议引导句
it is no exaggeration to say that (好不夸张的说)
动名词短语做主语+ is an effect way to +主题词
举例: choosing the public vehicles is an effective way to prevent the air quality from declining.
it is imperative / pivotal to do sth / that :做某事很有必要性
第三段:提出建议 / 总结
提出建议:负面问题第一种情况:
根据原因提建议,参照模板
总结:负面问题第二种情况:
第三步:In conclusion, there is no excuse for us to complain or escape when facing this situation. Conversely, we should try to find various solutions to solve the problem.(总结)
总之,面对这种情况,我们没有理由抱怨或逃避。相反地,我们应该试图找到各种解决方法来解决问题。
两面话题
第一段:
两面话题
When it comes to _ , some maintain/ hold/ view ,others argue the opposite is true.
举例:When it comes to online games, some maintain/ hold/ view that it can relieve our pressure during the dialy life, others argue the opposite is true。说到网络游戏,一些人认为它可以缓解我们日常生活中的压力,另一些人则持相反的观点
第二段:
第一句(客套):
it reflects two distinct different ways of +主题词
第二句(总述其影响)、:
when it comes to its influence, views are divided.
第三句:
it goes without saying that 科技的发展(主题词) has dramatically_ 好处 _— but it has created 负面的影响 as well .
第四句(转折加缺点):
the merits, though, may be obscuring an unrecognized fact that +缺 点
举例:the merits, though, luuburing an unrecognized fact that such smart devices can lead to distraction. 不过,这种智能设备的优点掩盖了一个尚未被认识到的事实,即这种智能设备可能会让人分心。
第三段:
第一句:
everything tends to be a mixed blessing 凡事都是喜忧参半
第二句:
on it's own, 主题词 is neither good nor bad, it depends on how we use it, that is to say, we should spare no efforts to restrict its lameness +提出建议
词汇
the employment difficulties
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