导图社区 美文分享构思方法
多阅读一些规范的、美好的好文章,对于同学们使用书面语言,学写美文,能起到潜移默化的作用。
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直接或间接 对事物抒情
自由奔放,毫不拘谨
采用诗的精华篇章
取其精华,弃其糟粕 ,当有你喜欢的地方不妨用笔写一写 ,字里行间中一定充满爱与美的激情,唱出深沉的挚爱心曲
Then let not winter's ragged hand deface In thee thy summer, ere thou be distilled: Make sweet some vial; treasure thou some place With beauty's treasure, ere it be self-killed That use is not forbidden usury Which happies those that pay the willing loan; That's for thyself to breed another thee Or ten times happier, be it ten for one; Ten times thyself were ha appier than th ou art, If ten of thine ten times rehgured thee; Then what could death do if thou shouldst depart, Leaving thee living in posterity? Be not self-willed, for thou art much too fair To be death's conquest and make worms thine heir.
我也不羡慕那百合花的洁白,也不赞美玫瑰花的一片红晕 ,他们只不过是香是悦木的雕刻,你才是他们所描摹的真身 。希望观者有所感,有所悟
文学一途,悠远漫长,一步一个脚印才能步步稳当,拔苗助长似的前进是毫无所得的。想写出美文就得刻苦铭行,就得从心出发,敢闯敢悟,走前人未走之路,另辟蹊径,成一家之言或也不是不可能!
怎样思考呢?多观察,多留心,多换换角度去想问题。读经典的书。
可以学习有特点的作家的语言,再慢慢形成自己的语言。
多读可以有语感,语言是文章的基础,语言优美很关键。
提笔落笔间,引扰一片烟飞云动,著成一篇美文。
Lo in the Orient when the gracious light Lifts up his burning head, each under eye Doth homage to his new appearing sight, Serving with looks his sacred majesty; And having climbed the steep-up heavenly hill Resembling strong youth in his middle age, Yet mortal looks adore his beauty still, Attending on his golden pilgrimage But when from high-most pitch with weary car Like feeble age he reeleth from the day The eyes, fore-duteous, now converted are From his low tract, and look another way So thou, thyself out-going in thy noon, Unlooked on diest, unless thou get a son.
你灿烂的日中亦会消逝 看,当普照万物的太阳从东方 抬起了火红的头,下界的眼睛 都对他初升的景象表示敬仰, 用目光来恭候他神圣的驾临; 然后他既登上了苍穹的极峰, 像精力饱满的壮年,雄姿英发, 万民的眼睛依旧膜拜他的峥嵘, 紧紧追随着他那疾驰的金驾。 但当他,像耄年拖着尘倦的车轮 从绝顶颤巍巍地离开了白天, 众目便一齐从他下沉的足印 移开它们那原来恭顺的视线。 同样,你的灿烂的日中一消逝, 你就会悄悄死去,如果没后嗣。
宛如空山新雨,荡涤尘埃,又似清晨鸟叫,呼唤深情。读者怡然自得,心扉开启,写者一挥而蹴,潇洒自然。美文出于心,出于情,出于造化。
那些时辰曾经用轻盈地细工,织就这众目共注的可爱明眸,终有天对它摆出魔王的面孔,把绝代佳丽剁成龙钟的老丑
白雪掩盖了美
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Those hours that with gentle work did frame The lovely gaze where every eye doth dwell Will play the tyrants to the very same, And that unfair which fairly doth excel; For never-resting time leads summer on To hideous winter, and confounds him there Sap checked with frost and lusty leaves quite gone, Beauty oer-snowed, and bareness everywhere; Then were not summer's distillation left A liquid prisoner pent in walls of glass, Beauty's effect with beauty were bereft, Nor it, nor no remembrance what it was. But flowers distilled, thoug h they with winter meet, Leese but their show; their substance still lives sweet.
美文是一棵繁茂的大树,阅读和写作是培养学生语文能力最重要的环节。相信有了这本书,同学们在阅读和写作过程中的苦恼都能迎刃而解。
从心出发则情感真挚,没有做作;从心出发则思维开阔,眼界宏大;从心出发则平淡自然,勿用强求。这是写文章的前提,缺少前提则不知所云。
落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色
When do count the clock that tells the time, And see the brave day sunk in hideous night When I behold the violet past prime, And sable curls all silvered o'er with white; When lofty trees I see barren ofleaves, Which erst from heat did canopy the herd, And summer s green all girded up in sheaves Bore on the bier with white and bristly beard: Then of thy beauty do question make, That thou among the wastes of time must go, Since sweets and beauties do themselves forsake, And die as fast as they see others grow. And nothing gainst time's scythe can make defence ave breed to brave him, when he takes thee hence.
当我凝望紫罗兰老了春容 当我数着壁上报时的自鸣钟, 见明媚的白昼坠入狰狞的夜, 当我凝望着紫罗兰老了春容, 青丝的卷发遍洒着皑皑白雪; 当我看见参天的树枝叶尽脱, 它不久前曾荫蔽喘息的牛哞; 夏天的青翠一束一束地就缚, 带着坚挺的白须被异上殓床; 于是我不禁为你的朱颜焦虑: 终有天你要加入时光的废堆。 既然美和芳菲都把自己抛弃, 眼看着别人生长自己却枯萎。 没什么抵挡得住时光的毒手, 除了生育,当他来要把你拘走。
🎈要有浪漫的心情。多愁善感其实也有助于写作,看一片落叶不再只是片叶子,而是生命的逝去,就会写出“生如夏花之绚烂,死如秋叶般静美”这样的诗句了。话说这句充满哲理的诗出自泰戈尔的《飞鸟集》,非常推荐哦,我婚礼上还参考了不少里面的句子。
多阅读一些规范的、美好的好文章,对于同学们使用书面语言,学写美文,能起到潜移默化的作用。
Music to hear, why hear'st thou music sadly? Sweets with sweets war not, joy delights in joy: Why lov'st thou that which thou receiv'st not gladly Or else receiv'st with pleasure thine annoy? If the true concord of well-tuned sounds By unions married, do offend thine ear, They do but sweetly chide thee, who confounds In singleness the parts that thou shouldst bear. Mark how one string, sweet husband to another, Strikes each in each by mutual ordering, Resembling sire, and child, and happy mother Who all in one, one pleasing note do singi Whose speechless song being many, seeming one, Sings this to thee: Thou single wilt prove none
你独身就一切皆空 我的音乐,为何听音乐会生悲? 甜蜜不相克,快乐使快乐欢笑。 为何爱那你不高兴爱的东西, 或者为何乐于接受你的烦恼? 如果悦耳的声音的完美和谐 和亲挚的协调会惹起你烦忧, 它们不过委婉地责备你不该 用独奏窒息你心中那部合奏。 试看这一根弦,另一根的良人, 怎样融洽地互相呼应和振荡; 宛如父亲、儿子和快活的母亲, 它们联成了一片,齐声在欢唱。 它们的无言之歌都异曲同工 对你唱着:“你独身就一切皆空。”
别让冬天嶙峋的手抹掉你的夏天 那么,别让冬天嶙峋的手抹掉 你的夏天,在你未经提炼之前, 惠香一些瓶子;把你美的财宝 藏在宝库里,趁它还未及消散。 这样的借贷并不是违禁取利, 既然它使那乐意纳息的高兴; 这是说你该为你另生一个你, 或者,一个生十,就十倍地幸运; 十倍你自己比你现在更快乐, 如果你有十个儿子来重现你。 这样,即使你长辞,死将奈你何, 既然你继续活在你的后裔里? 别任性:你那么标致,何必甘心 做死的胜利品,让蛆虫做子孙。
从前辈处汲取营养,只有学会执古之道,才能做好御今之有。这种道理亘古不变,观察别人才能发现自己。多学能补心之所缺,多学能接心之所长。唯有不断学习才能不断进步。
不过光有心思可不行,有多少人是有心无力的,或者说是“心有余而力不足”的。所谓空怀满腔热血,无奈无处泄发,在写作上则成了无法泄发。积累是基础,缺乏了文学积累的文章犹如被拔了毛的鸟,犹如被剃了牙的虎,是既不经看,也不经用的。
🎈想法要多。没事多想想你对各种事物的看法,多听听别人的意见看看和你有什么不同,多和朋友辩论,将意见碰撞形成自己的观点,就不怕写不出东西了。
精致唯美,技巧超卓
当我默察一切活泼泼的生机 ,保持他们的芳菲都不过一瞬,宇宙的舞台只搬弄一些把戏,被上苍的星宿在冥冥中牵引
为了你的爱我和时光争持
提炼过的花,纵和冬天抗衡 ,只是失掉颜色,却永远吐着清芬