the rough road across the plain soon became so bad that we tried to get Bruce to drive back to the village
but Bruce always underestimated difficulties and simply had no sense of danger, so he didn′t take our advice and wanted to get to another village which was 20miles away from us
process
beginning
we bumped over the dusty track to aviod large boulders
the wheels scooped up stones which hammered ominously under the car, so we still worried about a stone would rip a hole in our petrol tank or damage the engine
we kept looking back to make sure the car was okay
development
we crossed the road and the only obstacle were clumps of bushes next, which made us relieved
but there was worse to come and we met so huge a fissure that we all got out to examine the fissure except for Bruce
Bruce went into a low gear and drove at a terrifying speed and crossed the fissure successfully
climax
we were back on the plain again and the village was now only 15 miles away
the next obstacle was a shallow pool of water about half a mile across which we needed to cross and Bruce charged it, but in the middle, the car came to a grinding halt
ending
a yellow light on the dashboard flashed angrily
effect
there was no oil in the engine and we were trapped in the pool
L39 Nothing to worry about
cause
the rough road across the plain soon became so bad that we tried to get Bruce to drive back to the village
but Bruce always underestimated difficulties and simply had no sense of danger, so he didn′t take our advice and wanted to get to another village which was 20miles away from us
process
beginning
we bumped over the dusty track to aviod large boulders
the wheels scooped up stones which hammered ominously under the car, so we still worried about a stone would rip a hole in our petrol tank or damage the engine
we kept looking back to make sure the car was okay
development
we crossed the road and the only obstacle were clumps of bushes next, which made us relieved
but there was worse to come and we met so huge a fissure that we all got out to examine the fissure except for Bruce
Bruce went into a low gear and drove at a terrifying speed and crossed the fissure successfully
climax
we were back on the plain again and the village was now only 15 miles away
the next obstacle was a shallow pool of water about half a mile across which we needed to cross and Bruce charged it, but in the middle, the car came to a grinding halt
ending
a yellow light on the dashboard flashed angrily
effect
there was no oil in the engine and we were trapped in the pool