导图社区 六级作文模板
着重写了第一种六级写作的模板——意义措施类。“意义措施类”一直是六级写作的重中之重,这几年,年年都考,所以一定要重视!
编辑于2024-07-09 01:22:30六级作文模板
议论文——意义措施类
一、意义措施类完整模板演示: In a rapidly developing society,It is generally accepted that innovation plays a fundamental role in personal progress and national development.Innovation,which is held by many to be core competitiveness,has captured a great deal of public attention. As regards to the social implication of innovation,my discussion on the issue is mainly twofold.On the one hand,in a society where competition in job markets becomes increasingly fierce(stiff),an increasing number of people find it helpful to enhance our competitiveness.Thus,continuous self innovation is not a choice, but a must to meet the ever-growing demands of our society.On the other hand,People with the spirit of innovation can not only accumulate various knowledge,but also can promote social science and technology innovation. For example,Einstein,honored for his success in the theory of relativism,is always remembered for the spirit of innovation,which makes him one of the greatest scientists. To sum up, it is of great benefit for us to cultivate innovative spirit during college and learn how to create some new inventions.Specifically,The fundamental way in which the government advocates this spirit is to enhance people’s awareness.Meanwhile,the school should also join in the efforts in promoting quality-oriented education。
2016年12月
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation/creation/invention. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
创新的重要性以及鼓励创新的措施
有一点要特别注意,审题非常关键,题目中明确要求写创新的“重要性”和“措施”,所以你的内容上一个都不能少,既要写创新的重要性,也要写措施。并且措施measures加了-s,所以你的措施要不少于一条。
作文框架
首段
(首段完整版) In a rapidly developing society,It is generally accepted that innovation plays a fundamental role in personal progress and national development.Innovation,which is held by many to be core competitiveness,has captured a great deal of public attention. 在一个快速发展的社会中,人们普遍认为创新对个人进步和国家发展起着基础性作用发展、创新被许多人认为是核心竞争力的,引起了公众的极大关注。
话题引入
例如:In a rapidly developing society, it is generally accepted that innovation plays a fundamental role in personal progress and national development.在快速发展的社会中,人们普遍认为创新对个人进步和国家发展起着基础性作用。(虽然是模板,但是还是有些地方需要你去根据话题自己写,也就是这个句子的划线部分)
前半句
There is little doubt that… 毫无疑问...
It cannot be denied that… 不可否认...
It is beyond doubt that… 毫无疑问...
It is generally accepted that… 人们普遍认为...
There is a growing recognition that… 人们越来越认识到...
It has been widely noted that… 人们普遍注意到...
It goes without saying that… 不用说的是...
后半句
主语从句开头不是重点,重点是that后面跟什么。
两种选择:
选择一:①______plays an extremely important role.
选择二:②Nothing is more important than______.
主题阐述
Innovation,which is held by many to be core competitiveness,has captured a great deal of public attention. 被许多人视为核心竞争力的创新,吸引了公众的极大关注。(唯一的难点在非限制性定语从句上)
结构
主题词+,which(非限制性定语从句)+模板句
主题词
就不用说了,这里就是innovation主要是非限制性定语从句和模板句写啥
非限制性定语从句
写与人们之间有什么关系:(也是两个选择)
选择1:①人们认为该现象... ,which is held by many to be...(be动词后面要么名词,要么加形容词)
选择2:②带来…影响 ,which exerts a great impact/a positive influence/a negative impact on…
很明显,选择1的难度更大,它需要自己去写(得分更高),而选择二很无脑,直接套就可以。比如这里的创新,咱们直接写“创新对我们的生活产生很大的影响”innovation,which exerts a great impact on our life.(无脑,但是得分有限)
模板句
选择1:sth has/have captured/drawn one’s attention.某事吸引了某人的注意力
选择2:sth has/have emerged into our vision.某事出现在我们的视野中。
中间段
中间段完整版(过渡句+两方面):(加上on the one hand,on the other hand) As regards to the social implication of innovation,my discussion on the issue is mainly twofold.On the one hand,in a society where competition in job markets becomes increasingly fierce(stiff),an increasing number of people find it helpful to enhance our competitiveness.Thus,continuous self innovation is not a choice, but a must to meet the ever-growing demands of our society.On the other hand,People with the spirit of innovation can not only accumulate various knowledge,but also can promote social science and technology innovation.For example,Einstein,honored for his success in the theory of relativism,is always remembered for the spirit of innovation,which makes him one of the greatest scientists.关于创新的社会内涵,我的讨论有如下两个方面。第一一方面,在一个就业市场竞争日益激烈的社会中,越来越多的人发现这有助于提高我们的竞争力竞争力。因此,不断的自主创新不是一种选择,但必须满足我们国家日益增长的需求社会。另一方面,具有创新精神的人不仅可以积累各种知识,而且可以推动社会科技进步创新。为了例如,爱因斯坦因其在相对主义理论上的成功而受到尊敬,他以创新精神而被人们铭记,这使他成为最伟大的科学家之一。
过渡句
(两个选择,不需要纠结,直接套用就完事了)
选择1:①There are two fundamental factors contributing to this phenomenon.造成这种现象有两个基本因素。
选择2:②As regards to the social implication of innovation,my discussion on the issue is mainly twofold.关于创新的社会影响,我的讨论主要有两个方面。
一方面,背景句,论据论点
背景句
In a age/society where....
①社会竞争:In a society where competition in job markets becomes increasingly fierce(stiff),在一个就业市场竞争日益激烈的社会里,
②发展(科技):In an age where globalization and information technology revolution are developing(advancing) rapidly,在全球化和信息技术革命迅猛发展的时代,
②发展(经济):In an age where people’s standard of living has been raised significantly,在人民生活水平大幅度提高的时代,
③教育:In an age where parents and educators always focus on sth,在一个父母和教育者总是关注某件事的时代,
④媒体:In an age where sth have(not)been highly advocated in mass media,在一个大众传媒一直大力提倡某事的时代,
重点是where后面接什么呢?我给你四个模板(4个角度),你按照不同话题,选择相应的背景句:
这四个背景句(由于发展比较特殊,所以给了“经济”和“科技”两个发展)都是用介词短语引导的,所以写完一定要用逗号衔接,逗号后面的主句就是我们的论据。
这四个背景句应该如何选择呢?比如本文的主题是“创新”。那么我们为什么要发展创新呢?你可以从竞争的角度去说,因为竞争激烈,所以创新可以使得我们取得优势;也可以从科技去说,因为现在科技很重要,所以创新有利于科技发展;也可以从教育去说,现在我们的教育者都很重视创新,所以我们要发展创新。(媒体和教育是一个道理)
所以同学们会发现以背景句来引导我们的话题分析非常自然和顺畅,老师并不会发现我们写的作文是模板,我们只需要根据不同话题,选择适当的,切合主题的背景去引出即可。
论据
是一个模板句,直接套用即可
论据:an increasing number of people find it helpful/difficult/harmful to enhance our competitiveness.(竞争力)越来越多的人发现提高我们的竞争力是有益的。
这个句型的基本结构是sb find it +形容词+ to do sth。
同学们在使用时,只需要重点考虑to do sth即可。除了上面讲的“增强我们的竞争力”
还可以写:“紧跟不断变化的社会(to to keep up with the change of society)”(能力强的同学,最好还是结合话题去写)
论点
“论点”,也就是中间段第一方面的总结了,同样也是一个模板句,直接套用即可:
Thus continuous self innovation is not a choice, but a must to meet the ever-growing demands of our society.因此,不断的自主创新不是一种选择,而是满足社会日益增长的需求的必然选择。(语气较强烈)
或者写Thus continuous self innovation is a wise choice to meet the ever-growing demands of our society.因此,不断的自主创新是满足社会日益增长的需求的明智选择。(语气缓和)
这里只需要把主题词换了即可。
另一方面,not only but also举例
这个部分更难,因为很多东西都要你自己写
先写not only,but also,写这个句子,要注意,它需要你自己进行一定创作。一定要分两个方面(一小一大),小就是对于咱们个人,或者对于我们自己有什么影响;大就是对社会,对国家,乃至对于全人类有什么影响。以“innovation”话题为例:
People with the spirit of innovation can not only accumulate various knowledge,but also promote social science and technology innovation.(具有创新精神的人不仅可以积累各种知识,而且可以推动社会科技创新。)是不是一小一大。大家拿到我的例句进行模仿(要注意can的位置)
关于not only,but also你可能用到的语句我给你总结出来了:(写作素材)
(直接背下来,考场上如果自己写不出来,直接套用素材即可。)
achieve success 取得成功
accumulate knowledge 增长知识 broaden our horizons 开拓视野 expand social circle 扩大社交圈
enrich our minds(lives) 丰富我们的思想(生活)
protect our living environment and conserve energy 保护环境,节约能源
promote social harmony 增进社会和谐
preserve and carry forward traditional Chinese culture 保护和发扬中国传统文化
举例
大家举例时要注意,举具体的人或事,比如姚明,屠呦呦,华为,苹果等这些具体的事物,然后套用举例模板 我给的三个例子,基本涵盖了大部分的话题,当然,还是有同学会提出来:老师,我还是不会举例怎么办?我会给你一个代替举例的备选方案(放在观点选择类的作文去讲)
1.创新话题:For example,Einstein,honored for his success in the theory of relativism,is always remembered for the spirit of innovation,which makes him one of the greatest scientists.(划线的地方是你要结合话题写的,其他的地方直接套用即可。)例如,爱因斯坦因其在相对主义理论上的成功而受到表彰,他因其创新精神而被人们铭记,这使他成为最伟大的科学家之一。
2.合作话题:For instance,Apple,honored for its success in mobile phone and personal computer,is always remembered for its collaboration with Google in software,which makes them the most competitive technology company in the world.例如,苹果公司因其在手机和个人电脑领域的成功而备受赞誉,却因其与谷歌在软件领域的合作而被人们铭记,这使他们成为世界上最具竞争力的科技公司。(只需要在划线部分与话题结合即可)
3.教育:For instance,Confucius,honored for his success in education and philosophy in ancient times,is always remembered for showing a great respect to others,which makes him the most famous educator and philosopher.例如,孔子在古代因其在教育和哲学方面的成就而受到尊崇,他因对他人的尊重而被人们铭记,这使他成为最著名的教育家和哲学家。
尾段
尾段完整版: To sum up, it is of great benefit for us to cultivate innovative spirit during college and learn how to create some new inventions.Specifically,The fundamental way in which the government advocates this spirit is to enhance people’s awareness.Meanwhile,the school should also join in the efforts in promoting quality-oriented education。综上所述,在大学期间培养创新精神,学会创造新发明,对我们有很大好处。具体而言,政府倡导这种精神的根本途径是提高人民的意识。同时,学校也应该参与到推进素质教育的工作中来。
总结
(这里要注意审题,题目中明确要求我们写鼓励创新的措施,因此尾段的重点在于具体措施,并且要写两个措施,因为题目给的是mesures!)
模板句(直接套用):To sum up/Based on the reasons above, it is of great benefit for us to cultivate innovative spirit during college and learn how to create some new inventions. 综上所述,在大学期间培养创新精神,学会创造新发明,对我们有很大好处。(划线部分换上主题词即可。)
建议措施
措施1:Specifically,The fundamental way in which the government advocates this spirit is to enhance people’s awareness.具体来说,政府倡导这一精神的根本途径就是增强人们的觉悟。(模板句直接套用,也可以在划线部分体现出主题词,任何话题都可以从政府的角度去写)
措施2:Meanwhile,the school should also join in the efforts in promoting quality-oriented education.同时,学校也要参与到素质教育的推进中来。(学校或媒体,直接套用即可)
议论文——观点选择类
2017年6月
Directions:Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to attend college at home or abroad, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
给建议:国内上大学还是国外上大学?
议论文——现象解释类
2016年6月
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on e—learning.Try to imagine what will happen when more and more people study online instead of attending school.You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
线上学习:越来越多人参与网络学习而不去学校了会发生什么?
议论文——谚语警句类
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Help others and you will be helped when you are in need” You can cite example to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
“帮助别人,你会在需要的时候得到帮助“(举例)
议论文——图画类
2015.12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading.You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
社交网站对于阅读的影响