These are two simple but enlightening/stimulating/ironic drawings.
描写环境：介词+地点
Inside a huge warm house,
确定主体，引出人/物：there be句型
there is a little and delicate flower,
伴随动作/状态：Ving非谓语
growing vigorously and blossoming,
描述身上/周围的事物（的动作or状态）：with+n.（+Ving/Ved/介词短语）
with the house protecting it from the outside severe weather.
表反差：Although引导让步状语从句
Although it seems quite healthy and strong in the house, this plant withers quickly after it is put in the rain, with its petals falling in the wind.
文字说明：被动+定语从句
Finally, several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say/read that flowers in the greenhouse cannot stand (withstand/bear/tolerate/survive) the wind and rain.
二、 中间段：现实寓意
主题（或相关事物）特征*
The contemporary Chinese families are characterized by “one family, one child”,
A happy and harmonious family should be characterized by children’s love and care for their old parents, but such a scene above can be associated with a host of helpless senior citizens in reality.
图画联系现实+另一个现象/危害/意义/原因
衔接句
and such a scene above can be associate (related/linked/connected) with a host of parents and their kids in reality.
现实（现象）
Admittedly, an increasing number of parents, now, prepare almost everything for their children, such as foods, clothes, houses, tuition, marriage and even future jobs.
解释原因（可替换）：
A值得被xx，因为...
（可以直接跟强调句）
This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that fathers and mothers pay excessive attention to youngsters’ comfort and enjoyment, ignoring (=neglecting) the significance of independence for the young.
This virtue is particularly worth praising for the reason that it is their perseverance that enables them to succeed again and again.
强调句（肯定/否定）
It is parents’ overprotection that causes/enables young people to build up inadequate competence or confidence to face the society
三、 中间段2：发表评论
观点、建议、展望
观点
引入
However, independence, to my understanding, can be likened to a journey leading to (=which/that leads to) success.
阐释
As a significant quality, independence may bring teenagers power, arouse their enthusiasm for life and help them win in the future social competition.
总结：构成了阻碍
Unfortunately, some parents’ too much love, like the greenhouse, has constituted/formed an obstacle/barrier that hinders their children’s growth.
四、 结尾
措施
Hence, the society as a whole should foster a positive atmosphere to criticize parents’ blind love.
Furthermore, it is advisable/sensible/intelligent for parents to offer their kids freedom and opportunities to grow independently.
总结
To conclude, all parents should bear in mind that they cannot protect their kids for a lifetime.
思路
积累
逻辑词
然而
however；nonetheless
因此
accordingly；therefore；hence；thus；as a result
此外
In addition
总之
To conclude；in conclusion；in a word；all in all；in a nut shell
