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高中英语小作文,b站陶大的分享内容思维导图,多个形容词和插入语混有效同时交代多个内容,从整体定义到个别主题,背后仍然是概括到具体的写作逻辑。
编辑于2023-06-21 09:12:32 福建省英语作文
写作方法
多个形容词和插入语混
有效同时交代多个内容
多样性
蓝色:应用文写作固定句式和套路语句 紫色:定语从句 绿色:非谓语动词 棕色:逻辑连词 粉红色:常用名词短语(形容词+名词) 橙色:形容词和插入语
从整体定义到个别主题,背后仍然是概括到具体的写作逻辑。
先短后长→总+分
分:具体内容展开
+描述结果
+解释原因
…, which may be the reason why … 从原因到结果的定语从句写法
内容补充
前置动作
After....,
并列
when... ,or when...多情况描述
对比
Different from
Insead...相反的是
举例子
such as...+名词短语
For example....+句子
主题名词
展览exhibition 博物馆museum
演讲lecture
the Students’ Union学生会
website网站
介绍类
有逻辑介绍
从大到小,从内到外
概括到具体
主观和客观
介绍的实质就是说明,而说明就需要说明方法。常用的说明方法无外乎定义、特点、分类、对比、发展变化
内容高度概括,重点放于影响
动词短语可以在核心动作前后进行扩充,也就是动作原因、动作顺序、动作结果
套话
Hope this letter finds you well.”,字面直接翻译就是“希望这封信发现你一切都好
Hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share with you the exciting ..."World Book Day" activity held at my school in April. 展信佳。我写这封信是想为你介绍我们学校四月举行的“世界读书日”的活动。
结尾
That’s all. Hope you can have a deep insight into it. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. 就是这样了。希望你能有所了解。如果你有任何问题,请随时告诉我。
被询问
What do you think of my choice (plan)? I am looking forward to your advice. 你觉得我的选择(或计划)怎么样?期待着你的建议。
自我介绍
基本情况、性格、能力、兴趣爱好、过往经历
性格
outgoing nature.
广泛兴趣
keep expansive interests
具体
find sb adj 觉得某人如何如何 sth is my favorite 某物是我的最爱 fulfill my wildest imagination 最大发挥想象力 enjoy the excitement of sth 享受某事的快感
个人的喜好
主题选择,
主题展开,
限定范围
比较级是在两方面之间进行比较,而只要提到最高级,一定要限定范围,你的表述才具有合理性。简而言之,你要具备这样的反应:说到“我最……”的时候,一定要表述成“在……中,我最……”。这样就出现了范文中的前半句。三者以上才会有最高级,而三者以上的“在……中”使用的介词是among。
开展主题
有什么具体表现能够体现这种喜欢吗?时间是每个人最宝贵的财富,所以喜欢任何事物或人物最直接的表现,就是你愿意为他/她/它投入时间。在构思主题展开的时候,从时间角度出发是非常简单直接的写法,你能够设计的就是“自从……时候我就开始做这件事了”,或者“我每天都要花一定的时间去做这件事”。各位会发现,这个内容补充过后,你的主题就立住了,它不再是一句口号式的表达,而是有实际的内容在进行支撑。
主题意义
practice dancing on a regular basis 定期练习跳舞” 、“connect with others 与他人交流” “greatly enrich my campus life 丰富我的校园生活”。
move my body for fun and joy 为了好玩而舞动身体”、“relieve stress 释放压力”、“enjoy life 享受生活”
由表及里的、由他人到自己
It is more than just doing sth. It is a way to do sth 它不仅仅是做某事。它还是一种做某事的方式”,
套路
Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shapes me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without dancing after schoo l.此外,学习任何类型的舞蹈都需要努力、决心和耐心,这塑造了我更好的个人品质。如果没有课后的跳舞活动,我就不会是现在的我。 doing sth takes hard work, determination and patience, which shapes me into a better person 做某事需要努力、决心和耐心,这塑造了我更好的个人品质
范文
Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, basketball is my favorite. I have been in the basketball team of my class since Senior 1. After school we practiced basketball on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life. I love basketball because it is more than just playing against another team for victory. It is a way to relieve stress and enjoy life. Besides, mastering any basketball technique takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without basketball after school.(101字)
介绍事物
现象
描述当前的普遍情况
As you know, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home. 如你所知,越来越多的年轻人宁愿在网上订餐或打电话给外卖餐厅叫送餐,也不愿意在家里做饭。
sth is popular, especially for people who do sth 某件事很普遍,特别是对于做某事的人而言”。
a growing number of people越来越多的人
would rather ...than...宁愿...而不宁愿
介绍个人的实际情况
As for me, I seldom order meals online. Instead, I like eating what my mother cooks at home. If she is free, she will teach me how to cook. 至于我,我很少在网上订餐。相反,我喜欢吃我母亲在家里做的东西。如果她有空,她会教我做饭。
I seldom do sth. Instead, I like doing sth 我很少做某事,相反的是,我喜欢做某事”体现了前后相反的内容逻辑,其实就是在说明“不点外卖”的原因
I often order food online when my parents are at work, or when my family wants to try something that tastes different. 当父母在工作时,或者当我们家想换换口味时,我经常在网上点餐。 when.....or when...多情况讲述
表达自己的观点意见。
In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer cooking food at home and going on a balanced diet. 在我看来,我们的健康与我们吃的东西密切相关。我们越是忙碌,就越应该关注饮食。因此,我更愿意在家里做饭,并保持均衡的饮食。 1、“In my view 在我看来”的标志短语,用于直接陈述个人观点,等于“In my opinion”; 2、“the + 比较级 + we are,the + 比较级 + we should do sth 我们越……,就越应该做某事”,用于提出建议; 3、“sb prefer doing sth and doing sth 某人倾向于做某事及做某事”,用于直接表达个人态度
传统文化
an on-going competition entitled sth一个正在进行的名为某物的比赛 help students better appreciate the charm of Chinese culture 帮助学生更好地欣赏中国文化的魅力 improve our hand-on skills 提高我们的动手能力 deepen students' understanding of sth 加深学生对某物的理解 a hand-made product bearing distinctive Chinese elements 有独特中国元素的手工制品 daily objects with traditional cultural symbols 带有传统文化符号的日常用品 the unique features of the landscape in China 中国风景的独特之处 the natural scenery, famous architecture, or local customs 自然风光、著名建筑或本地风俗 I’m writing to share with you sth 我写这封信是要向你介绍某事 Hope this letter finds you well. 展信佳(希望你展开这封信的时候一切安好) The competition is held to do sth and to do sth. 举办这次比赛是为了做某事和做某事
活动类
思路
客观设计思路
听讲座(expert give us a lecture)
主观设计思路
做海报 (make poster)
句子
活动目的
To do sth and do sth, some activity will be held in some place at some time. 为了做某事和做某事,某个活动将于某时间在某地点举行。
on next Monday at 4 p.m in
扩充前置动作顺序 After searching related materials and completely understanding the authors′ opinions, we shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading. 在搜索了相关资料并且完全理解了作者的观点之后,我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法,并且努力提升阅读的意识。 扩充后置动作结果 We shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading, which eventually made this activity a great success. 我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法,并且努力提升阅读的意识,最终使这次活动取得了巨大的成功。
读书
inspire the enthusiasm about reading books 激发对阅读的热情 encourage students to read more books 鼓励学生读更多书 help students appreciate the value of books 帮助学生欣赏书籍的价值
There were various activities such as book fairs, book sharing, and a book donation.有各种各样的活动,如图书市场、图书分享和图书捐赠活动。
share one's unique views on books 分享某人对于书籍独特的看法 try one's best to promote the awareness of reading 努力提升阅读的意识
conduct an attractive activity with the theme of … 举办了一个以……为主题的有趣的活动 inspire the enthusiasm about sth 激发对某事的热情 search related materials 搜索相关材料 share one's views on sth 分享对某事的看法 try our best to promote the awareness of sth 努力提升对某事的意识 make this activity a great success 让这次活动圆满成功 never stop the pace of doing sth 永远不要停止做某事的步伐 have a deep insight into sth 对某事有深入了解 participated in this successful activity 参与这次成功的活动 enjoy the benefits of sth 享受某事的好处 The event aims to do sth 活动旨在做某事 The purpose of this activity is to do sth and do sth 活动的目的是做某事和做某事 What I have learned from the day is that … 我从这次活动里学到的是,…… There are various activities such as sth, sth, and sth 有各种各样的活动,如某事、某事和某事 I find sth to be the most rewarding 我认为某事是最有意义的 It is interesting to do sth 做某事是很有趣的过程
书的影响
courage, perseverance and confidence 勇气、毅力和信心 time of self-doubt and depression 自我怀疑、情绪低落的时期 help me regain my confidence 帮助我重拾信心 focused on my efforts No … has ever influenced me so much as sb / sth 没有什么对我的影响和某人或某物一样 I am deeply struck by the famous quote “…”. 书中的这句名言给我留下了深刻的印象:“……” sth greatly motivate me when I fail 在我失败时,某物极大地激励了我 sth also reminds me that … 某物还提醒我…… the will to struggle is what counts, not the result 最重要的不是结果,而是奋斗时的意志 I will definitely make it! 我一定会成功的! This is the meaning of sth to me 这就是某事对我的意义
第一段是对书籍客观层面的描述,第二段则是个人主观层面的感受。所谓“对你的影响”,就是这本书在你身上产生了什么作用,促成了你哪些方面的改变,让你明白了什么道理。根据字数要求,大致列出2-3条就足够了。
网络安全
raise our awareness of information security 提高信息安全意识 learn how to protect personal information 学习如何保护个人信息 an expert in public security 公共安全方面的专家 give us a lecture on sth 给我们进行某方面的主题讲座 cyber-crimes and how to take precautions 网络犯罪和如何防范 make posters to remind sb 制作海报提醒某人 avoid falling victim to relevant traps 避免成为这种陷阱的受害者 both interesting and instructive 既有趣又有意义 share your feelings 分享你的感想
人工智能
Utilize AI tools to enhance learning outcomes:利用人工智能工具提高学习效果 Foster critical thinking and problem-solving skills:培养批判性思维和解决问题的能力 Promote personalized learning experiences:促进个性化的学习体验 Balance the benefits and risks of AI adoption:平衡人工智能采用的利弊 AI-powered personalized learning:基于人工智能的个性化学习 AI-assisted grading and feedback:人工智能辅助评分和反馈 AI-based tutoring systems:基于人工智能的辅导系统 AI-powered adaptive testing:基于人工智能的自适应测试 AI-supported student engagement:支持学生的人工智能互动 AI-enabled learning analytics:基于人工智能的学习分析 AI-based assessment tools:基于人工智能的评估工具 AI-enhanced educational resources:基于人工智能的教育资源 AI-driven student performance monitoring:基于人工智能的学生表现监测
征稿
从整体定义到个别主题,背后仍然是概括到具体的写作逻辑。
本质是介绍类
文化
开头
The symbol of China is the first thing that comes to your mind when it comes to this nation. Among all the real or virtual things, one stands out: Chinese dragon. 所谓中国符号,就是在谈到这个国家时你首先想到的事物。在所有现实或虚拟的事物中,最具有代表性的就是“中国龙”。
中间构思
中国龙
起点:Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck.中国龙是吉祥的象征。(最基本的构思,中国龙是什么,代表着什么)加入并列结构: Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(使用二至三个内容并列扩充)加入对比: Different from dragons in the western,Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.和西方的龙不一样,中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(通过对比的写作手法让读者建立起更加形象直观的内容印象)加入补充描述: Different from dragons in the western, which are pictured as a somewhat dinosaur appearance with unstoppable strength and evil power, Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.和西方的龙不一样,西方的龙外貌类似恐龙,力量强大邪恶,而中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(把对比的另一方特征补充完整,这部分可以根据字数需求直接删去,对句意不会造成任何影响)
长城
As one of the star attractions in China, the Great Wall is considered as the symbol of China and the wisdom of Chinese people. It stretches a total length of over 9000 kilometers, crossing 9 provinces and municipalities. As the most magnificent defensive architecture in the world, the Great Wall was enlisted into the World Cultural Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1987.作为中国的著名景点之一,长城是中国和中国人民智慧的象征。它的总长度超过9000公里,横跨9个省市。作为世界上最宏伟的防御性建筑,长城于1987年被联合国教科文组织列入世界文化遗产地。
结尾
Not only does Chinese dragon represent Chinese culture, but it has a huge influence for thousands of years and is loved by most Chinese people. Therefore, it is the best symbol of China. 中国龙不仅代表着中国文化,而且几千年来带来了巨大的影响,受到了众多中国人的喜爱。因此,它是最佳的中国符号
积累
the first thing that comes to your mind 首先想到的事物 stands out 脱颖而出 be regarded as a symbol of good luck 被认为是好运的象征 sb identify oneself as … 某人把自己称作…… represent Chinese culture 代表中国文化have a huge influence 带来了巨大的影响
推荐
套话
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. 2、I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. 很高兴得知你对某物感兴趣并且想了解更多,我认为某物是你的最佳选择”。
What do you think of the course? 8、I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it. 推荐类应用文典型收尾:“你觉得某物怎么样?我保证你会有很多乐趣的”。
I hope my introduction is helpful. Please let me know if you have further questions. 希望我的介绍对你有帮助。如果有其它问题,请随时告诉我。
基本句式
I suggest you...which will help you you should Why not Don’t forget to .. It is necessary to it is highly recommended
思路
建议+影响(正面/负面)
动作+结果-目的
内容(主题,时间,具体内容)+推荐原因
sb do sth not noly because ,but because...
积累
传统文化
appreciate its time-honored development 欣赏某物悠久的历史 learn the detailed process of how it spread 了解某物传播的具体过程 have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China 广泛了解中国古代的历史文化 have a great chance to feel the charm of sth by doing sth有机会通过做某事感受某物的魅力 sth represent a unique type of Chinese folk art某物代表中国民俗艺术的独特类型 breathe the historical air when visiting all the must-see spots在参观必去的景点时感受历史的气息 discover Chinese elements and features 发现中国元素和特色 have a deeper look into historical events, folk arts and traditional customs.深入了解历史事件、民俗艺术和传统习俗 explore Chinese history and culture探索中国历史文化 feel the combination of tradition and modernity 感受传统和现代的融合 be amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people 赞叹中国人民的智慧 be impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization为中华文明的灿烂而感到震撼 be totally immersed in Chinese culture沉浸在中国文化中
京剧
推荐原因
I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, Mo, Chou, the five main characters of Beijing Opera. 我知道你非常喜欢戏剧,所以你会更容易理解生、旦、净、末、丑这五种京剧的主要角色。(推荐原因一) It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera performers face to face. 另外,这是一门互动课程,你将有机会与京剧演员面对面交流。
志愿者活动
the volunteer 志愿者 the voluntary activity 志愿者活动 take part in / participate in / attend 参加
help to pick up garbage 帮助捡垃圾 clean up small advertisements 清理小广告 help to grow plants and flowers 帮助栽种花草 make the community cleaner and tidier. 让社区更加干净整洁 beautify the community environment. 美化社区环境 greatly improve the appearance of sth 极大改善某物的面貌 sth take on a new look. 某物焕然一新
assist them when they don’t know how to do sth 在他们手足无措时帮助他们 help sb do sth to save them the trouble 帮助某人做某事以减少他们的麻烦 help to give out leaflets. 帮助发放宣传单页 draw much attention from the passers-by 引起路人的关注 encourage people’s behavior/awareness on environmental protection 鼓励人们环保的行为/意识 reflects qualities of a good citizen. 反映一名公民的良好素质 make a difference 发挥重要作用 have the most amazing experience by doing very simple things for others. 通过服务他人给自己一个很赞的经历 find it our duty to protect the environment. 保护环境是我们的责任 hope more and more people will join us in green actions. 希望更多人加入到我们的绿色行动中 find the activity quite meaningful and educative 发现这个活动非常有意义有教育性 feel the simple pleasure of life 感受到生活简单的快乐 harvest a sense of achievement / satisfaction 收获一种成就感/满足感 sth is worth the active participation 某事值得积极参与
地点
hospital 医院 / caring center 护理中心 nursing home 养老院 / welfare house 福利院 neighborhood / community 社区
报名时间地点
If you are interested, please sign up at the Student Union office from 12:30 to 13:30 this Friday. 如果你们感兴趣,请于本周五12:30至13:30到学生会办公室报名。(
邀请
套话
开头
You must have heard of the upcoming Music Festival to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.
结尾
I’d be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful(meaning) moment with me. Looking forward to your early reply
时间
As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 p.m. to 8 p.m. next Sunday. 先地点再时间,时间按小到大
You must have heard of the upcoming 活动名称 to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in 活动主题词汇, I am writing to invite you to participate in the event with me. As scheduled, it will be held 在某个地点 from 具体时间一 to 具体时间二 + 具体日期. The theme of this activity is “活动主题”, so we will 具体动作一. Also, 具体动作二 I’d be more than delighted if you could come and join this joyful moment with me. Looking forward to your early reply.
积累
tasty food and drinks 可口的食物和饮料 attractive and fascinating performances 精彩纷呈的表演
人物感受
be fully absorbed in sth 沉浸在某事中 be deeply immersed in sth 沉浸在某事中 be greatly impressed with sth 对某事印象深刻 be fascinated with sth 对某事着迷
分层标志
Also, Besides, Furthermore, What′s more, Additionally, In addition, Apart from that , … 除此之外
As for the preparations, sport suits and a pair of comfortable sneakers are necessary. It is also recommended to bring some water or snacks. This is not a competition, so just relax and enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery. 至于准备工作,建议穿运动服和舒适的运动鞋。你也可以带一些水或零食。这次活动不是比赛,所以你可以放松享受新鲜空气和美丽的风景。 As for the preparations, sth and sth are necessary. 至于准备工作,某物和某物是有必要的 It is also recommended to do sth. 同时也推荐你做某事 Just do sth and do sth. 只要做某事和做某事就可以了
约稿
套话
开头
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
结尾
You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you
思路
对事物的简单介绍
主观和客观两个方向一起配合
对比进行说明
different from..不同于.... compare with..
转折
细节扩充
因果关系 举例子
注意
字数 时间限制
建议
思路
建议的主题相关语句:给予对方的肯定、引出建议的过渡句、开场和收尾 提出建议的具体句式:各种不同的提建议的方式
有几个建议? 2、每个建议是用什么句式写作的? 3、补充了什么样的细节。
结构框架
分层的标志词
first and foremost besides in addition
使用不同的提建议的写作方法,避免重复
情态动词
祈使句:v .. 反问句:why not
非谓语动词作主语
形式主语句型
动词短语(积累)
补充具体细节,描述建议的原因、结果或具体方式
建议 + 这么做的原因(动作原因)→not only because ,but because for 从句 建议 + 这么做会有什么结果(动作结果)→which make .. 建议 + 具体要怎么做(动作方式)→by doing sth and doing sth
套话
开头
How is everything going recently? 寒暄 Knowing that you are going to...,I am writing to give you some suggestions
结尾
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of great help to you . And don’t hesitate to tell me if you have any problems.
积累
I suggest you...which will help you
As for the preparations, sth and sth are necessary. 至于准备工作,某物和某物是有必要的
doing sth will help
比较级,比较级”,表示“越……,就越……”, 第一个比较级后面加建议的动作,第二个比较级后面加正面的结果。
will definitely draw students’ attention. 吸引注意力
the upcoming Students’ Art Show 即将到来的学生画展 take much interest in paintings 对绘画很感兴趣 participate in the event with me 和我一起参加这次活动 as scheduled 按照日程安排 be fully absorbed in sth 沉浸在某事中 the attractive and fascinating artworks 精彩纷呈的画作 on the reflection of environmental protection 反映环境保护 join this joyful moment with me 和我一起加入这个愉快的时刻
主题
画画
paintings
传统文化可以写成“The Symbol of China 中国的符号”,环境保护可以写成范文里的“Human and Nature 人与自然”,志愿者活动可以写成“Help Those in Need 帮助有需要的人”
别人求教困难
开头
When it comes to phone addiction, I cannot relate to you more. 说到手机上瘾,我非常理解你的感受。
there are times when sb do sth 某人经常做某事
There are times when I immerse(沉迷) myself in..
第二段
However, we all need to make a change before consequences pile up. Here are a few things you can do.但是,我们都需要在积重难返之前做出改变。以下是一些你可以做的事情。
Besides, it is better to develop some healthy habits to keep your focus away from your phone, such as reading or playing basketball. 此外,最好养成健康的习惯,使你的注意力远离手机,如阅读或打篮球。
了解中国
bullet train 高铁 travel at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour 以每小时约350公里的速度行驶 get a clear idea of what high technology brings to China 清楚地了解到高科技给中国带来的影响。 enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way 欣赏到沿途美丽的风景 develop a deeper understanding of sth 加深对某物的了解 share your impression with people around you 与周围的人分享你的感受
咨询
求助
思路
求助流程
1、描述问题发生的背景 2、说明具体的问题所在 3、希望对方给予的帮助 4、表示感谢
开头
How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to
结尾
Looking forward to your early reply
句式
Would you please give us some suggestions on sth? 你能在某些方面给我们一些建议吗?(向对方寻求建议) Please let me know sth. 请告诉我某事。(询问对方的需求) It would be great if we could do sth. 如果我们能做某事,那就更好了。(向对方提出请求)
写作
connect sentences logically 把句子有逻辑地连接起来” 、“develop a paragraph 展开一个段落” “structure an essay 构建一篇文章”。
咨询
I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information.
写作原因
Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about ....
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
体育锻炼
find some useful workout videos from the internet 从网上找到有用的健身视频 keep following the 15-minute program twice a day 坚持每天两次跟随15分钟的锻炼项目prepare inexpensive fitness equipment 准备便宜的健身器材 involve these exercises into my workout plan 将这些锻炼纳入我的健身计划 jogging around my neighborhood 在小区慢跑 walking with my parents 和父母一起散步 physical exercises / staying active / workout / fitness 运动、健身、锻炼 explore new ways to do sth 寻找新的方法去做某事 Actually, it’s much easier than I thought. 其实这比我想象的要容易得多I am truly grateful for your concern about sth 非常感谢你对某事的关心 sth is an important part of my life 某物在我的生活里很重要
申请
句模板
自我介绍
I’m Li Hua, presently a student of Senior 3. I’m writing to apply for.... I believe I will fit your position for the following reasons.
引入
I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 我看了你们在网上发布的夏令营公告,我对它很感兴趣。(申请信功能句式
为什么申请
I have been looking for opportunities to visit different places, which will definitely help broaden my knowledge and deepen my understanding of the local life.
......and I always have a strong passion for it. 我一直对它有很强烈的热情
结尾
I’ll be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
素材
性格
外向
I possess an outgoing and energetic nature. I have my hearts on all kinds of outdoor activities, which enables me to become stronger and feel relaxed. 我性格外向,精力充沛。我喜欢各种户外活动,它们让我变得更强壮更放松。
内向
I possess an easy-going nature. My classmates find me active and open —-minded, which explains why we can always make achievements as a good team. 我的性格随和。我的同学们觉得我很积极主动、心态开放,这就是为什么我们总是能组成团队取得成就。
兴趣爱好
I possess a passion for photography and writing. I believe it is these two methods that allow me to memorize those impressive and unforgettable moments .我非常喜欢摄影和写作。我认为正是这两种方法让我能记住那些令人印象深刻和难忘的时刻。
I keep an expansive interest. Classic English novels are my favorite, while drawing pictures fulfills my wildest imagination. Besides, as a real basketball fan, I enjoy the excitement of sweat running down my cheeks. 我的兴趣广泛。英文经典小说是我的最爱,而画画则满足了我最疯狂的想象力。此外,作为一个真正的篮球迷,我很享受汗水顺着脸颊流下的兴奋的感觉。
工作能力
I excel at my grades. Owing to my constant efforts and passion for English, I have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest. 我的成绩很优秀。凭借我的不断努力和对英语的热情,我在一次英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。 I obtain good working skills. I have similar work experiences, which enables me to predict the possible problems and find solutions. 我有良好的工作技能。我有类似的工作经验,这让我能预测可能出现的问题并找到解决方案。
知识
I exhibit excellent potential. With my independence, it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. 我有优秀的潜力。因为我的独立,我很容易适应新的环境。 I excel at language ability. After years of English study, I can introduce the traditions of Chinese culture to the foreign friends with fluent speaking English. 我的语言能力很出色。经过多年的英语学习,我可以流利地用英语向外国朋友介绍中国的传统文化。
自我优势
speak English fluently 流利地说英语 be praised for my English writing 因为我的英语写作受到表扬 an active and enthusiastic person 一个积极热情的人 enjoy working with different people 喜欢与不同的人合作 adapt well to new situations 容易适应新的环境
In the past two years, I've been involved in various cultural activities as a volunteer, introducing Chinese history and traditions to the foreign visitors. 在过去的两年里,我作为志愿者参与了各种文化活动,向外国游客介绍中国的历史和传统
感谢
积累
became more confident to express ourselves.
improved our oral English
learned so much about western culture and tradition.
for helping me improve my English when I was preparing the test 在我准备考试的时候,帮助我提高英语 for staying with me when I was struggling with myself 在我内心纠结的时候,陪伴我 for encouraging and supporting me when I was faced with difficulties 在我遇到困难的的时候,鼓励和支持我
It was so kind of you to explain my questions patiently when I didn't understand the grammar rules. 在我不明白语法规则的时候,您能耐心地给我解释问题,真是太好了。 It was so kind of you to comfort me when I felt there was no hope. 在我觉得没有希望的时候,您能安慰我,真是太好了。 It was so kind of you to help me realize my advantages and build my confidence when I wanted to give up. 在我想要放弃的时候,您能帮助我认识到自己的优势并且建立信心,真是太好了。 3、Besides, you bought Chinese food for me, which really surprised me. 4、What’s more, I shall always remember those ancient stories you told me, for they helped me know more about your culture and history.
It was you who had the patience for our questions and knew how to explain the answers. 是你在耐心地面对我们的问题,并且知道如何给我们解释清楚。 It was you who opened our eyes to our inner strength and motivated us to keep trying. 是你让我们看到自己的潜力,并且激励我们继续努力。 It was you who celebrated our achievements and made each one of us feel like a future star. 是你在祝贺我们取得的成就,让我们每个人都觉得自己会成为未来的明星。 次反复的是“It was you who did sth and did sth 是你做了某事,并且做了某事”这样一个标准的强调句。
套话
二段结尾
The experience you shared with us and your energy in learning will always accompany us.
Our fond memories of the time in your classroom will last a lifetime. 在您课上的美好回忆将会陪伴我们一生。 固定句式:The fond memories of the time with you will last a lifetime
二段开头
Looking back on our high-school days, we just can't help thinking of you. 回顾我们的高中时光,我们会情不自禁地想起你。 固定句式:Looking back on 某段时间, we just can't help thinking of you.
开头
On behalf of sb, I am writing these few lines to express our heartfelt gratitude to you for sth / for doing sth.如果是代表某个群体表达感谢,需要加入开头的“on behalf of sb 代表某人”,如果只是自身表达感谢,直接去掉这个短语部分即可。末尾的sth需要根据题目的要求替换对应内容,使用名词短语或动名词短语概括对方的行为即可
结尾
Thank you again for sth / doing sth. May you be blessed in everything you do.
报导
要求
保持客观的视角
报道类写作需要三段内容,分别概括活动内容、介绍活动经过结果、总结活动意义。
报道类写作是对于已经发生过的事件进行归纳总结,必须使用过去时态
动作描写
Sb do sth by doing sth, and by doing sth 某人做了某事,他们做了某事,并且做了某事”。第一个do sth是概括整体动作,后两个do sth是具体的细节动作。
活动类
比赛
参加人数
This annual event attracted about 150 faculty and students to compete in 活动吸引了150师生参加
跑步路线
The 5 kilometer racing route started from the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill, offering breathtaking natural views to all the participants . 在上面的句子基础上再加入非谓语进行补充,“路线从哪里开始,到哪里结束,提供了什么样的风景”,
事情经过和结果
Despite the physical challenge of the uphill path, all the runners successfully。。 finished the race, demonstrating unwavering perseverance and incredible sportsmanship .尽管上坡路很有挑战,所有的跑步者都成功地完成了比赛,展示出坚定的毅力和高度的体育精神。
积累
students from all grades 来自各个年级的学生 actively participated in this campaign 积极参与这次活动 raise students' awareness of recycling and reusing items 提升学生对物品回收和再利用的认识 reduce unnecessary purchases 减少不必要的购买 shrink the carbon footprint 减少碳排放 eco-friendly lifestyle 环保的生活方式 In the spirit of sth, an activity named XXX was conducted + 地点 + 时间. 本着某事的精神,在某地点某时间举办了名为某物的活动。
Students from all grades actively participated in this campaign by doing sth, and by doing sth.来自各个年级的学生积极参与了这次活动,他们做了某事,并且做了某事。
Through this activity, the school aimed to do sth so as to do sth and do sth. 通过这一活动,学校旨在做某事,从而达到做某事和做某事的目的。
It's now at the forefront of everyone's mind. Students are focused on sth more than they ever have been", the event organizer commented. "现在每个人对这件事都非常重视。学生们比以往任何时候都更关注某事",活动组织者评论道。 现在时→引用
通知
结构
活动目的、活动安排、活动要求.
模板
第一段:At the approach of 特定时间背景, 活动组织方 is to launch 某个活动 with the theme of 活动主题. It is designed to 活动目的一 and 活动目的二.
第二段:As scheduled, 这个活动 will be held at 时间 in 地点. Please keep in mind that 相关事项一(句子). 相关事项二(名词短语)are required. Particularly, 相关事项三.
第三段:We hold the belief that 优点一 and 优点二 are bound to add highlights to 这个活动. Your participation will make a big difference!
积累
voice the understanding of youth 表达对青春的理解 inspire the ambition of youngsters 激发年轻人的斗志 as scheduled 按照计划suitable dressing 着装正式 positive emotions 情绪积极the great festival belonging to the young people 属于年轻人的盛大节日fluent English 流利的英 diverse presentations 多彩的演讲 At the approach of …, sb is to launch … with the theme of …. 在某个特定场合即将到来之际,某人将开展以某事为主题的某项活动 Please keep in mind that … 请注意…… We hold the belief that … and … are bound to add highlights to . 我们相信某事和某事必将为某项活动增光添彩 Your participation will make a big difference! 您的参与会产生重要的意义
口头通知
开头
Good afternoon everyone. May I have your attention, please?
结尾
Thank you for your attention. 谢谢各位的关注。(
记叙文
写作思路
第一段:概括整个活动经历
Last weekend, my classmates and I participated in a picking activity, which left an unforgettable impression on me.
第二段:具体描述活动过程
出发到达、准备开始、连续动作、分工安排、 结果影响、心理感受、环境描述、结束离开
第三段:呈现个人感受
sweating as we were, we felt millions of satisfaction and sense of fulfillment and we had a wonderful weekend.。 虽然我们很累,但我们很满足和有成就感,我们有一个精彩的周末
Looking back, I really appreciate the activity, for it offers us a precious opportunity to purify our souls from the stressful urban life. The activity has passed, but the world heavy with the scent of fruits will stay in my mind forever. 回顾过去,我非常感谢这次活动,因为它给我们提供了一个宝贵的机会去做某事。这个活动结束了,但是某物会永远留在我的心里。 (第一个替换do sth,第二个替换sth)
演讲稿
竞选
思路
演讲风格、竞选要求、内容主题。
我是谁?为什么我能选?为什么我要选?拉票
开头
Good morning, dear judges. I am Candidate No.1. It is a great honor to stand here and compete for the Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange.早上好,亲爱的评委。我是1号候选人。很荣幸能够站在这里参加“文化交谊小使者”的竞选。
第二段
个人优势看上
With these advantages, I am confident in encouraging conversation under diverse cultural background and assisting to conduct globally-focused events in the campus.有了这些优势,我有信心促进不同文化背景下的交流,并且协助在校园里开展全球视角的活动。
结尾
I would appreciate your vote for me. If elected, I will strive to serve as a bridge of cultural exchange between the two schools. Thank you! 如果您能为我投票,我将不胜感激。如果当选,我会努力成为两校之间文化交流的桥梁。非常感谢!
演讲
用朴素的真情实感触动人
修辞手法
反复
积累
I am thrilled when it is time to do sth and sth 我很兴奋可以去做某事和做某事了 I love doing sth while doing sth 我喜欢在做某事的同时做某事 I love doing sth after sth 我喜欢在某事之后做某事 I love doing sth when I do sth 在我做某事的时候,我喜欢做某事
传统文化
introduce the real treasure in human history 介绍人类历史真正的瑰宝 take the courses systematically 系统地学习了课程 have a deep understanding of sth 对某事有深刻的理解 choose impressive examples 选择令人印象深刻的事例 gain the recognition of sb 获得某人的认可 practice your spoken Chinese 练习汉语口语 express yourself more clearly and fluently 表达更加清晰流畅 maximize the effectiveness of sth 最大程度提升某事的效果
议论文
要求
需要引用名人名言的时候,有很多说法可以作为标志,比如“As sb says, … 正如某人所说”,或者是“As an old saying goes, … 正如一句谚语所说”,范文里使用的“As sb puts it, …”其实是完全一样的含义,只是换了一个写法而已
写到个人观点的时候,建议尽量避免类似“I think”或“I believe”这种比较初级的写法,换用提出观点的标志短语,如“In my opinion, …”、“From my point of view, …”、“From my perspective, …”、“As far as I am concerned, …”等 提出观点 We should do sth instead of doing sth.
给出事例 Have you ever met …? 个人表态 For me, I will always do sth.
结尾
It might be difficult to hold ourselves accountable for mistakes big and small, but without a doubt, it’s the right thing to do.对各种大大小小的错误负责任可能会很困难,但毫无疑问,这是正确的做法。句式结构“It might be difficult to do sth, but without a doubt, it’s the right thing to do. 做某事可能会很困难,但毫无疑问,这是正确的做法”。
倡议
开头:引出话题
When it comes to sth, … 当提到某物的时候,……”是之前讲到过的引出文章主题的句型,
第二段:重要性与倡议
重要性到倡议的整体写作框架:“sth plays a key role in some place. Not only does it do sth, but also it does sth. Thus, it is imperative to do sth. 某物在某处发挥着重要作用。它不仅做了某事,而且还做了某事。因此,做某事势在必行
两个提建议的基本句型是“what we can do is do sth 我们能做的是做某事” 和“we can do sth to do sth 我们可以做某事,从而做某事”。
First of all, what we can do is place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. 首先,我们能做的是重视自身的日常行为。例如,不要把垃圾扔进海里。 What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. 另外,我们还可以发放宣传单页,从而呼吁更多的人保护海洋。参与的人越多,海洋的环境就会变得越好。
第三段:总体号召
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves ..to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 总而言之,保护海洋,刻不容缓。保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
积累
aim at sth 目标是某事 raise awareness of sth 提高对某事的认识 play a key role in our world 在全世界发挥着重要作用 offer us sufficient food 为我们提供充足的食物 maintain the balance of nature 维持自然生态的平衡 place importance on our daily actions 重视自身的日常行为 hand out leaflets 发放宣传单页 call on more people to do sth 呼吁更多人做某事 When it comes to sth, … 当提到某物的时候,…… sth plays a key role in some place. Not only does it do sth, but also it does sth. Thus, it is imperative to do sth. 某物在某处发挥着重要作用。它不仅做了某事,而且还做了某事。因此,做某事势在必行 what we can do is do sth 我们能做的是做某事 we can do sth to do sth 我们可以做某事,从而做某事 the more people are involved, the better sth is 参与的人越多,某物就会变得越好 it is high time that we did sth 是我们必须要做某事的时候了 to do sth is to do sth 做某事就是做某事
语法点
如果since后面是非延续性动作的过去时,就正常理解。 如果since后面是延续性动作的过去时,就按否定理解。 比如: It is three years since he began to smoke. 自从他开始抽烟,已经三年了。 “began to smoke”是非延续性动作,所以正常理解,“他已经抽了三年烟了”。 It is three years since he smoked. 自从他不抽烟,已经三年了。 “smoked”是延续性动作,所以按否定理解,“他已经戒了三年烟了”。
祝贺信
思路
第一段 祝贺 第二段 希望分享建议 第三段 再次祝贺 期待答复
与求助信相结合
主题
浮动主题
写写才能记住
英语作文
写作方法
多个形容词和插入语混
有效同时交代多个内容
多样性
蓝色:应用文写作固定句式和套路语句 紫色:定语从句 绿色:非谓语动词 棕色:逻辑连词 粉红色:常用名词短语(形容词+名词) 橙色:形容词和插入语
从整体定义到个别主题,背后仍然是概括到具体的写作逻辑。
先短后长→总+分
分:具体内容展开
+描述结果
+解释原因
…, which may be the reason why … 从原因到结果的定语从句写法
内容补充
前置动作
After....,
并列
when... ,or when...多情况描述
对比
Different from
Insead...相反的是
举例子
such as...+名词短语
For example....+句子
主题名词
展览exhibition 博物馆museum
演讲lecture
the Students’ Union学生会
website网站
介绍类
有逻辑介绍
从大到小,从内到外
概括到具体
主观和客观
介绍的实质就是说明,而说明就需要说明方法。常用的说明方法无外乎定义、特点、分类、对比、发展变化
内容高度概括,重点放于影响
动词短语可以在核心动作前后进行扩充,也就是动作原因、动作顺序、动作结果
套话
Hope this letter finds you well.”,字面直接翻译就是“希望这封信发现你一切都好
Hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share with you the exciting ..."World Book Day" activity held at my school in April. 展信佳。我写这封信是想为你介绍我们学校四月举行的“世界读书日”的活动。
结尾
That’s all. Hope you can have a deep insight into it. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. 就是这样了。希望你能有所了解。如果你有任何问题,请随时告诉我。
被询问
What do you think of my choice (plan)? I am looking forward to your advice. 你觉得我的选择(或计划)怎么样?期待着你的建议。
自我介绍
基本情况、性格、能力、兴趣爱好、过往经历
性格
outgoing nature.
广泛兴趣
keep expansive interests
具体
find sb adj 觉得某人如何如何 sth is my favorite 某物是我的最爱 fulfill my wildest imagination 最大发挥想象力 enjoy the excitement of sth 享受某事的快感
个人的喜好
主题选择,
主题展开,
限定范围
比较级是在两方面之间进行比较,而只要提到最高级,一定要限定范围,你的表述才具有合理性。简而言之,你要具备这样的反应:说到“我最……”的时候,一定要表述成“在……中,我最……”。这样就出现了范文中的前半句。三者以上才会有最高级,而三者以上的“在……中”使用的介词是among。
开展主题
有什么具体表现能够体现这种喜欢吗?时间是每个人最宝贵的财富,所以喜欢任何事物或人物最直接的表现,就是你愿意为他/她/它投入时间。在构思主题展开的时候,从时间角度出发是非常简单直接的写法,你能够设计的就是“自从……时候我就开始做这件事了”,或者“我每天都要花一定的时间去做这件事”。各位会发现,这个内容补充过后,你的主题就立住了,它不再是一句口号式的表达,而是有实际的内容在进行支撑。
主题意义
practice dancing on a regular basis 定期练习跳舞” 、“connect with others 与他人交流” “greatly enrich my campus life 丰富我的校园生活”。
move my body for fun and joy 为了好玩而舞动身体”、“relieve stress 释放压力”、“enjoy life 享受生活”
由表及里的、由他人到自己
It is more than just doing sth. It is a way to do sth 它不仅仅是做某事。它还是一种做某事的方式”,
套路
Besides, mastering any style of dance takes hard work, determination and patience, which shapes me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without dancing after schoo l.此外,学习任何类型的舞蹈都需要努力、决心和耐心,这塑造了我更好的个人品质。如果没有课后的跳舞活动,我就不会是现在的我。 doing sth takes hard work, determination and patience, which shapes me into a better person 做某事需要努力、决心和耐心,这塑造了我更好的个人品质
范文
Among the colorful after-school activities in our school, basketball is my favorite. I have been in the basketball team of my class since Senior 1. After school we practiced basketball on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and greatly enriches my campus life. I love basketball because it is more than just playing against another team for victory. It is a way to relieve stress and enjoy life. Besides, mastering any basketball technique takes hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be who I am today without basketball after school.(101字)
介绍事物
现象
描述当前的普遍情况
As you know, a growing number of young people would rather order food on the Internet or call a take-out restaurant for meals than cook at home. 如你所知,越来越多的年轻人宁愿在网上订餐或打电话给外卖餐厅叫送餐,也不愿意在家里做饭。
sth is popular, especially for people who do sth 某件事很普遍,特别是对于做某事的人而言”。
a growing number of people越来越多的人
would rather ...than...宁愿...而不宁愿
介绍个人的实际情况
As for me, I seldom order meals online. Instead, I like eating what my mother cooks at home. If she is free, she will teach me how to cook. 至于我,我很少在网上订餐。相反,我喜欢吃我母亲在家里做的东西。如果她有空,她会教我做饭。
I seldom do sth. Instead, I like doing sth 我很少做某事,相反的是,我喜欢做某事”体现了前后相反的内容逻辑,其实就是在说明“不点外卖”的原因
I often order food online when my parents are at work, or when my family wants to try something that tastes different. 当父母在工作时,或者当我们家想换换口味时,我经常在网上点餐。 when.....or when...多情况讲述
表达自己的观点意见。
In my view, our health is closely related to what we eat. The busier we are, the more attention we should pay to food. Therefore, I prefer cooking food at home and going on a balanced diet. 在我看来,我们的健康与我们吃的东西密切相关。我们越是忙碌,就越应该关注饮食。因此,我更愿意在家里做饭,并保持均衡的饮食。 1、“In my view 在我看来”的标志短语,用于直接陈述个人观点,等于“In my opinion”; 2、“the + 比较级 + we are,the + 比较级 + we should do sth 我们越……,就越应该做某事”,用于提出建议; 3、“sb prefer doing sth and doing sth 某人倾向于做某事及做某事”,用于直接表达个人态度
传统文化
an on-going competition entitled sth一个正在进行的名为某物的比赛 help students better appreciate the charm of Chinese culture 帮助学生更好地欣赏中国文化的魅力 improve our hand-on skills 提高我们的动手能力 deepen students' understanding of sth 加深学生对某物的理解 a hand-made product bearing distinctive Chinese elements 有独特中国元素的手工制品 daily objects with traditional cultural symbols 带有传统文化符号的日常用品 the unique features of the landscape in China 中国风景的独特之处 the natural scenery, famous architecture, or local customs 自然风光、著名建筑或本地风俗 I’m writing to share with you sth 我写这封信是要向你介绍某事 Hope this letter finds you well. 展信佳(希望你展开这封信的时候一切安好) The competition is held to do sth and to do sth. 举办这次比赛是为了做某事和做某事
活动类
思路
客观设计思路
听讲座(expert give us a lecture)
主观设计思路
做海报 (make poster)
句子
活动目的
To do sth and do sth, some activity will be held in some place at some time. 为了做某事和做某事,某个活动将于某时间在某地点举行。
on next Monday at 4 p.m in
扩充前置动作顺序 After searching related materials and completely understanding the authors′ opinions, we shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading. 在搜索了相关资料并且完全理解了作者的观点之后,我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法,并且努力提升阅读的意识。 扩充后置动作结果 We shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading, which eventually made this activity a great success. 我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法,并且努力提升阅读的意识,最终使这次活动取得了巨大的成功。
读书
inspire the enthusiasm about reading books 激发对阅读的热情 encourage students to read more books 鼓励学生读更多书 help students appreciate the value of books 帮助学生欣赏书籍的价值
There were various activities such as book fairs, book sharing, and a book donation.有各种各样的活动,如图书市场、图书分享和图书捐赠活动。
share one's unique views on books 分享某人对于书籍独特的看法 try one's best to promote the awareness of reading 努力提升阅读的意识
conduct an attractive activity with the theme of … 举办了一个以……为主题的有趣的活动 inspire the enthusiasm about sth 激发对某事的热情 search related materials 搜索相关材料 share one's views on sth 分享对某事的看法 try our best to promote the awareness of sth 努力提升对某事的意识 make this activity a great success 让这次活动圆满成功 never stop the pace of doing sth 永远不要停止做某事的步伐 have a deep insight into sth 对某事有深入了解 participated in this successful activity 参与这次成功的活动 enjoy the benefits of sth 享受某事的好处 The event aims to do sth 活动旨在做某事 The purpose of this activity is to do sth and do sth 活动的目的是做某事和做某事 What I have learned from the day is that … 我从这次活动里学到的是,…… There are various activities such as sth, sth, and sth 有各种各样的活动,如某事、某事和某事 I find sth to be the most rewarding 我认为某事是最有意义的 It is interesting to do sth 做某事是很有趣的过程
书的影响
courage, perseverance and confidence 勇气、毅力和信心 time of self-doubt and depression 自我怀疑、情绪低落的时期 help me regain my confidence 帮助我重拾信心 focused on my efforts No … has ever influenced me so much as sb / sth 没有什么对我的影响和某人或某物一样 I am deeply struck by the famous quote “…”. 书中的这句名言给我留下了深刻的印象:“……” sth greatly motivate me when I fail 在我失败时,某物极大地激励了我 sth also reminds me that … 某物还提醒我…… the will to struggle is what counts, not the result 最重要的不是结果,而是奋斗时的意志 I will definitely make it! 我一定会成功的! This is the meaning of sth to me 这就是某事对我的意义
第一段是对书籍客观层面的描述,第二段则是个人主观层面的感受。所谓“对你的影响”,就是这本书在你身上产生了什么作用,促成了你哪些方面的改变,让你明白了什么道理。根据字数要求,大致列出2-3条就足够了。
网络安全
raise our awareness of information security 提高信息安全意识 learn how to protect personal information 学习如何保护个人信息 an expert in public security 公共安全方面的专家 give us a lecture on sth 给我们进行某方面的主题讲座 cyber-crimes and how to take precautions 网络犯罪和如何防范 make posters to remind sb 制作海报提醒某人 avoid falling victim to relevant traps 避免成为这种陷阱的受害者 both interesting and instructive 既有趣又有意义 share your feelings 分享你的感想
人工智能
Utilize AI tools to enhance learning outcomes:利用人工智能工具提高学习效果 Foster critical thinking and problem-solving skills:培养批判性思维和解决问题的能力 Promote personalized learning experiences:促进个性化的学习体验 Balance the benefits and risks of AI adoption:平衡人工智能采用的利弊 AI-powered personalized learning:基于人工智能的个性化学习 AI-assisted grading and feedback:人工智能辅助评分和反馈 AI-based tutoring systems:基于人工智能的辅导系统 AI-powered adaptive testing:基于人工智能的自适应测试 AI-supported student engagement:支持学生的人工智能互动 AI-enabled learning analytics:基于人工智能的学习分析 AI-based assessment tools:基于人工智能的评估工具 AI-enhanced educational resources:基于人工智能的教育资源 AI-driven student performance monitoring:基于人工智能的学生表现监测
征稿
从整体定义到个别主题,背后仍然是概括到具体的写作逻辑。
本质是介绍类
文化
开头
The symbol of China is the first thing that comes to your mind when it comes to this nation. Among all the real or virtual things, one stands out: Chinese dragon. 所谓中国符号,就是在谈到这个国家时你首先想到的事物。在所有现实或虚拟的事物中,最具有代表性的就是“中国龙”。
中间构思
中国龙
起点:Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck.中国龙是吉祥的象征。(最基本的构思,中国龙是什么,代表着什么)加入并列结构: Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(使用二至三个内容并列扩充)加入对比: Different from dragons in the western,Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.和西方的龙不一样,中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(通过对比的写作手法让读者建立起更加形象直观的内容印象)加入补充描述: Different from dragons in the western, which are pictured as a somewhat dinosaur appearance with unstoppable strength and evil power, Chinese dragon is regarded as a symbol of good luck, positive energy and royal power.和西方的龙不一样,西方的龙外貌类似恐龙,力量强大邪恶,而中国龙是吉祥、正能量和皇室权力的象征。(把对比的另一方特征补充完整,这部分可以根据字数需求直接删去,对句意不会造成任何影响)
长城
As one of the star attractions in China, the Great Wall is considered as the symbol of China and the wisdom of Chinese people. It stretches a total length of over 9000 kilometers, crossing 9 provinces and municipalities. As the most magnificent defensive architecture in the world, the Great Wall was enlisted into the World Cultural Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1987.作为中国的著名景点之一,长城是中国和中国人民智慧的象征。它的总长度超过9000公里,横跨9个省市。作为世界上最宏伟的防御性建筑,长城于1987年被联合国教科文组织列入世界文化遗产地。
结尾
Not only does Chinese dragon represent Chinese culture, but it has a huge influence for thousands of years and is loved by most Chinese people. Therefore, it is the best symbol of China. 中国龙不仅代表着中国文化,而且几千年来带来了巨大的影响,受到了众多中国人的喜爱。因此,它是最佳的中国符号
积累
the first thing that comes to your mind 首先想到的事物 stands out 脱颖而出 be regarded as a symbol of good luck 被认为是好运的象征 sb identify oneself as … 某人把自己称作…… represent Chinese culture 代表中国文化have a huge influence 带来了巨大的影响
推荐
套话
I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. 2、I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. 很高兴得知你对某物感兴趣并且想了解更多,我认为某物是你的最佳选择”。
What do you think of the course? 8、I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it. 推荐类应用文典型收尾:“你觉得某物怎么样?我保证你会有很多乐趣的”。
I hope my introduction is helpful. Please let me know if you have further questions. 希望我的介绍对你有帮助。如果有其它问题,请随时告诉我。
基本句式
I suggest you...which will help you you should Why not Don’t forget to .. It is necessary to it is highly recommended
思路
建议+影响(正面/负面)
动作+结果-目的
内容(主题,时间,具体内容)+推荐原因
sb do sth not noly because ,but because...
积累
传统文化
appreciate its time-honored development 欣赏某物悠久的历史 learn the detailed process of how it spread 了解某物传播的具体过程 have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China 广泛了解中国古代的历史文化 have a great chance to feel the charm of sth by doing sth有机会通过做某事感受某物的魅力 sth represent a unique type of Chinese folk art某物代表中国民俗艺术的独特类型 breathe the historical air when visiting all the must-see spots在参观必去的景点时感受历史的气息 discover Chinese elements and features 发现中国元素和特色 have a deeper look into historical events, folk arts and traditional customs.深入了解历史事件、民俗艺术和传统习俗 explore Chinese history and culture探索中国历史文化 feel the combination of tradition and modernity 感受传统和现代的融合 be amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people 赞叹中国人民的智慧 be impressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization为中华文明的灿烂而感到震撼 be totally immersed in Chinese culture沉浸在中国文化中
京剧
推荐原因
I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, Mo, Chou, the five main characters of Beijing Opera. 我知道你非常喜欢戏剧,所以你会更容易理解生、旦、净、末、丑这五种京剧的主要角色。(推荐原因一) It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera performers face to face. 另外,这是一门互动课程,你将有机会与京剧演员面对面交流。
志愿者活动
the volunteer 志愿者 the voluntary activity 志愿者活动 take part in / participate in / attend 参加
help to pick up garbage 帮助捡垃圾 clean up small advertisements 清理小广告 help to grow plants and flowers 帮助栽种花草 make the community cleaner and tidier. 让社区更加干净整洁 beautify the community environment. 美化社区环境 greatly improve the appearance of sth 极大改善某物的面貌 sth take on a new look. 某物焕然一新
assist them when they don’t know how to do sth 在他们手足无措时帮助他们 help sb do sth to save them the trouble 帮助某人做某事以减少他们的麻烦 help to give out leaflets. 帮助发放宣传单页 draw much attention from the passers-by 引起路人的关注 encourage people’s behavior/awareness on environmental protection 鼓励人们环保的行为/意识 reflects qualities of a good citizen. 反映一名公民的良好素质 make a difference 发挥重要作用 have the most amazing experience by doing very simple things for others. 通过服务他人给自己一个很赞的经历 find it our duty to protect the environment. 保护环境是我们的责任 hope more and more people will join us in green actions. 希望更多人加入到我们的绿色行动中 find the activity quite meaningful and educative 发现这个活动非常有意义有教育性 feel the simple pleasure of life 感受到生活简单的快乐 harvest a sense of achievement / satisfaction 收获一种成就感/满足感 sth is worth the active participation 某事值得积极参与
地点
hospital 医院 / caring center 护理中心 nursing home 养老院 / welfare house 福利院 neighborhood / community 社区
报名时间地点
If you are interested, please sign up at the Student Union office from 12:30 to 13:30 this Friday. 如果你们感兴趣,请于本周五12:30至13:30到学生会办公室报名。(
邀请
套话
开头
You must have heard of the upcoming Music Festival to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.
结尾
I’d be more than delighted if you could come and share this joyful(meaning) moment with me. Looking forward to your early reply
时间
As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 p.m. to 8 p.m. next Sunday. 先地点再时间,时间按小到大
You must have heard of the upcoming 活动名称 to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in 活动主题词汇, I am writing to invite you to participate in the event with me. As scheduled, it will be held 在某个地点 from 具体时间一 to 具体时间二 + 具体日期. The theme of this activity is “活动主题”, so we will 具体动作一. Also, 具体动作二 I’d be more than delighted if you could come and join this joyful moment with me. Looking forward to your early reply.
积累
tasty food and drinks 可口的食物和饮料 attractive and fascinating performances 精彩纷呈的表演
人物感受
be fully absorbed in sth 沉浸在某事中 be deeply immersed in sth 沉浸在某事中 be greatly impressed with sth 对某事印象深刻 be fascinated with sth 对某事着迷
分层标志
Also, Besides, Furthermore, What′s more, Additionally, In addition, Apart from that , … 除此之外
As for the preparations, sport suits and a pair of comfortable sneakers are necessary. It is also recommended to bring some water or snacks. This is not a competition, so just relax and enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery. 至于准备工作,建议穿运动服和舒适的运动鞋。你也可以带一些水或零食。这次活动不是比赛,所以你可以放松享受新鲜空气和美丽的风景。 As for the preparations, sth and sth are necessary. 至于准备工作,某物和某物是有必要的 It is also recommended to do sth. 同时也推荐你做某事 Just do sth and do sth. 只要做某事和做某事就可以了
约稿
套话
开头
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
结尾
You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you
思路
对事物的简单介绍
主观和客观两个方向一起配合
对比进行说明
different from..不同于.... compare with..
转折
细节扩充
因果关系 举例子
注意
字数 时间限制
建议
思路
建议的主题相关语句:给予对方的肯定、引出建议的过渡句、开场和收尾 提出建议的具体句式:各种不同的提建议的方式
有几个建议? 2、每个建议是用什么句式写作的? 3、补充了什么样的细节。
结构框架
分层的标志词
first and foremost besides in addition
使用不同的提建议的写作方法,避免重复
情态动词
祈使句:v .. 反问句:why not
非谓语动词作主语
形式主语句型
动词短语(积累)
补充具体细节,描述建议的原因、结果或具体方式
建议 + 这么做的原因(动作原因)→not only because ,but because for 从句 建议 + 这么做会有什么结果(动作结果)→which make .. 建议 + 具体要怎么做(动作方式)→by doing sth and doing sth
套话
开头
How is everything going recently? 寒暄 Knowing that you are going to...,I am writing to give you some suggestions
结尾
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of great help to you . And don’t hesitate to tell me if you have any problems.
积累
I suggest you...which will help you
As for the preparations, sth and sth are necessary. 至于准备工作,某物和某物是有必要的
doing sth will help
比较级,比较级”,表示“越……,就越……”, 第一个比较级后面加建议的动作,第二个比较级后面加正面的结果。
will definitely draw students’ attention. 吸引注意力
the upcoming Students’ Art Show 即将到来的学生画展 take much interest in paintings 对绘画很感兴趣 participate in the event with me 和我一起参加这次活动 as scheduled 按照日程安排 be fully absorbed in sth 沉浸在某事中 the attractive and fascinating artworks 精彩纷呈的画作 on the reflection of environmental protection 反映环境保护 join this joyful moment with me 和我一起加入这个愉快的时刻
主题
画画
paintings
传统文化可以写成“The Symbol of China 中国的符号”,环境保护可以写成范文里的“Human and Nature 人与自然”,志愿者活动可以写成“Help Those in Need 帮助有需要的人”
别人求教困难
开头
When it comes to phone addiction, I cannot relate to you more. 说到手机上瘾,我非常理解你的感受。
there are times when sb do sth 某人经常做某事
There are times when I immerse(沉迷) myself in..
第二段
However, we all need to make a change before consequences pile up. Here are a few things you can do.但是,我们都需要在积重难返之前做出改变。以下是一些你可以做的事情。
Besides, it is better to develop some healthy habits to keep your focus away from your phone, such as reading or playing basketball. 此外,最好养成健康的习惯,使你的注意力远离手机,如阅读或打篮球。
了解中国
bullet train 高铁 travel at a speed of about 350 kilometers per hour 以每小时约350公里的速度行驶 get a clear idea of what high technology brings to China 清楚地了解到高科技给中国带来的影响。 enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way 欣赏到沿途美丽的风景 develop a deeper understanding of sth 加深对某物的了解 share your impression with people around you 与周围的人分享你的感受
咨询
求助
思路
求助流程
1、描述问题发生的背景 2、说明具体的问题所在 3、希望对方给予的帮助 4、表示感谢
开头
How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to
结尾
Looking forward to your early reply
句式
Would you please give us some suggestions on sth? 你能在某些方面给我们一些建议吗?(向对方寻求建议) Please let me know sth. 请告诉我某事。(询问对方的需求) It would be great if we could do sth. 如果我们能做某事,那就更好了。(向对方提出请求)
写作
connect sentences logically 把句子有逻辑地连接起来” 、“develop a paragraph 展开一个段落” “structure an essay 构建一篇文章”。
咨询
I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information.
写作原因
Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about ....
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
体育锻炼
find some useful workout videos from the internet 从网上找到有用的健身视频 keep following the 15-minute program twice a day 坚持每天两次跟随15分钟的锻炼项目prepare inexpensive fitness equipment 准备便宜的健身器材 involve these exercises into my workout plan 将这些锻炼纳入我的健身计划 jogging around my neighborhood 在小区慢跑 walking with my parents 和父母一起散步 physical exercises / staying active / workout / fitness 运动、健身、锻炼 explore new ways to do sth 寻找新的方法去做某事 Actually, it’s much easier than I thought. 其实这比我想象的要容易得多I am truly grateful for your concern about sth 非常感谢你对某事的关心 sth is an important part of my life 某物在我的生活里很重要
申请
句模板
自我介绍
I’m Li Hua, presently a student of Senior 3. I’m writing to apply for.... I believe I will fit your position for the following reasons.
引入
I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 我看了你们在网上发布的夏令营公告,我对它很感兴趣。(申请信功能句式
为什么申请
I have been looking for opportunities to visit different places, which will definitely help broaden my knowledge and deepen my understanding of the local life.
......and I always have a strong passion for it. 我一直对它有很强烈的热情
结尾
I’ll be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
素材
性格
外向
I possess an outgoing and energetic nature. I have my hearts on all kinds of outdoor activities, which enables me to become stronger and feel relaxed. 我性格外向,精力充沛。我喜欢各种户外活动,它们让我变得更强壮更放松。
内向
I possess an easy-going nature. My classmates find me active and open —-minded, which explains why we can always make achievements as a good team. 我的性格随和。我的同学们觉得我很积极主动、心态开放,这就是为什么我们总是能组成团队取得成就。
兴趣爱好
I possess a passion for photography and writing. I believe it is these two methods that allow me to memorize those impressive and unforgettable moments .我非常喜欢摄影和写作。我认为正是这两种方法让我能记住那些令人印象深刻和难忘的时刻。
I keep an expansive interest. Classic English novels are my favorite, while drawing pictures fulfills my wildest imagination. Besides, as a real basketball fan, I enjoy the excitement of sweat running down my cheeks. 我的兴趣广泛。英文经典小说是我的最爱,而画画则满足了我最疯狂的想象力。此外,作为一个真正的篮球迷,我很享受汗水顺着脸颊流下的兴奋的感觉。
工作能力
I excel at my grades. Owing to my constant efforts and passion for English, I have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest. 我的成绩很优秀。凭借我的不断努力和对英语的热情,我在一次英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。 I obtain good working skills. I have similar work experiences, which enables me to predict the possible problems and find solutions. 我有良好的工作技能。我有类似的工作经验,这让我能预测可能出现的问题并找到解决方案。
知识
I exhibit excellent potential. With my independence, it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. 我有优秀的潜力。因为我的独立,我很容易适应新的环境。 I excel at language ability. After years of English study, I can introduce the traditions of Chinese culture to the foreign friends with fluent speaking English. 我的语言能力很出色。经过多年的英语学习,我可以流利地用英语向外国朋友介绍中国的传统文化。
自我优势
speak English fluently 流利地说英语 be praised for my English writing 因为我的英语写作受到表扬 an active and enthusiastic person 一个积极热情的人 enjoy working with different people 喜欢与不同的人合作 adapt well to new situations 容易适应新的环境
In the past two years, I've been involved in various cultural activities as a volunteer, introducing Chinese history and traditions to the foreign visitors. 在过去的两年里,我作为志愿者参与了各种文化活动,向外国游客介绍中国的历史和传统
感谢
积累
became more confident to express ourselves.
improved our oral English
learned so much about western culture and tradition.
for helping me improve my English when I was preparing the test 在我准备考试的时候,帮助我提高英语 for staying with me when I was struggling with myself 在我内心纠结的时候,陪伴我 for encouraging and supporting me when I was faced with difficulties 在我遇到困难的的时候,鼓励和支持我
It was so kind of you to explain my questions patiently when I didn't understand the grammar rules. 在我不明白语法规则的时候,您能耐心地给我解释问题,真是太好了。 It was so kind of you to comfort me when I felt there was no hope. 在我觉得没有希望的时候,您能安慰我,真是太好了。 It was so kind of you to help me realize my advantages and build my confidence when I wanted to give up. 在我想要放弃的时候,您能帮助我认识到自己的优势并且建立信心,真是太好了。 3、Besides, you bought Chinese food for me, which really surprised me. 4、What’s more, I shall always remember those ancient stories you told me, for they helped me know more about your culture and history.
It was you who had the patience for our questions and knew how to explain the answers. 是你在耐心地面对我们的问题,并且知道如何给我们解释清楚。 It was you who opened our eyes to our inner strength and motivated us to keep trying. 是你让我们看到自己的潜力,并且激励我们继续努力。 It was you who celebrated our achievements and made each one of us feel like a future star. 是你在祝贺我们取得的成就,让我们每个人都觉得自己会成为未来的明星。 次反复的是“It was you who did sth and did sth 是你做了某事,并且做了某事”这样一个标准的强调句。
套话
二段结尾
The experience you shared with us and your energy in learning will always accompany us.
Our fond memories of the time in your classroom will last a lifetime. 在您课上的美好回忆将会陪伴我们一生。 固定句式:The fond memories of the time with you will last a lifetime
二段开头
Looking back on our high-school days, we just can't help thinking of you. 回顾我们的高中时光,我们会情不自禁地想起你。 固定句式:Looking back on 某段时间, we just can't help thinking of you.
开头
On behalf of sb, I am writing these few lines to express our heartfelt gratitude to you for sth / for doing sth.如果是代表某个群体表达感谢,需要加入开头的“on behalf of sb 代表某人”,如果只是自身表达感谢,直接去掉这个短语部分即可。末尾的sth需要根据题目的要求替换对应内容,使用名词短语或动名词短语概括对方的行为即可
结尾
Thank you again for sth / doing sth. May you be blessed in everything you do.
报导
要求
保持客观的视角
报道类写作需要三段内容,分别概括活动内容、介绍活动经过结果、总结活动意义。
报道类写作是对于已经发生过的事件进行归纳总结,必须使用过去时态
动作描写
Sb do sth by doing sth, and by doing sth 某人做了某事,他们做了某事,并且做了某事”。第一个do sth是概括整体动作,后两个do sth是具体的细节动作。
活动类
比赛
参加人数
This annual event attracted about 150 faculty and students to compete in 活动吸引了150师生参加
跑步路线
The 5 kilometer racing route started from the school gate and ended at the foot of the South Hill, offering breathtaking natural views to all the participants . 在上面的句子基础上再加入非谓语进行补充,“路线从哪里开始,到哪里结束,提供了什么样的风景”,
事情经过和结果
Despite the physical challenge of the uphill path, all the runners successfully。。 finished the race, demonstrating unwavering perseverance and incredible sportsmanship .尽管上坡路很有挑战,所有的跑步者都成功地完成了比赛,展示出坚定的毅力和高度的体育精神。
积累
students from all grades 来自各个年级的学生 actively participated in this campaign 积极参与这次活动 raise students' awareness of recycling and reusing items 提升学生对物品回收和再利用的认识 reduce unnecessary purchases 减少不必要的购买 shrink the carbon footprint 减少碳排放 eco-friendly lifestyle 环保的生活方式 In the spirit of sth, an activity named XXX was conducted + 地点 + 时间. 本着某事的精神,在某地点某时间举办了名为某物的活动。
Students from all grades actively participated in this campaign by doing sth, and by doing sth.来自各个年级的学生积极参与了这次活动,他们做了某事,并且做了某事。
Through this activity, the school aimed to do sth so as to do sth and do sth. 通过这一活动,学校旨在做某事,从而达到做某事和做某事的目的。
It's now at the forefront of everyone's mind. Students are focused on sth more than they ever have been", the event organizer commented. "现在每个人对这件事都非常重视。学生们比以往任何时候都更关注某事",活动组织者评论道。 现在时→引用
通知
结构
活动目的、活动安排、活动要求.
模板
第一段:At the approach of 特定时间背景, 活动组织方 is to launch 某个活动 with the theme of 活动主题. It is designed to 活动目的一 and 活动目的二.
第二段:As scheduled, 这个活动 will be held at 时间 in 地点. Please keep in mind that 相关事项一(句子). 相关事项二(名词短语)are required. Particularly, 相关事项三.
第三段:We hold the belief that 优点一 and 优点二 are bound to add highlights to 这个活动. Your participation will make a big difference!
积累
voice the understanding of youth 表达对青春的理解 inspire the ambition of youngsters 激发年轻人的斗志 as scheduled 按照计划suitable dressing 着装正式 positive emotions 情绪积极the great festival belonging to the young people 属于年轻人的盛大节日fluent English 流利的英 diverse presentations 多彩的演讲 At the approach of …, sb is to launch … with the theme of …. 在某个特定场合即将到来之际,某人将开展以某事为主题的某项活动 Please keep in mind that … 请注意…… We hold the belief that … and … are bound to add highlights to . 我们相信某事和某事必将为某项活动增光添彩 Your participation will make a big difference! 您的参与会产生重要的意义
口头通知
开头
Good afternoon everyone. May I have your attention, please?
结尾
Thank you for your attention. 谢谢各位的关注。(
记叙文
写作思路
第一段:概括整个活动经历
Last weekend, my classmates and I participated in a picking activity, which left an unforgettable impression on me.
第二段:具体描述活动过程
出发到达、准备开始、连续动作、分工安排、 结果影响、心理感受、环境描述、结束离开
第三段:呈现个人感受
sweating as we were, we felt millions of satisfaction and sense of fulfillment and we had a wonderful weekend.。 虽然我们很累,但我们很满足和有成就感,我们有一个精彩的周末
Looking back, I really appreciate the activity, for it offers us a precious opportunity to purify our souls from the stressful urban life. The activity has passed, but the world heavy with the scent of fruits will stay in my mind forever. 回顾过去,我非常感谢这次活动,因为它给我们提供了一个宝贵的机会去做某事。这个活动结束了,但是某物会永远留在我的心里。 (第一个替换do sth,第二个替换sth)
演讲稿
竞选
思路
演讲风格、竞选要求、内容主题。
我是谁?为什么我能选?为什么我要选?拉票
开头
Good morning, dear judges. I am Candidate No.1. It is a great honor to stand here and compete for the Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange.早上好,亲爱的评委。我是1号候选人。很荣幸能够站在这里参加“文化交谊小使者”的竞选。
第二段
个人优势看上
With these advantages, I am confident in encouraging conversation under diverse cultural background and assisting to conduct globally-focused events in the campus.有了这些优势,我有信心促进不同文化背景下的交流,并且协助在校园里开展全球视角的活动。
结尾
I would appreciate your vote for me. If elected, I will strive to serve as a bridge of cultural exchange between the two schools. Thank you! 如果您能为我投票,我将不胜感激。如果当选,我会努力成为两校之间文化交流的桥梁。非常感谢!
演讲
用朴素的真情实感触动人
修辞手法
反复
积累
I am thrilled when it is time to do sth and sth 我很兴奋可以去做某事和做某事了 I love doing sth while doing sth 我喜欢在做某事的同时做某事 I love doing sth after sth 我喜欢在某事之后做某事 I love doing sth when I do sth 在我做某事的时候,我喜欢做某事
传统文化
introduce the real treasure in human history 介绍人类历史真正的瑰宝 take the courses systematically 系统地学习了课程 have a deep understanding of sth 对某事有深刻的理解 choose impressive examples 选择令人印象深刻的事例 gain the recognition of sb 获得某人的认可 practice your spoken Chinese 练习汉语口语 express yourself more clearly and fluently 表达更加清晰流畅 maximize the effectiveness of sth 最大程度提升某事的效果
议论文
要求
需要引用名人名言的时候,有很多说法可以作为标志,比如“As sb says, … 正如某人所说”,或者是“As an old saying goes, … 正如一句谚语所说”,范文里使用的“As sb puts it, …”其实是完全一样的含义,只是换了一个写法而已
写到个人观点的时候,建议尽量避免类似“I think”或“I believe”这种比较初级的写法,换用提出观点的标志短语,如“In my opinion, …”、“From my point of view, …”、“From my perspective, …”、“As far as I am concerned, …”等 提出观点 We should do sth instead of doing sth.
给出事例 Have you ever met …? 个人表态 For me, I will always do sth.
结尾
It might be difficult to hold ourselves accountable for mistakes big and small, but without a doubt, it’s the right thing to do.对各种大大小小的错误负责任可能会很困难,但毫无疑问,这是正确的做法。句式结构“It might be difficult to do sth, but without a doubt, it’s the right thing to do. 做某事可能会很困难,但毫无疑问,这是正确的做法”。
倡议
开头:引出话题
When it comes to sth, … 当提到某物的时候,……”是之前讲到过的引出文章主题的句型,
第二段:重要性与倡议
重要性到倡议的整体写作框架:“sth plays a key role in some place. Not only does it do sth, but also it does sth. Thus, it is imperative to do sth. 某物在某处发挥着重要作用。它不仅做了某事,而且还做了某事。因此,做某事势在必行
两个提建议的基本句型是“what we can do is do sth 我们能做的是做某事” 和“we can do sth to do sth 我们可以做某事,从而做某事”。
First of all, what we can do is place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. 首先,我们能做的是重视自身的日常行为。例如,不要把垃圾扔进海里。 What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. 另外,我们还可以发放宣传单页,从而呼吁更多的人保护海洋。参与的人越多,海洋的环境就会变得越好。
第三段:总体号召
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves ..to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 总而言之,保护海洋,刻不容缓。保护海洋就是保护我们自己。
积累
aim at sth 目标是某事 raise awareness of sth 提高对某事的认识 play a key role in our world 在全世界发挥着重要作用 offer us sufficient food 为我们提供充足的食物 maintain the balance of nature 维持自然生态的平衡 place importance on our daily actions 重视自身的日常行为 hand out leaflets 发放宣传单页 call on more people to do sth 呼吁更多人做某事 When it comes to sth, … 当提到某物的时候,…… sth plays a key role in some place. Not only does it do sth, but also it does sth. Thus, it is imperative to do sth. 某物在某处发挥着重要作用。它不仅做了某事,而且还做了某事。因此,做某事势在必行 what we can do is do sth 我们能做的是做某事 we can do sth to do sth 我们可以做某事,从而做某事 the more people are involved, the better sth is 参与的人越多,某物就会变得越好 it is high time that we did sth 是我们必须要做某事的时候了 to do sth is to do sth 做某事就是做某事
语法点
如果since后面是非延续性动作的过去时,就正常理解。 如果since后面是延续性动作的过去时,就按否定理解。 比如: It is three years since he began to smoke. 自从他开始抽烟,已经三年了。 “began to smoke”是非延续性动作,所以正常理解,“他已经抽了三年烟了”。 It is three years since he smoked. 自从他不抽烟,已经三年了。 “smoked”是延续性动作,所以按否定理解,“他已经戒了三年烟了”。
祝贺信
思路
第一段 祝贺 第二段 希望分享建议 第三段 再次祝贺 期待答复
与求助信相结合
主题
浮动主题
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