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刘晓艳写作笔记——句式
这是一篇关于刘晓艳写作——句式笔记的思维导图，主要包括：简单句、被动、there be、比较结构、修辞、虚拟语气、倒装、特殊结构、状语和状语从句、定语和定语从句、同位语和同位语从句、主语从句、并列句。
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简单句
被动
只要在作文中听到我们、人们、大家、许多人、越来越多的人等人或人称代词做主语的时候，都可以考虑写成被动。
写在作文第一段最后一句话，引出文章中心的时候使用或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用
Parents should be respected by us.
Parents
Suporiors
the elderly
senior citizens
Should
Ought to
Be supposed to
we us people
children
kids
offspring
desendants
experts and professors
all children and adults
men and women in all walks
teenagers and youngsters
customers
Superstars ought not to be pursued blindly by teenagers and youngsters
not
never
by no means
under no circumstances
fail to
Pollution is thought very serious by increasely number of men and women in all walks.
think
hold
argue
be of the opinion that
very
pretty
exceedingly
serious
grave
severe
fatal
be of great severity
be of 加名词，等于这个词的形容词
there be
写在第二段第一句，引出原因分析的时候使用
there exist
there appear
There exsit many reasons to explain my idea.
many
a sea of/an ocean of
a multitude of
immense amout of
numerous
reason
causes
factors
elements
explain
account for
contribute to
导致
idea
point
perspective
There is strong evidence to show that
有明显的确凿证据表明
There is a growing worldwide awareness around the world that
原来越多人的认为
比较结构
as ... as..
作文中只要出现形容词或副词的地方，都可以考虑写成as...as..句型，推荐写在第一段最后一句，引出文章中心的时候；或者是第三段第一句话，文章总结的时候使用
Liu is as beautiful as a white lily, which manage to catch the eyes of a host of teenagers and youngsters.
Be
现在进行时的be动词不能背替换
所有的感官动词都可以替换be动词
look、smell、taste、fell、sound
seem、appear、prove
become、get
keep、remain
beautiful
elegant
charming
Confidence is as important as food,which providers the energy that we need.
只要是一件好事，都可以写很重要，可用这个句型
Pollution became as severe as earthquakes,which have threatened the health of helpless native or even taken their lives away.
只要是一件坏事，都可以写很严重，可以用这个句型
the more...the more
翻译成越...就越... 本句型推荐写在作文的第二段，分析问题原因的时候使用
The higher one climbs ,the farther he will see.
the+形容词或副词的比较级+句子，the+形容词或副词的比较级+句子（主句将来时，从句一般现在时）
The harder all children and adults keep ,the more fortunate they will become.
The more frequently cultures are exchanged,the more rapidly economy will advance.
这两个词修饰实义动词，所以应该用副词
修辞
比喻
sth 很重要
confidence is to 人 as water is to fish.
就翻译成自信很重要
Sth is to sth as water is to fish.
as foundation is to high skyscrapers.
as the infinite bule sky is to little birds.
as sunshine in spring is to creatures on th earth.
一定要自己写一个
sth 很严重
sth is serious
sth seems to 人
as pollution is to all the human beings.
as intensive pain is to terminally ill patients.
as severe natural disasters are to powerless natives.
一定要自己写一个
排比
Pursing stars is a popular trend among youngsters which means that
we buy their cds, we take part in their concerts and wn learn to sing their songs when we are still yong.
虚拟语气
if 虚拟语气
推荐写在作文的第二段最后一句话，反面论证的时候使用；或者是第三段第一句话，文章总结的时候使用
If you traveled to the next resort, I would close all my windows.
If the elderly failed to be respected by their offspring, they would be despised by their own children in the near future.
If every undergraduate were indulged in surfing on the internet, he would achieve nothing until to the end of their life.
they would be confronted with a dim and gloomy future
虚拟语气万能主句
It seems urgent that
本句型推荐写在第三段，具体措施的时候使用.他人措施
It seems cruical that
parent/teacher in primary schools or universities/communities
should educate/encourage
their kids / undergraduates/ residents
to do sth 或者 not to do sth
越准确得分越高
cannot have failed to do
相当于must,用于个人措施
we cannot have failed to
we要根据文章内容进行替换
倒装
把一句话写成一般疑问句的形式，也就是给一句话提个助动词或者是be动词放在句首，就是倒装。否定词放在句首用倒装
not only..but also倒装
He not only looks poor but also in fact keeps poor in his mind.
Not only does he look poor but also in fact keeps poor in his mind.
Respecting the elderly not only keeps a Chinese conventional virtue but also proves the responsibility of their offspring.
Not only does respecting parents keep a Chinese conventional virtue but also proves the responsibility of their offspring.
Not only does pursuing celebrities blindly exert great influence on the study of teenagers and youngsters but also proves a waste of their time and youth.
so.. that倒装
把so引导的部分放在句首用作倒装。
My mather is so kind that she will never kill an ant.
So kind is my mather that she will never kill an ant.
I am so delighted that I cannot help laughing at midnight.
cannot help doing 情不自禁做某事
So delighted am I that I cannot help laughing at midnight.
So significant/fearful does sth keep that the issue should have been brought into limelight under modern conditions.
特殊结构
插入语
万能插入语，可以插在任何一句话的主谓之间
副词及短语
indeed、however
形容词及短语
needless to say（显而易见）
most important of all
important
vital
significant
play a key role in sth
常见的介词短语
子主题
双重否定
Never fail to
表示强调，强调谓语。可以写在任何一个肯定句谓语的前面
强调句型
It is ... that..
强调什么就放到it is 后面,其他不变
I met my old flame in the street yesterday.
It was my old flame that I met in the street yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met my old flame in the street.
It was I that met my old flame in the street.
因为特殊结构太短了，可能引起不了老师注意，所以一定要写在老师会留心看的地方，建议第一段最后一句、第二段第一句、第三局第一句
状语和状语从句
状语
只要在句子中加以下的一坨东西就一定是状语
副词、时间、地点、条件、原因、让步（虽然、尽管）、方式(by)、伴随（with）、目的、结果（so...that）、比较
在写作中的应用
作文中任何一句话的旁边都可以给它加一个状语的成分，把句子拉长，但是在第一段描述图画或图标的时候一定要加状语，使图画或图标的描述显得很完整
描述图画万能状语
in the center of the vivid picture
分析原因的万能状语
as every private individual tends to see it
in light of rapid advance of science and technology
although a multitude of experts and professors fail to pay attention to the problem
pay attention
place great emphasis on
attach great importance to
problem
issue
current situation
状语从句的满分表达
although
作文中任何一句话旁边都可以加although引导的让步状语从句，对这句话的意思进行弱转折，推荐写在第二段分析原因的时候使用
Surfing on the internet exerts great influence on the study and work of teenagers and youngsters,although it definitely makes our life more convenient.
They,in big cities,not only find more job opportunities but also enable their offspring enjoy equal education like their peers in urban areas,although they might lead a tough life
so...that
作文中只要出现形容词或副词的地方，都可以考虑写成so...that句型，但是推荐写在第一段的最后一句话，引出文章中心的时候使用；或者是第三段的第一句话，文章总结的时候使用。
Supporting the elderly keeps so crucial that time is supposed to be spared to accompany them.
Sth proves so significant/fearfull that it should have been brought into the limelight under modern conditions.
that后面最好改写一下
分词作状语
I hate you, I will kill you
I hating you ,I will kill you
Hating you , I will kill you
I,hating you , will kill you.
这是一个逐步改写的过程
作文中的使用
推荐写在作文的第一段，描述一幅图，一个主体，两个动作的时候使用。它的模板是sb(定),doing sth1(次要)+定语/状语，is doing sth2 +定语/状语
An American girl,smiling,is wearing Chinese traditional custome.
An American girl young as well as elegant , smiling sweetly on the face,is wearing Chinese traditional custome which is popular in the southwest of China.
A hot pot,smoking, is filled with cultures.
A hot pot not only delicious but also healthy, smoking in the center of the vivid cartoon, is filled with cultures from China and foreign nations.
或者such as Kongfu,Swan Lake and BiSheng.
专有名词首字母大写
定语和定语从句
定语
定语在写作中的使用，只要在作文中见到名词，都可以有意识的给它加一个定语成分，把句子拉长，但是在第一段描述图画的时候只要见到名词通常都要加定语，使图画的描述显得很生动
描述图画的万能定语
好的
as well as 连接两个并列的形容词
cute、lovely、little
都是可爱的意思
graceful、elegant、young
都是年轻貌美的意思
confident、energetic
optimistic
aggressive、ambitious
persistent
形容内心好的方向
Who looks exceedingly impressive to readers
万能好的定语！
坏的
fat、cruel、ugly
形容外貌
negative、pessimistic
short-sighted
短视的
contemptible
卑鄙的
hot-tempered
坏脾气的
terrible、disgraceful
Who looks rather less impressive to readers
万能坏的定语
A boy young as well as energetic is rushing to destination which becomes a new start.
An eldest son looking rather cruel as well as ugly is kicking out his father who trembles on the ground like a fallen leaf in the autumn.
定语从句
定语从句的满分表达，which 引导的定语从句，可以修饰前面整句话，which翻译成"这"
He looks like a lady-killer,which has provoked the widespread concern among all children and adults .
which has provoked the widespread concern among all children and adults .
可以写在任何一句话后面，对前面的内容补充说明。推荐写在作文的第二段，某个比较短的原因后面
同位语和同位语从句
名词做同位语
只要在作文中见到名词，原则上都可以在它的后面再加一个名词作为它的同位语出现，但是一片作文写完做多加两次！
A boy,a crazy football fan,is writing the name,an important symbol of someone,of beckham,a worldwide famous star,on his face,some part of the body.
同位语从句
推荐写在作文第二段，分析原因的时候使用，它的模板是the evidence that+一个表示原因的简单句，再加manifests that+文章的结论句
The evidence that she wears a pair of big eves manifests that she looks like a beauty.
The evidence that a sea of girl have worn colourful skirts manifests that summer is around the corner secretly.
The evidence that a heaven of bright stars and pure moonlights fail to be dectected by urban kids manifests that polution becomes increasingly fearful in our contemporary society
The evidence that rural migrant workers enable their children to enjoy better education there manifests that more of them tend to swarm into cities and towns.
主语从句
It is...that
本句型可以写在作文中任何一句话的前面，用于拉长句子。但是推荐写在第一段第一句话前面，用于引出图画∨图标
It proves common knowledge that
It seems beyond dispute that
显而易见
更好的主语从句的变体是，把it变what在that 前面加is
写在大作文第一句
What proves common knowledge is that
What seems beyond dispute is that
并列句
and、but
推荐写在作文的第一段，描述一幅图两个主体，两个动作的时候使用，或者是两幅图的时候使用。
描述图画的分类
一幅图
一个主体，两个动作
两个主体，两个动作
两幅图不分
图表作文
一幅图，两个主体，两个动作
and
likewise
at the same time
but
nevertheless
on the contrary
In the picture, the goal--keeper is imaging himself as samll as an ant. on the contrary,the soccer player is visualizing his rival outstandingly giant.
描述图画都用现在进行时，显得很生动
picture
cartoon
photograth
not only...but also
推荐写在文章第二段，分析文章原因的时候使用
Raising pets not only can reduce loneliness of senior citizens but also can cultivate the loving heart of kids.
英文顺序和中文顺序一样
Respecting the elderly not only keeps a Chinese conventional virtue but also proves the responsibility of their offspring.
Pursuing celebrities blindly not only exerts great influence on the study of youngsters and teenagers but also proves a waste of their time and youth.