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考研英语大小作文汇总,首先介绍了写作文要顶格写、写完一段空一行、评分依据、字数,介绍了小作文、大作文应该如何写,写作技巧,有助于我们更好的备考考研英语。
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首先
顶格写(一切左对齐)
写完一段空一行
评分根据
美观
字数
主旨句
语言描述
字数
一行写 9 ~ 11 词
英一
小作文
100 词
10 ~ 12 行
大作文
160 ~ 200 词
17 ~ 22 行
英二
小作文
100 词
10 ~ 12 行
大作文
150 词
16 ~ 18 行
小作文
@周思成
1. 称呼
平辈、朋友、同学
Dear Smith,
长辈、上级、教授
Dear Professor Smith,
给一个集体写信
Dear all,
给一个具体的集体
Dear members,
投诉信
Dear Sir or Madam,
询问信
To whom it may concern,
不认识对方
2. 第一段
第一句
熟人篇
去信
平辈
How's everything going?
长辈
I hope you are doing great!
特别欢迎
Welcome to China!
也可连用
Welcome to China, and I hope you are doing great!
回信,或得知对方的消息
回信
I was delighted to receive your letter, in which you mentioned that you would ... / I am so grateful to you for inviting me to attend your ...
得知喜讯
I felt thrilled to know that you had been successfully ...(eg: admitted to your dream school). Congratulations!
得知坏事
I felt very sorry to heard that ...
回复询问
I felt very happy to receive your inquiry about ...
陌生人篇
有组织的身份
I'm Li Ming,the president of the student union in our university.
I'm Li Ming, the coordinator of the upcoming school anniversary ceremony.
I'm Li Ming, one of the volunteers in the Hope Project Association in our university.
没组织没身份
I'm Li Ming, one of the students in the class you will teach in the coming semester.
I'm Li Ming, one of the staff in the marketing department. Unfortunately, I ...
第二句
写目的(letter、notice、email)
I am writing this letter to
The main purposes of this letter are to
接
give you some proposals for your ...
recommend you some places / a book etc ...
give you some information regarding ...
discuss with you my initial thoughts on ...
give you my apology and explain for ...
inquire about some useful information concerning ...
share with you my experience in ...
3. 第二段(主体)
可分为两段
每段都是一个中心句,两个分论点
The reasons for my ... are as follows.
The reasons why + clause are as follows.
Here are something about sth.
There is / are ...
纯写建议
In order (not) to ... , A ought to / you'd better do sth ...
If we/you ... , B is supposed to ... / ... is practical approach as well.
Since ... , C could ... (by doing)
It is possible for D to ...
We are likely to ... by doing sth.
建议 + 原因(细节决定成败)
需要一个中心句
There are several reasons for my recommendation. / The reasons why I recommend this ... are as follows. + 2 ~ 3 个原因
多重原因展开
Firstly / Initially, 原因一. Therefore, 带来什么好处
Firstly, sth / doing sth is of cardinal importance. So, it is essential for sb to do sth. / I suggest that sb do sth.
sth is must / you should do sth because / since / as / for + clause
If you are intent on / intend to do / have the intention of doing sth, you should do sth.
并列同词性单词,同结构语句
Moreover / Furthermore / In addition, if 假设一种需求、情况,原因二
So, you will be able to confront the new challenges in a better state.
Please attend to your personal belongings, and take them with you when you leave.
Please turn your mobile phones into silent mode.
Please keep quiet all the time.
Eating and drinking is not allowed in the ... area.
sth is required when entering ...
Besides, 原因三,which can 有什么帮助
4. 第三段
结尾段,简短,补充,体贴,热情
表示期待
I am really looking forword to your arrival / participation / reply ...
表示祝愿
I hope you will enjoy your new life here / hace a wonderful experience in ...
表示体贴
Should you need any further information / have any other problems, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I hope the above is useful to you. Let me know if you need anything else.
If you have any question, I am more than happy to assist you.
期待回复
If you can give me a prompt reply, I'll be much obliged.
可叠加使用
5. 最后
以 Best wishes / Best regards 结尾,再署名
熟人
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Warm regards!
Li Ming
陌生人、上级
Best regards!
Yours Faithfully,
Kind regards!
Li Ming
我想说
内容都是自己认知想象的,英语能力的沉淀会对写作大有裨益
例子,我会这么写
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm Li Ming, an international student from China. I am very delighted that we will live in our shared apartment. The main purposes of this email are to have intention of telling you some my living habits, and hope you can make some suggestions for me to acquire better life there.
Here are something about my living habits, some quiet time is of cardinal importance since I am likely to complete some work, tasks or read some books in the room. If we both make use of these time to finish the similar things, which can increase our relationship and make us enjoy a comfortable life. Additionally, I am fond of taking exercise several times a week, and if you also have the same one, we can go out to work out together, which will enhence our communication and promote our mutual understanding.
Finally, as said at the beginning, I, once again, hope you could give me some advice on living there and expect we can enjoy a pleasant life in the future.
I'm really looking forward to receiving your reply and seeing you in our shared apartment.
Kind regards!
Li Ming
大作文
@杨大师
图表的分类
柱状图(bar chart / graph)
线状图(curve / line chart)
表变化,对比
饼状图(pie chart)
表比例,对比
表格(table)
表变化,对比,比例
最重要的是看出图表的本质,理解表头
写作基础
题目
1. describe the chart
2. give comments
要求
要点齐全
词汇多样
同义替换
无语法错误
卷面工整
数字
千
thousand
百万
million
十亿
billion
万亿
trillion
词汇使用原则
转换
解释说明
同义替换
重新构思
词性及作用
带形式宾语的常见结构
take it for granted that ...
make it clear that ...
regard it as ... that ...
owe it to ... that ...
see to it that ...
确保 / 保证 ……
图表作文结构
1. 描述图表 (第一段)
至少 60 词
总起句 + 描写句
概括图表主题
要会翻译主题和对象
描述图表细节
模板
总起句(第一句)
The bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table above explicitly displays / demonstrates / covers the change / fluctuation / proportion / ratio / statistics / situation of (主题) of ... and ... (对象) in / during ... (持续时间)from ... to ...(结束时间)
升级↓
Reflected in the bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table above is the change / fluctuation / proportion of ...(主题) from ... to ... (始终时间) / between ... and ... (比较对象)
The bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table above explicitly displays / demonstrates the striking contrast of ...(主题)beteewn ... and ... (比较对象) from ... to ...
表对比
e,g,
Reflected in the bar chart above is the change of mobile phone subscriptions of developing countries and developed countries from 2000 to 2008.
Reflected in the line chart above explicitly demonstrates the change of the numbers of China's museums and their visitors from 2013 to 2015.
The pie chart above explicitly demonstrates the proportion of the travelling purposes of the students from a certain university.
Reflected in the table above are the statistics of work satisfaction of the employees in a certain company.
描写句
柱状图
先指出总体趋势(上升、下降、平稳),再挑出极值(最高、 最低) 描写
趋势
It is clearly indicated that ... (主题 + 对象)ascended / descended steeply / mildly / steadily from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)during this period of time,
It is clearly indicated that ...(主题 + 对象)remained stable / fluctuated drastically during this period of time.
升级↓
The past ... (时间段)years / months witnessed the rapid / mild /steady increase / decrease of ...(主题 + 对象)from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)during this period of time.
The past ...(时间段)years / months witnessed the relative stability / the drastic fluctuation of (主题 + 对象)during this period of time.
表示两个或两个以上同时增加或减少
It is clearly indicated that ...(主题 + 对象)ascended / descended steeply / mildly / steadily respectively from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)and from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)during this period of time.
The past ...(时间段)years / months witnesses the rapid / mild / steady increase / decrease of ...(主题 + 对象)respectively from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)and from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)
表示具体增加或减少的比例
It is clearly indicated that ...(主题 + 对象)ascended / descended steeply / mildly / steadily by ...(增加或减少的百分比)from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)during this period of time.
It is clearly indicated that ...(主题 + 对象)doubled / tripled / quaddrupled from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)during this period of time.
对比
It is clearly indicated that ...(主题 + 对象)ascended / descended steeply / mildly / fluctuated drastically from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值)/ remained stable during this period of time, which , on the contrary, witnessed the rapid / mild increase / decrease / relative stability / drastic fluctuation of ...(另一主题 + 对象)from ...(起始值)to ...(最终值).
极值
The number / percentage of ...(主题 + 对象)rocketed to the highest point of ...(最高值)in ...(时间)and stumbled to the bottom of ...(最低值)in ...(时间)
e,g,
It is clearly indicated that the subscription number of developing countries ascended steeply from about half 1 billion to 4 billion during this period of time, which, on the contrary, witnessed the mild increase of that of developed countries from about 600 million to 1 billion. (这里为了避免重复,that 指代前面的the subscription number,复数换成 those 就好了)
折线图
先指出总体趋势(上升、下降、平稳),再挑出极值(最高、最低)描写,如果可能,还应指出转折点
1. 趋势、对比、极值基本同柱状图
2. 转折点
The significant turning point occurred in ...(时间点),when ...(主题 + 对象)began to rise / fall, reversing its general trend in the past ... (时间段)years / months.
...(时间点)witnessed the significant turning point, at which ...(主题 + 对象)began to rise / fall, reversing its general trend in the past ...(时间段) years / months.
e,g,
The past two years witnessed the steady increase of both the number of China's museums and that of their visitors from 4165 to 4697 and from 637.8 million to 781.1 million respectively.
饼状图
先指出包含项目, 再挑出极值(最高、最低) 描写,如项目不多( 五个以 内),也可按降序逐一描写(如项目太多,“其他”项可以忽略)
子主题
Among all the ...(项目数量)items included in the survey, ...(最多项)outruns the others, with ...%(百分比).(次多项)comes as the runner-up, which occupies ...%(百分比), followed by(第三多项)and (第四多项),which account for ...%(百分比)and ...%(百分比)respectively. (最少项)... ranks the last, making up only ...%(百分比).
As is clearly indicated in the graph, ...(最多项及百分比 / 句子), topping the survey. What comes next is ...(次项), which accounts for ...(百分比). Minor ... (小项)include ...(...%), (...%)and other ...(...%).(小项罗列 + 百分比)
e,g,
As is clearly indicated in the graph, 37% travlel for the sake of appreciating scenery, topping the survey. What comes next is the relief of pressure, which accounts for 33%. Minor aims include cultivating independence (9%), making friends (6%) and other purposes (15%).
表格
当饼状图
Among all the three age groups included in the survey, the over 50 group outruns the others, with the highest 40.0% job satisfaction. The employees under 40 come as the runner-up, with 16.7%, while those between 41 and 50 rank the last, with zero job satisfaction.
当柱状图或折线图
It is clearly indicated that the job satisfaction for different age groups fluctuates drastically. The job satisfaction rockets to the highest point of 40.0% for the over 50 group and stumbles to the bottom of 0.00% for those between 41 and 50.
2. 解释原因 (第二段)
至少 60 词
人
people
citizens
inhabitants
residents
individuals
those in the ivory tower
发展
the improvement of the living standard / condition
the development of economy
the economic growth
the economic development
主题句 + 支撑句 + 举例
主题句
概括原因
A variety of factors are held accountable for this increase / decrease / fluctuation / trend / phenomenon / situation.
支撑句 (一)
2 ~ 3 点 (合理就行)
容易想到、常见、简单好写的
柱状、线状、表格
First of all / On the one hand / For one thing, there is no doubt that with the development / improvement / deterioration(恶化,变坏) of... ( 原因一), ... ( 涉 及人群) was able to / failed to ... (do sth.), which consequently led to this situation / phenomenon.
e,g,
First of all, there is no doubt that with the development of economy and the improvement of living condition, more and more citizens in developing countries were able to afford mobile phones, which consequently led to this situation.
饼状图、表格
First and foremost / On the one hand / For one thing, ...(原因一)rendered it possible / impossible for ...( 涉及人群)to ...(do sth.), as a result of which ...( 对象)was naturally / inevitably found on top of the list / came in the first / second / last place.
e,g,
First and formost, the improvement of living condition rendered it possible for university students to have spare time to enjoy the view, as a result of which enjoyment of sightseeing was naturally found on top of the pie graph.
支撑句 (二)
Furthermore / On the other hand / For another, owing to the remarkable growth / progress / rise / change / advent / tremendous pressure of ... (原因二), ... (对象) attached more importance to / put more emphasis on ... (原因二过渡), which could be easily achieved through ... (主题) / turned into ... (主题)
e,g,
Furthermore, owing to the advent of information age, the people in underdeveloped regions attached more importance to mass communication, which could be easily achieved through mobile phones.
不到最后关头不举例
It can be aptly exemplified by that fact that ...
3. 评论预测 (第三段)
至少 30 词
未来趋势 (万能结尾)
延续或转折
延续
We can draw a safe conclusion / By no means / Under no circumstances can we deny, from the analysis made above, that this trend / phenomenon will surely continue in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain.
反转
We can draw a safe conclusion / By no means / Under no circumstances can we deny, from the analysis made above, that this trend / phenomenon may reverse in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence keep changing.
作者态度
好或坏 (辩证)看待
To sum up / Even though ... (不足之处 / 句子), such a ... is always / mostly preferable and praiseworthy so long as people an binefit from it.
e,g,
Even though college students travel for different purposes, such a trip is always preferable and praiseworthy so long as they can benefit from it.
To sum up / Even though ... (正面影响 / 句子), such a ... is always / mostly unpreferable and blameworthy so long as people may suffer from it.
好
So significant / crucial / inspiring is ... (主题) that it will not only improve ... (好处一) but also enhance ... (好处二), ultimately benefiting the whole society / human race.
e,g,
So significant is this increase that it will not only improve the individual's cultural and scientific awareness but also enhance the development of cultural industry, ultimately benefiting the whole society.
坏
So threatening / dangerous is ... (主题) that it will not only harm ... (坏处一) but also destroy ...(坏处二), ultimately giving rise to a series of serious social problems.
影响或解决方案(仅用于包含明显负面含义的图表)
Accordingly, ... (涉及对象) is supposed to take necessary / immediate contermeasures to prevent this situation from worsening.
As for me, it is advisable / essential / imperative that ... (涉及对象) should ... (do sth.) 措施
e,g,
As for me, it is advisable that the company should work out more policies to inspire the employees, like creating more promotion opportunities and providing better welfare packages.
希望 / 愿望 (万能结尾)
As far as I am concerned, it is my sincere hope ... (希望 / 句子), so that ... (结果 / 句子).
范文
Reflected in the table above is the situation of work satisfaction of the employees in a certain company. Among all the three age groups included in the survey, the over 50 group outruns the others, with the highest 40.0% job satisfaction. The workers under 40 come as the runner-up, which occupies 16.7%, while those between 41 and 50 rank the last, making up only 0.0% .
Even though quite complex factors contributed to this phenomenon, by no means can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. For one thing, the more stable working condition and the less desire rendered it possible for the older employees to feel less burden. On the other hand, owing to the great pressure and burden from all aspects of life, the group between 41 to 50 attached more i mportance to their career development in the highly competitive working world, which could be easily turned into dissatisfaction and complaint.
We can draw a safe conclusion, from the analysis made above, that this phenomenon will surely continue in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. As for me, it is advisable that the company should work out more policies to inspire the employees, like creating more promotion opportunities and providing better welfare.
模板
柱状、线状、表格,表变化
Reflected in the bar chart / line chart / table above is the change / fluctuation / proportion of... ( 主题) from... to... ( 始终时间) / between... and... ( 比较对象) The past... ( 时间段) years / months witnessed a rapid / mild / steady increase / decrease / relative stability / drastic fluctuation of... ( 主题+对象) from... ( 起始值) to... ( 最终值) . The past... ( 时间段) years / months witnessed the rapid / mild increase / decrease / relative stability / drastic fluctuation of ... ( 主题+对象) from ... ( 起始值) to ... ( 最终值) and from ... (起始值) to ... ( 最终值) respectively.
Even though quite complex factors contributed to this trend / phenomenon, by no means / under no circumstances can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. First and foremost / On the one hand / For one thing, ...(原因一)rendered it possible / impossible for ... (sb) to ... (do sth.), as a result of which the number / percentage / proportion of... ( 主题) naturally / inevitably rose / fell. Furthermore / On the other hand / For another, owing to the remarkable development / improvement / change of... ( 原因二), ... (sb) attached more importance to ... (sth), which could be easily achieved through ... / turned into ... ( 主题)
It can be safely concluded, from the analysis made above, that this trend will surely continue / reverse in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. So significant / crucial / inspiring is ... that it will not only improve ... but also enhance ..., ultimately benefiting the whole society / human race. So threatening / dangerous is ... that it will not only harm ... but also destroy ... , ultimately giving rise to a series of serious social problems.
柱状、线状、表格,表对比
The bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table above explicitly displays / demonstrates the striking contrast of ... ( 主题) between ... and ... ( 比较对象) from... to... ( 始终时间). It is clearly indicated that ... ( 主题+对象) ascended / descended steeply / mildly / fluctuated drastically from ... ( 起始值) to ... ( 最终值) / remained stable during this period of time, which, on the contrary, witnessed the rapid / mild increase / decrease / relative stability / drastic fluctuation of ... ( 另一主题+对象) from ... (起始值) to ... ( 最终值).
Even though quite complex factors contributed to this trend / phenomenon, by no means / under no circumstances can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. First and foremost / On the one hand / For one thing, ...(原因一) rendered it possible / impossible for ... (sb) to ... (do sth.), as a result of which the number / percentage / proportion of ... ( 主题) naturally / inevitably rose / fell. Furthermore / On the other hand / For another, owing to the remarkable development / improvement / change of... ( 原因二) , ... (sb) attached more importance to ... (sth), which could be easily achieved through ... / turned into... ( 主题).
It can be safely concluded, from the analysis made above, that this trend will surely continue / reverse in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. So significant / crucial / inspiring is ... that it will not only improve ... but also enhance ..., ultimately benefiting the whole society / human race. So threatening / dangerous is ... that it will not only harm ... but also destroy ..., ultimately giving rise to a series of serious social problems.
饼状、表格,表比例
Reflected in the pie chart/ table above are the proportions of ... ( 主题) in ... ( 时 间) / from ... to ... ( 始终时间) Among all the ... ( 项目数量) items included in the survey, ...( 最多项) outruns the others, with ...% ( 百分比). ( 次多项) comes as the runner-up, which occupies . . . % ( 百分比) , followed by ( 第三多项) and ( 第四 多项) , which account for . . . % ( 百分比) and . . . % ( 百分比) respectively. ( 最少项) ranks the last, making up only . . . % ( 百分比) / ( 最少项) makes up the rest . . . % ( 百分比).
Even though quite complex factors contributed to this trend / phenomenon, by no means / under no circumstances can we deny that the major reasons can be identified as follows. First and foremost / On the one hand / For one thing, ...(原因一) rendered it possible / impossible for...(sb) to...(do sth.), as a result of which ... ( 对象) was naturally / inevitably found on top of the list / came in the first/ second/ last place. Furthermore / On the other hand / For another, owing to the remarkable development / improvement / change of... ( 间接原因二) , ...( 对象) attached more importance to / put more emphasis on ...(直接原因二) , which could be easily achieved through ... / turned into ... ( 主题).
It can be safely concluded, from the analysis made above, that this trend will surely continue / reverse in the upcoming years, as the basic factors of influence remain. As far as I am concerned, it is my sincere hope ... (希望 / 句子), so that ... (结果 / 句子).