tangible objects:people, places, and things
有形之物的词:人、地方、物品
eliminate clutter 表达精炼
删去无用、华丽的词
vivid and lively language
imagery 画面感
concrete words
具象词
simile
明喻(直白的比较,有共同之处
contain the word: like、as、as if
metaphor 暗喻
子主题
A is the thing you're really talking about, B is what you compare it to to make it easier to understand or rhetorically more powerful, the correct linguistic pattern of a metaphor is B of A