导图社区 英一小作文(建议信)
考研英语一写作逻辑,自己也能写出高分作文哦。我建议你做某事,否则你做某事会不方便/困难/不可能。sb要根据题目的要求,可能是you, us, our school等。
编辑于2022-08-16 17:10:16小作文:建议信
思路
格式
顶格写、每写完一部分、空一行
第一信念:给谁写!
上级or平辈?
认识or不认识?
去信or回信?
整体思路
进入角色:我就是李明
联系常识:写细节
设定具体
宽泛的主题,一定要具体
演讲外院老师比赛来当评委,设定主题:红星下的祖国
唱歌比赛,设定主题:红星下的祖国
礼貌情商:要情商高,(辞职信的原因:办公室太小,工资低) 理由要合情合理,要恰当
注意:照抄题目会扣分!!!
第一段,3-4行之内
具体内容
称呼
平辈、朋友、同学 Dear Smith.
长辈、教授、上级 Dear professor Smith.
集体 Dear all.
具体的集体 Dear members/fellow students.
不认识,如投诉信 Dear Sir or Madam.
不认识 ,如询问信 To whom it may concern.
注意:称呼后面打“,”没给名字自己编一个
问候
平辈 How's everything going? 一切可好?
长辈 I hope you are doing great!我希望你一切都好!
特别欢迎 Welcome to China!
也可连用 Welcome to China, and I hope you are doing great!
得知有喜事 How's everything going?Congratulations on your.....+n.
表达情绪or自我介绍
熟人 情绪
回信 I was delighted to receive your letter,in which you mentioned that you would....
得知喜讯 I felt thrilled to know that you had been successfully... (eg:admitted to your dream school). Congratulations!
得知坏事 I felt very sorry when I heard that....
回复询问 I felt very happy to receive your inquiry about....
陌生人 自我介绍
有组织的身份
I am LiMing, the coordinator of the upcoming graduation ceremony of our university...(可+同位语)
one of+可数名词加s 集合名词staff member
小透明,我还是要说 I am LiMing, a staff member(职员) in the marketingdepartment. Unfortunately,I..... (投诉、抱歉、辞职这类”负面信“可由unfortunately来转折)
目的
I am writing this letter to....../The main purpose of this letter is to... 我正在写这封信给....../这封信的主要目的是....
①make some suggestions/recommendations about... 做出一些建议/建议关于......
②introduce to you sth we will visit... 向你介绍我们将要参观的地方...
③cordially invite you to join in sth/to be the judge of.... 诚挚的邀请你参加/诚挚的邀请您做我们的评委...
④discuss with you my initial thoughts on... 与你讨论我对......的初步想法
⑤cancel our meeting.Please allow me to explain the reasons. 取消我们的会议,请允许我解释原因
⑥report to you the progress of my preparations. 向您汇报准备的工作的进展情况
⑦share with you my experience in.../ideas on sth. 与你分享我在.....的经验/想法、意见
目的句有的时候有两句并列:
可能a:我要做什么,所以我要你做什么 I will do...and I would like to invite you to...
可能b:根据题意,小作文的目的有两个 The main purposes of this letter are to...and to...(英二专用)
第二段,8-10行之内
建议信/原因型展开方法
1.纯建议类: 2.貌似建议的原因型 a.给一个建议,针对此建议给出多个原因 b.给多个建议,针对每个建议给出原因
纯建议类
模板
Firstly,建议一+拓展 Moreover,建议二+拓展 Besides,建议三+拓展
具体展开的三种
常见建议+拓展组合:A很重要,要做它--讲原因
1.Firstly,A/doing A is of cardinal importance. So,it is essential for sb to do sth./I suggest that sb do sth./it might be a good idea to do sth.
A is a must /you should do A because
sb要根据题目的要求,可能是you, us, our school等. 【并列是最好的拓展法:同词性的词可以并列,同成分的结构都可以并列】
直白法:你可以怎么做+神仙拓展 (三连or现状分析)
你可以怎么做:you can do sth/Would you consider doing sth?(对上级更礼貌) 你可以怎么做/你能不能考虑这样做?
神仙拓展:a.可以是三个句子(n/v-ing/短原因);也可以列举 A, B and C are all good ways for you to ahieve the goal. b.现状分析:now,现在的情况,and many people deem that(很多人都认为)+怎么样才好。
画饼法:用条件、目的、 定语从句来带出建议
In order to do A(and do B),you'd better do sth.
If you are intent (想要)on sth/doing sth,you should do sth.
You can do sth,which can help you do sth.
现实教你做人:现状是这样,因此你得怎么样
反向PUA:I suggest that you do sth or it would be inconvenient/difficult/impossible for you to do sth. 我建议你做某事,否则你做某事会不方便/困难/不可能。
In china,A is very popular,So when you..., Isuggest you...
I changsha,living cost is really reasonable.So doing sth can help you...
You can do sth, because A is not only...,but B is...
貌似建议的原因型
一个建议+很多原因
1.中心句: The are several reasons for my recommendation. 或:The reason why I recommend this are as follows.+2-3个原因。
2.Firstly,原因一.Therefore,带来什么好处。/我的真实情况 3.Moreover, if假设一种需求、情况,原因二。 3.Besides,原因三,which can 帮助你什么。
多建议配各自的原因=建议性文章,拿原因当拓展(此时二段可以不用中心句,写完建议可以直接写原因)
好的表达例句
gain more advantages over 获得更多的优势 are intent on 想要 relax and recharge 放松和充电 be proficient in 熟练 be important=be of importance suggest that sb do not only....but用于主语不一致,but后面接完整句子 intend to=intent on sth/on doing sth believe sth to be
第三段,2-3行之内
建议信结尾段
简短、补充、体贴、热情
表示期待:I am feally looking forward to your arrival/participation/reply.... 我非常期待你的到来/参加/回复
表示祝愿:I hope you will enjoy your new life here/have a wonderful experience经历 in.....
我不怕麻烦,尽管来联系! Should you need any further information,please do not hesitate to contact me. 译:如果您需要任何进一步的信息,请随时与我联系
I hope the above is useful to you.Let me know if you need anything else. 译: 我希望以上对你有用,如果你还需要什么,请告诉我
可视情况叠加,如祝愿+体贴一起