英语大作文

根据周黑鸭的课程➕讲义整理的英语大作文模板及其思路，第一段：就图论图，不要超过图的含义，第二段：展开说明图所代表的一类现象。

英语大作文

• 第一段：就图论图，不要超过图的含义
  • 单图题
    • 第一段
      • 第一句：描述图画大题信息
        • 谁在干嘛，时间，地点，背景
          • 模板：Graphically and explicitly depicted in the cartoon, is sb, who is doing sth ➕adv
            • 例句：Graphically and explicitly depicted in the carton, are two handicap men, who are supporting each other and walking normally and steadily.
          • who is doing sth的 who 后面可以插入表情 :who, with a …on his/her face, is doing sth.
            • 常见表情：喜：bright，confident smile 怒：furious 哀：miserable， 困惑：bewildered 疲劳：exhausted
      • 第二句：分析是1️⃣静态图2️⃣动态图3️⃣动静之间4️⃣对话
        • 1️⃣静态图，列举图中的名词
          • ❤️一一列举➕总结类别：under scrutiny，we can see that there are …/sb does/sth has…，including Ａ，B and C.
            • 例句：Under scrutiny, we can see that the lake has already been covered by a mass of wasters, including used bottles of beverages, discarded boxes of instant noodles, fruit peels, and other stinky garbage.
        • 2⃣️动态图：图中的动作至少有3个
        • 3⃣️动静结合：和主体有明显位置关系的细节，所表示的含义
          • In front of him/her…，is/are…，which…
        • 4⃣️对话图：情绪➕对话内容 一句用直接引语，一句用间接引语
          • 模板：the man on the left,say ➕副词，“…”，while the man on the right，doing sth，remarks with a…that he feel …because …
      • 第三句：分为1
        • 1⃣️模板：under the cartoon，is the caption ：“…”
        • 2⃣️🅰️例句：Conspicuously，there two young men are representative of numerous modern young people who chase pop star in a unreasonable way.
        • 2⃣️🅱️例句：Conspicuously，it is…that…
  • 双图题
    • 第一段
      • 第一句：1⃣️What arrests my attention most in the cartoon is the drastic difference between modern people’s attitudes toward sth/doing sth.
      • 第二句
        • 1⃣️左右图：In the left picture is a boy, who, doing 某事，is doing 某事/says…. However, in the right one,another young man is doing 某事and he says …
        • 2⃣️左右边：the boy on the left does sth,doing ….However, the boy on the right, with a…表情/➕副词情绪/doing sth，says that…/encourages his friend by doing…
        • 3⃣️双时间：In A时间，there are …, and …; while in B时间，…multiplied at a stunning speed, and there is only ….
          • ❌例句：What arrests my attention most in the picture is that the past century witness the drastic decline in the number of fish in the ocean.
      • 第三句：under the cartoon，the caption reads：“…”
• 第二段：展开说明图所代表的一类现象
  • 中心句：The cartoon，simple as it looks，transmits a thought-provoking message that…
    • 好的事情
      • in order to…，young people ought to develop …
    • 不好的事情
      • 1⃣️译文：某种现象/做某件事，听起来非常荒唐，但在我们所谓的文明社会已经很常见了 Doing Ａ/the phenomenon that …,which sounds utterly ridiculous, has become far from rare in our so-called civilized society.
      • 科技问题：万能句：too often people focus on the benefits of A while taking its drawbacks for granted.
  • 二段的主体
    • 1⃣️抽象意志品质（万能人群细分法）
      • 模板：The cartoon, simple as it looks, transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to achieve our goals/ realize our dream…, we ought to develop A(self-confidence/curiosity/patience/…. Such virtue, it can not be denied,plays a key role in all the stages of people’s life. （Such virtue counts in almost every stage of our life.)To begin with, students who have strong________oftentimes have better academic performance, because it can drive them to improve efficiency, become more initiative, and always stay positive. Moreover, in the workplace, if an employee is _________, he can definitely create a good impression on his colleagues and superiors, thereby moving up the ladder more quickly. Besides, A helps a lot in our daily life,too. Those who have such personality are charming and attractive, and people around them are absolutely fond of making friends with them.
    • 2⃣️纯负面的细分模板
      • The cartoon, simple as it looks,transmits a thought-provoking message that ________, which sounds utterly ridiculous, has become far from rare in our so-called civilized society. In our daily life, the story of sb doing sth abound (普遍常见现象）；on the social platforms,we can often see that ➕网络常见普遍现象；people from time to time feel astonished by the news that ➕极端事件，完整主谓宾.Apparently ，there phenomenon have caused a range of consequences, resulting in more young people starting to follow suit. If we keep turning a blind eye to them, there will surely be more unexpected and uncontrollable consequences.
    • 4⃣️万能诡辩
      • 贬义的文章：第一句：图的目的，揭示很严重，很常见 第二句：给出一个具体，有概括性的现象 第三句 、第四句：双原因解释为什么有这个现象 第五句：这样下去不行 第六句：如果…就很有可能
        • the cartoon, simple as it seems, transmits a thought- provoking message that …….No matter in our daily life or on social platforms, we can often see that …….This is partly due to the fact that …but also …However, this phenomenon is utterly detrimental to ….If ……, chances are high that …
      • 褒义：第一句：图的目的，为了…我们应该… 🔺现实却不是如此➕一个现实的样子 🔺双原因 🔺这样下去不行 🔺威胁句型：如果…就很有可能
        • The cartoon,simple as it seems,transmits a thought-provoking message that in order to achieve our desired goals,we ought to form a habit of finishing our tasks as soon as we can.However,the reality is something else.A considerable number of people,especially young men,….This is partly due to the fact that modern people live under pressure,but also because some parents and teachers pay little attention to the guidance in this aspect.But this trend is detrimental to young people’s psychological growth.If we keep turning a blind eye to it,chances are high that the younger generation will be crushed by the challenges awaiting them.
  • 最后一段 总结
    • 褒义（意志品质等）：总结优点➕展望未来
      • So➕形容词，to sum up, is A that it not only helps …but also ….Only when we become more…
      • A,to sum up,is of unparalleled importance to everyone. Only in this way can we ➕好的结果
    • 贬义：我们应该采取措施来变好，解决，预防，控制，引导
      • 呼吁警醒：Ａ和B ought to make joint efforts to do sth.
      • The ideal way to avoid this would be for sb to do sth,so that ➕好的结果