考研英语作文

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考研英语作文(一)

评分标准

五档

胡说八道/走题

说人话

说漂亮话

说有设计的话

评价目标

语言

语法

词汇拼写

标点

用词恰当

总结

小作文 100-130词，大作文 160-250词写够即可，能不多写就不多些。基础不好，写的越多，错的越多，扣的越多。

文体格式

主要针对小作文的表达，**不能**把书面表达方式写为较为口语的表达方式例如： 正式：I would like you to come to my office to pick up the ticket.非正式：Come to my office for a ticket.

正式表达

非正式表达

文章结构

如果对于B类(大作文)有明确的提纲要求，那么就必须按照该结构来写，否则就会扣分。改卷老师便是按照这些方向来进行改分。

不走题方法

以人为本

三个关系的发展

人自身发展 60%

人与家人、他人、社会的发展 60%

人与自然的发展 30%

命题启示

大作文

大作文主要以，文化、社会、人生哲理、个人品质为主即不会以具体的热点新闻，而是以大的社会方向来命题

次热点为主，最热点为辅

实际上和热点没啥关系

小作文

小作文本身格式有限，所以基本上以推荐、邀请等为主。

基本上出以前考过的类型

对策

充分重视历年写作真题

社会热点

两代关系

1992 父母与子女间更好的沟通

2005 养老足球赛

2014 相携

2016 与其只提要求，不如做个榜样

爱心问题

1995 希望工程

2001 爱心是一盏灯

2006 (小)给希望工程捐款

2019 答复信"援助乡村小学"

健康问题

1996 健康

1997 吸烟

2021 某城市居民体育锻炼方式调查

经济问题

2010 手机入网

2011 国内轿车时长部分品牌市场份额

2014 城乡人口变化

2015 中国某市居民春节假期花销比例

2018 消费者选择餐厅时的关注因素

旅游

2005 十一黄金周

2016 大学生旅游目的调查

2017 博物馆数量以及参观人数

环境保护

1991 "住在哪里—城市还是乡村"

1999 美国人口增长导致野生动物减少

2000 世界商务捕鱼简史

2009 (小)限制使用塑料袋

2011 旅程之'余'

教育问题

传统文化

2002 文化—民族与世界

2010 文化'火锅'

流行文化

1993 电视广告

2006 偶像崇拜

2009 网络的近与远

2009 MBA手机短信

2015 手机时代的聚会

2020 手机阅读

教育

2005 工程硕士招生

2008 成人高考

人生哲理(最多)

友谊

温室花朵经不起风雨

终点又是起点

自信

合作

乐观与悲观

选择

有书与读书

选课进行时

途中

习惯

兴趣

关注次热点以及最热门话题(小概率)

扎实提高语言能力，按自己目标分数规划

学习方法

第一步：总结框架，能憋废话

要写一篇作文，至少看到图画能有话说，有点想法。连口水话都说不出来，就无从下手，从而浪费考场时间。

第二部：跟老师网课学习，积累个人素材库

王江涛的《高分写作》书中有许多优秀的范文，可以多熟读，然后找一些在自己写作框架上能用的话积累在自己的素材库中。不求多，但求精，能做到提笔就写。

第三步：多写，输出是最关键的

写作方法

小作文 10分/15min（信件作文）

词数要求 100词左右

信件 mail/email

```称谓， 开头段：自我介绍（私人信函可省）+ 写信目的 中间段：总分结构，分层次阐释内容 结尾段：期待回信 + 表示感谢 + 保持联系（告示类要写） 礼貌语， 署名```

称呼 Salutation

Mr. 先生

Dr./Prof.博士/教授

Ms. 用于女性

Editor 编辑

Dear Bob明确的朋友

Dear friends,可能的朋友

Dear Sir or Madam,用于不知性别

To Whom It May Concern（一般仅用于推荐信、证明信、鉴定信）

正文 Body

首段

自我介绍【对陌生人】

I am a staff member from your company.I am a graduate from the Department of xx

写作目的【改写提纲】

I am writing the letter in purpose of placing an order of some books

第二段

改写提纲二

分论点一

To begin with

举例

for instance

分论点二

In addition

总结

Consequently

尾段

表示感谢My appreciation to you for xxx is beyond words.

期待回信I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

结束语

正式：Yours sincerely,

亲切：Yours,

签名 Signature

根据大纲、题目要求写签名一定不要写自己真实姓名

Li Ming

真题解析

2006 （一）请求类

题目

Directions You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

分析

题目分析：主题/目的：you want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area(第一句)内容： 1.写信给相关机构，并找他们寻找一个候选人(第二句话)2.你需要详细说明要帮助哪类儿童（第三句话）3.并且说明如何实行你的计划（第四句话）也就是说，题目部分已经明确的提出了 主题和文章内容的要求，剩下的就是填空了。```称呼 Dear Sir or Madam, 介绍你是谁，你的目的是干什么：contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area（题目原文） 内容：按照题目中的三个要求，修改并写上自己想加入的信息即可（填空） 署名 Yours sincerely, 签名 Li Ming```

2010 （二）建议类

题目

Directions:You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to your American colleague to1) Express your thanks for his/her warm reception;2) Welcome him/her to visit China in due course.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.Do not write your address. (10 points)

分析

题目中要求要确定给某人写，就统一使用 Dear Bob

2011 （一）建议类

题目

Directions:　　Write a letter to a friend of yours to　　1) recommend one of your favorite movies and　　2) give reasons for your recommendation。　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead。　　Do not write the address. (10points)

2012 (一) 建议类

题目

Directions: Some internationals students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students’ Union to　　1) extend your welcome and　　2) provide some suggestions for their campus life here.　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.　　Do not write the address (10 points)

2012（二）投诉类

题目

Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day, Write an email to the customer service center to　　1) Make a complaint and　　2) Demand a prompt solution　　You should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, Use "zhang wei "instead.

分析

```Dear Sir or Madam(称呼)，【自我介绍】我是谁（购买xx的顾客）【原因】什么时候，什么地点发生了什么问题。【具体】1.事件起因； 2.与商家的交流经过; 3.提出具体解决方案或建议 Zhang Wei```

2013 (一) 邀请类

题目

Directions:　　Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.　　You should include the details you think necessary.　　You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the e-mail. Use “Li Ming” instead.　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

2016（一）答复类

题目

Directions:　　Suppose you are a librarian in your university.Write a notice of about 100 words,providing the newly-enrolled international students with relevant information about the library.　　You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use "Li Ming"instead.　　Do not write the address.(10 points)

告示/通知

``` 标题（首字母大写）正文：告示目的 时间、地点、事件、注意事项。 保持联系（留下联系方式） 署名：（特指且首字母大写） 日期：月日，年```

标题

Notice 通知、Announcement 通告

Removal、Acknowledgements(鸣谢)、Corrections 更正、Invitation for Bids 招标

Note 、Preface序言 、Pact 公约、Rules

名词+过去分词Child Lost

现在分词+名词Looking for a Spouse

介词结构For an Exchange of Jobs

日期

标题下一行右侧，右端与右边线对其January 4, 2015

正文

时态使用近期即将发生 is doing; to be held; will do

句型

Your attention, please ...

It has been decided that ...

署名

署名中实词部分大写

真题解析

2010 （一）

题目

Directions:　　You are supposed to write for the postgraduate’association a notice to **recruit volunteers**(目的) for an international conference on globalization. The notice should **include the basic qualification for applicants and the other information**(内容要求) which you think is relevant。　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. Use " postgraduate’association " instead。(10 points)

分析

题目中有说明类型为 notice 通告``` Notice （日期）January 9,2010[右对齐] （正文） Volunteers are needed for the International Conference on Globalization to be held on this campus in early July.(目的)Basic requirement are familiarity with the theme of the conference and proficiency in English. Other requirements include xxx. Preference will be given to those experienced xxx activities.(具体需求) Call xxx or email xxx for an application and for information on the interview. （署名）Postgraduate Association[右对齐]```

报告

``` Report on XXXXXThis report aims to analyze ... and find ...From the information, we can find that ...In conclusion, ...```在王江涛《高分写作》中，书写格式和备忘录相同

备忘录

```From :To :Date :Subject :正文： 可分为三大段，交代时间、地点、时间和注意事项```

写作格式

齐头式

即每段定格写，段落之间空一行的格式考研写作中不推荐

缩进式【建议】

20/35min大作文：图画作文写作

漫画图表作文 160-200 词

流程

审题 2-3min

题目要求如果有 "entitled XXX" 明确题目要求则照抄即可，不要画蛇添足

段落结构 【根据题目要求/否则使用九宫格】a. describe the pictureb. interpret the meaningc. give your comments

特殊要求/陷阱- 论证方式examples 【举例论证】/ reasons 【理由论证】- 论据数量give a specific example

读图

文字说明图画描述公式：地点（介词）+ 动作（谓）+核心事物（主）,doing sth. and doing sth. , with + 细节 （环境部件1）

例如：【倒装描述】In front of the computer desk sits a college students, choosing courses, with a computer on the desk

图中的文字可以不用翻译，但必须写出主题词内容

草稿

主题判断a) 正面b) 中立；例：高科技(双面性)c) 负面；例：(2007) 缺乏自信；(2015) 过渡依赖手机

主题词和主题句a) 主题词表达； 词性，改编A 的 意义， the meaning of AA 和 B的关系， the relationship between A and B

内容三段式+九宫格

亮点特殊句式

写作

时态时态：一般现在时注意：三单和特殊情况过去式：已故或者过去说的话将来时：憧憬未来的句子

检查

注意位置 1/4/7【九宫格位置】常见错误：三单，名词复数，单词拼写

复杂句式（高分作文）

倒装句

（掌握：是什么，用在哪里？）

图画描述

低级：There be 句型高级：倒装句

1 a girl 2 stands 3 in the sunshine倒装：状语 3 + 谓语 2+ 主语 1In the sunshine stands a girl

憧憬未来

只有这些措施才能Only with these measures taken can we do sth.

takem 作定语修饰

意义强调句

如果没有 sth. , 则无法做某事 （+）were there no such thing, never could we do sth. 【双倒装】例句：如果没有爱，我们无法体会幸福were there no love, never could we taste happiness

然而，如果其负面（-）继续恶化，我们需要付出沉重代价yet, were the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a heavy price.

两种语序

通过主语和谓语之间的位置关系确定主语在谓语前是自然语序主语在谓语后是倒装语序

自然语序

倒装语序

部分倒装

2.部分倒装（Partial Inversion）（又称半倒装句）：指将谓语的一部分如助动词或情态动词倒装至主语之前,而谓语动词无变化。如果句中的谓语没有助动词或情态动词，则需添加助动词do,does或did，并将其置于主语之前。作用英语句子的倒装一是由于语法结构的需要而进行的倒装，二是由于修辞的需要而进行的倒装。前一种情况,倒装是必须的，否则就会出现语法错误；后一种情况，倒装是选择性的，倒装与否只会产生表达效果上的差异。

1.表示强调倒装句最突出、最常见的修辞效果就是强调，其表现形式如下：1.only +状语或状语从句置于句首，被该状语修饰的句子用部分倒装。例子：Only in this way can you solve this problem.只有用这种方法，你才可以解决这个问题。Only after he had spoken out the word did he realize he had made a big mistake.只有当他已经说出那个字后才意识到自己犯了个大错误。

2. hardly,in no way,little,scarcely,seldom,never,no more,no longer,not,not only,no sooner,not only … (but also),not until… 等具有否定意义的词或词组位于句首，句子用部分倒装。例子：No sooner had I got home than it began to rain.我刚到家就下起了雨。Seldom do I go to work by bus.我很少乘公共汽车上班。Not until twelve o'clock did she go to bed last night .她昨晚十二点才上床睡觉。

3. so / such...that结构中的so或such位于句首可以构成部分倒装句,表示强调so /such和that之间的部分。例子：So unreasonable was his price that everybody startled.他的要价太离谱，令每个人都瞠目结舌。To such length did she go in rehearsal that the two actors walked out.她的彩排进行得那么长，以致于那两个演员都走出去了。以上各例都用倒装语序突出了句首成分，其语气较自然语序强烈，因而具有极佳的修辞效果

完全倒装

1.完全倒装（Full Inversion）：又称"全部倒装",是指将句子中的谓语全部置于主语之前。此结构通常只用于一般现在时和一般过去时。

①谓语+主语+……There be（的各种形式）+主语（+地点或时间状语）例子：There was a drop in the temperature.温度下降了There are birds singing in the tree.鸟儿在树上唱歌。②副词小品词+谓语动词+名词主语+……例子：Out rushed a young lady.一位年轻女士冲了出去。③过去分词或现在分词+be的各种形式+主语+……例子：Scattered on the floor were several books and magazines.几本书和杂志散落在地板上

4.here、there、now、then、thus等副词开头的句子可构成完全倒装。条件是谓语动词是不及物动词，如arise、be、come、exist、go、follow等。需要注意的是，当主语是代词时，不能构成倒装。（方位词在句首，主语是名词，全部倒装）例子：Here comes our headmaster。我们的校长来了。Here it is. 在这里。Here is your key.这是你的钥匙

虚拟语气

归纳总结句（-） 情况如此危机，是时候采取解决...的问题了The situation being so serious , it is high time thatwe took effective and efficient measures to solve the problem of ...

when+时状

主语一致性原则：前后主语一致时，省略 when 之后的主语

比较级与否定式

九宫格

(二)(五)(八)是关键段落其余段落主要是用于连贯和字数

(一) 话题引起

1. 越来越多的人意识到... There is a growing national awareness of ... 【演练】2020. 越来越多的人意识到了好习惯的重要性。

2. 中国正在面临非常严重的….问题。In no country other than China, it has been said, is the problem of … moreserious/ delightful. (主题词)【演练】2015. 据说，大城市的年轻人“手机依赖症”问题最严重

3. 过去的数年见证了一个社会现象：…. The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that … 【演练】2013. 过去的数年见证了一个社会现象：越来越多的毕业生涌入就业市场

4. 近来，... 常常登上报纸头条，这引发公众激烈讨论。Recently, it often hits the headlines of newspapers that an increasing/decreasing number of people are doing sth., which has aroused a heated discussion among the public. 【演练】2011. 近来，越来越多的游客在景点乱扔垃圾破坏环境，这种现象的报道常常出现在报纸的头版头条上，引发公众激烈的讨论

5. 在中国几乎无人不知无人不晓这一现象：... 【双否】Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …

6. 近来，在公众中有一个关于......的热门话题。These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning

（二）图画描述= 如图所示 ，基本公式

如图所示As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous) cartoon, It is shown in the picture that …

基本公式地点+动作+核心事物，doing sth. +

with +次要事物（n.）with + n. +介词结构（表位置）with + n. + doing (表主动)with +n. + V-ed （表被动

两幅图公式：图一描述。关联词，图二描述。

两图关系:通用：meanwhile, 30 years later/ago , 相同：Similarly, likewise, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, even worse, more importantly,相反：but, however, yet, on the contrary, by contrast, ironically, regrettably, unfortunately,

【演练】2017 年：如图所示，在书架前坐着一个慵懒的年轻人，炫耀自己大量的藏书。然而，在书桌前坐着另一个男人，设定了一年的目标并且立即行动

图中文字说明

直译：文字说明显示，… . The caption reads, “…”.意译：我们了解到… We are informed that … 文字说明揭示了… The caption indicates : … 题目：（副）标题揭示了 … The title/subtitle indicates, …

（三）图画总结

1. 尽管图画简单，但其寓意深刻。Simple as the picture is , the symbolic meaning is as deep as the ocean.

2. 这个暗示不仅信息丰富，而且具有教育意义。The implication is not only informative, but instructive as well.

3. 这幅画所描述的似乎有一些夸张，这已经引起了社会的广泛关注What is depicted in the picture seems exaggerated, which has attracted extensive attention of the society.

4. 但是，这真是作者想要告诉我们的吗？当然不是了。But is this what the author tries to tell us? Certainly not.

（四）具体意义

1. 毫无疑问，这位画家的目的是要告诉我们应该充分重视… Undoubtedly, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to … (主题名词或词组)

2. 显然，这个图画象征性地揭示了日常生活一个现象：…Apparently, the drawing symbolically reveals a social phenomenon in our daily life

这幅图画阐释了…（主题词）的真正含义，通过强调事实：… （主题词）是一种情感力量，这能够支撑我们，无论周围世界如何艰难。This picture illustrates the true meaning of …（主题词）, by stressing the fact that …（主题词） is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how hard the world around us becomes.

4. 画家想告诉我们什么呢？事实上，作者想告诉我们一个非常明显的事…(主题词) 对一个人的成功而言极其有害。What can we deduce from this picture? Actually, the author strives to send outan abundantly clear message that … is of extreme detriment to one’s success.

5. 不言而喻， 图画的象征含义是......， 这已经超越了图画本身，It goes without saying that its symbolic message that ... has gone beyond the picture itself.

（五）意义论证

第一种：举例调查= 引出例子 + 例子本身 + 例子总结 + 科学调查

1. 引出例子：

除了下面这个，我找不到更好的例子来证明了。I can think of no better examples than the following one(s).

我们人类历史上与这个话题相关的例子有很多，而下面这个是最有说服力的。Our human history has been filled with a wide variety of examples of this topic, with the following one being the foremost.

在我所听到的，看到的，经历过的所有与这个话题相关的例子中，最令人印象深刻的是…Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard, noticed, experienced, the most impressive one is …(例子名字).

大量的例证可以证明，而下面这个足够了。Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.

2. 例子本身：

某人， 因在…方面的成功而著名，经常被人们记住她的…, 这在其一生都散发着光辉。______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of his/her life.

某人，一个......， 就是最好的例证。他在过去做了..., 这展示了他的... 的能力。....（人名）, a ..., is a perfect example. He did ... in the past, which shows his ...（能力和特长

3.例子总结：【可忽略】

…的例子告诉我们一个故事:… The case of sth. teaches us that …The experience of sb. teaches us that …

这只是我遇到过的所有案例中的一个, 类似的故事每天都在上演。It is one of many examples I have heard (read / encountered) . Similar stories happen every day.

4. 科学调查：

根据最近一个权威机构的调查表明， ... According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ... almost …% of the people might hold the same view. almost …% of the people might hold the same view that ...almost …% of the people might do similarly in the same situation.almost …% of the people might do sth..

最近一项调查可以支持我的观点。这项由......进行的调查，在调查了......（某人）之后，发现大部分受访者宣称...... 。A recent survey can back up my point. The survey conducted by ... after polling ... has found that a significant percentage of respondents claimed that ... （调查结论）

第二种：原因后果= 引出原因+具体原因+引出结果+具体结果

引出原因

① 除了以下几点，我找不到更好的理由了。第一，… 。 第二, … 。I can think of no better reasons than the following ones. Firstly, … , Secondly, … .

② 到底是什么产生了这个问题？这是个发人深思的问题。第一，…。 第二, ...。What exactly account for (主题词)? It is a thought-provoking question. To begin with, … . In addition, … .

③ 考虑到这个问题的重要性（或严重性），有必要指出其背后的原因。Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation, we ought to point out the causes behind it.

④ 你可能会思考，为什么这个现象会发生呢？Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon emerge ?

具体原因

① To begin with, ... might exert great influence on it. ② Firstly, ... might cause the problem. Secondly,... . The last but not least , .. ③ Primarily, the reason for （主题） is that（原因）

```【万能理由】Ø 关于… 法律法规的执行可能… Enforcement of laws and regulations about …（主题词） might be … 【适用】正面话题：effective and efficient 有效和高效的负面话题：ineffective and inefficient 无效和低效的 【词汇】执行：法律法规：Ø 社会缺少关注导致…A lack of attention (paid to …) leads to …【词汇】缺少：导致：Ø 个人没有…的意识导致… A lack of the consciousness of … results in …【词汇】意识：Ø 媒体：广告宣传负面：The mass media might inappropriately or irrationally advertise/exaggerate this issue. 正面：The mass media might appropriately and widely advertise sth. and lead/encourage sb. to do sth.```

引出结果

① 因此, So…As a result / consequence, … Consequently, …

② 似乎不止一个直接或间接的影响与… (主题词) 相关，这些我们无法忽视。 第一，… . 第二, … . There seem to be more than one direct or indirect effects involved in … , which none of us can fail to notice. Firstly, … . Secondly, …

③ 如果我们继续视而不见的话，上述问题会产生一系列后果。The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.

具体结果

方法一：重复问题或加重问题方法二：举例 For instance, For example, such as …

① For example, ...② As a result, an increasing number of people have come to realize the fact mentioned above. ③ The problem/situation/case mentioned above has come into being, which might become worse/better in the future.

第三种：对立观点分析引出争议 + 正方观点+理由和例子 反方观点+理由和例子

引出争议

① 当谈及..., 仁者见仁智者见智。When it comes to ..., views vary from person to person. ② 历史上，人们对于....... 的现象从未像今天这样讨论得这么激烈。Never before in history has the phenomenon of ... been talked so much as nowadays. ③ 事实上，这幅有着双重意义的漫画提出了一个有争议的问题：这种现象是福还是祸？仁者见仁智者见智。In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person. ④ 关于是否..... 的问题，每个人观点不同。Concerning the issue of whether ... , people’s views vary from person to person

正方观点理由

For one thing, some people might hold the view that ... What’s more, they also claim that ...For example, ...

反方观点理由

For another, the rest might hold the other side of this picture. ( hold the opposite view. ) Furthermore, they also argue that ...For instance, ...

事实上，这一现象大家一直有争论。诚然，一部人可能认为…. 然而，其他的人都不同意这一观点。他们得理由是：第一， … 。 第二， … 。 比如说…In fact, this issue（whether …or not ） has long been a matter of debate. Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent. Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture. For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …

（六）意义总结

子非鱼，安知鱼之乐？How can you, not being a fish yourself, know the happiness of a fish

如果没有这个事情的话，我们可能无法感受到生活的幸福。// 然而，如果这个事情消极的影响继续发生的话，我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.

要不是某事或某种精神，某些人又怎么可能实现最终的目标呢？Without something / this spirit, how could it be possible for somebody to achieve the ultimate goal?

（七）归纳总结

1. 考虑到这个（正面 / 负面）话题的方方面面，我们应该牢记: …。（主题句）Considering every aspect of this positive / negative phenomenon, we should bear in mind that …

2. 情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。 The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took measures to solve the problem.

3. 就…而言，如果不小心或者没有节制，… (主题词) 可能会成为一把双刃剑。 In terms of …, if used carelessly or without restraint, … could prove to be a double-edged sword.

4. 为了…, 在我看来，需要所有的努力。To …, in my eyes, it calls for the efforts from all sides

（八）建议措施

1. 统一做法：扬长避短① 因此，我们应该取其精华，去其糟粕。Therefore, we should take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. ② 因此，正如常言道，我们应该吸取精华，忽略缺点。We should, therefore, as the common saying goes, “ absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks”.

2. 不同主体不同做法： 固定主体 + to do something 【适用】正面话题、中立话题、负面话题

Ø 媒体宣传① The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, should make every effort to propagate and advocate i

Ø 政府立法① 制定法律：It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do sth.. ② 教育公民：The government has the responsibility to educate/encourage every citizen to do sth.

公民意识① 社会公众提高…的意识。The public should enhance the consciousness of … ② 我们应该采取实际行动做某事。We ourselves ought to take practical actions to do sth.. ③ ... 的培养有赖于社会每个成员的积极参与。 The cultivation of ... depends on the active participation of every citizen of our society.

（九）憧憬未来

1. 如果所有措施付诸实现，前途一片光明。If all the solutions are turned into reality, the prospect will become more desirable.

2. 通过等待和希望，我们一定可以实现最终目标。Through/ By waiting and hoping, we will be able to achieve our ultimate goal.

3. 伴随着恰当的法律和警觉的民众，问题迟早会被解决。With appropriate laws and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a thing of the past.

4. 倒装句： Only with these measures taken can we do something. Only in this way can we do something.Ø Aexpect a more harmonious societyØ make dreams come true Ø make life more meaningful/colorful

（十）补充：名言警句【位置：1/7 替换；9后 】

Ø 谚语警句引出：1. 众所周知，… It is (a truth ) universally acknowledged that ...2. 毫不否认这一事实： …There is no denying the fact that ...3. “…”是老生常谈，但是我严重同意它。“....” is an old cliché, but I agree with it. 4. 人们常常说，“...” 讽刺地是，说的容易做的难。People often say “...”. Ironically, it is easier said than done. 5. 改编一句名言，”…” To twist a common saying, “...” 6. 正如孔子说过，”…” Just as Confucius put it, “ …”7. 正如一句古老的阿拉伯谚语所言，”…” Just as an old Arab proverb says, “...”

1、教育学习Confucius said: learning without thinking leads one to perplexity ; thinking without learning puts one in calamity .Genius without education is like silver in the mine. ( Benjamin Franklin )Knowledge is power .2、工作生活A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm. Don’t gild the lily. (William Shakespeare , British dramatist .)3、科技经济Experience is the mother of science . Science and technology constitute the primary productive force .4、社会环境Actions speak louder than words .Don’t judge one book from the cover.When in Rome , do as the Romans do .5、道德爱情A good fame is better than a good faceFriendship is love without his wings .(George Gordon Byron , British poet )6、理想现实Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.God helps those who help themselves .If winter comes, can spring be far behind ? (P.B.Shelley, British poet)7、人生逆境Cease to struggle and you cease to live .No cross , no crown .It is wise to learn at another man’s cost .8、娱乐休闲Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body .Good health is over wealth .Health is happiness

三段法

字数要求为 160-200 词只需写 12 句话左右第一段 3 句，第二段 5 句，第三段 4 句四大要素】描述、寓意、分析、评论第一段： 图画描述第二段： 意义阐释第三段： 建议措施/总结归纳

引言

总体描述

第一段主题句。角色 + 动作 + 环境【什么人，在哪里，做了什么事情？】角色 + 服装 + 表情 【肖像类的图画】

【引言】正如图画中所描绘的那样 ... (固定第一句)1.As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is 【要指出象征内容】2.As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, 3.As is (vividly) shown in the (ridiculous/) cartoon 【通用】4.In the pictures/cartoons above are

挖掘细节词，连接成句

通过对零散的元素进行逻辑分析【分类、对比】

分类can be catogorized as

文字说明【首段句末】

图中的文字说明显示1. We are informed that "..."2. And below the drawing, there is a caption which says: "..."3. The caption indicates, "..."

主体

主题句

揭露图片象征意义，是文章的中心句

(人生哲理类) 这些漫画的目的是为了告诉我们 xxx 是最重要的The aim/purpose of the picture is to illustrate/show us that utmost significance should be attanched to xxx(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见：xxxWhat lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the hot pot, is clear:

论证 (论点+论据)

五大角度

背景 (政治、经济、文化、社会)

社会现象

不可否认的是, xxx 比比皆是There is no denying the fact that ...

正反观点

原因

一方面，另一方面For one reason, xxx. For another, xxx

结果

最终可能会面对或者导致 xxxcould be faced with xxx, or end up xxx

六种手段

常见六中论证手段

因果论证

分类论证

首先：To begin with, xxx.例如：As an illustration / For instance 齐次：What is more换言之： In other words

定义解释

统计和事实

举例论证

比较与对比

一方面：On the one hand因此： Consequently然而：Nevertheless另一方面: On the other hand-----相反：On the contrary

小结

This would be unfortunate because ...

总结

个人语料库

名词库

环境保护类

环境保护

提高 环保意识enhance environmental awareness

保持生态平衡keep ecological balance

生态系统ecosystem

自然保护区nature reserve

可持续发展战略sustainable development strategy

宜人的居住环境pleasant living environment

节能减排

节能save energy

减排reduce the emission of greehourse gases

降低资源消耗率slow down the rate of resource degradation

环保产品environment-friendly products

全球变暖global warming

低碳经济low carbon economy

清洁可再生能源clean renewable energy

核能nuclear energy

太阳能solar energy

大功率电气high-power electrical appliance

二氧化碳carbon dioxide

气候变化climate change

环境恶化

环境恶化environmental deterioration

乱砍滥伐deforestation

过度开发overexploitation

水土流失water and soil erosion

沙漠化desertification

人口增长population growth

野生动物保护wildlife protection

濒危物种endangered species

野生物种wild species

商业捕鱼commercial fishing

过度捕捞overfishing

过度开发reckless exploitation

环境污染

白色污染white pollution

限制使用一次性塑料袋limit the use disposable plastic bags

可降解一次性塑料袋throwaway bio-degradable plastic bags

一次性筷子disposabel chopsticks

乱扔垃圾litter

垃圾分类garbage classification

丢弃discard

垃圾trash, garbage

工业废弃物industrial waste

综合利用multipurpose use

污水处理sewage treatment

水资源保护区water resource conservation zone

自然灾害

自然灾害natural disasters

大灾难catastrophe

沙尘暴sandstorm

沙丘sand dune

旱灾drought

水灾flood

雪灾snowstorm

空气污染

空气污染浓度air pollution concentration

汽车尾气排放motor vehicle exhaust

尾气净化器exhaust purifier

无铅汽油lead-free gasoline

燃气车gas-fueled vehicles

电动汽车cell-driven vehicles

samll-engine vehicles

工业粉尘排放industrial dust discharge

烟尘排放soot emissions

化石燃料fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas)

教育文化类

学校相关

教学设施teaching facilities

食堂dining hall

宿舍dormitory

学校名称

幼儿园kindergarten

小学primary school

中学middle school

中学secondary school

高中high school

综合性大学university

商学院business school

研究生院graduate school

角色称呼

全体教师faculty

教授professor

大学毕业生university graduates

研究生postgraduate

学校事务

学院college

系department

专业major

选修课optional course

必修课compulsory course

学杂费tuition fees and other expenses

学位degree

学士bachelor's degree

硕士master's degree

文学硕士Master of Arts

理学硕士Master of Science

工商管理硕士 MBAMaster of Business Administration

工程硕士 MEMaster of Engineering

博士doctor's degree

获得学位acquire degree

文科arts

理科science

考试

通过考试pass the exam

通过雅思pass the IELTS test

课堂

打瞌睡doze off

教育

教育类别

终身教育life-long education

素质教育education for all-round development

义务教育compulsory education

应式教育exam-oriented education

成人教育adult education

学生相关

逃课skip classes

学习氛围academic atmosphere

开阔眼界broaden one's horizon

激发兴趣stimulate one's interest

开发潜能tap one's potential

减负reduce study load

知识信息

知识爆炸era of knowledge explosion

理论知识theoretical knowledge

实践技能practical skills

信息时代information era

学习相关

口语spoken language

英语口语spoken English

招生就业

职业类

薪酬

wage 工资

比较通用

salary 薪资

偏向固定工作

bonus 奖金

角色相关

雇员employee

雇主employer

具体职业

导游 tourist guide

相关术语

就业市场job market

职业培训vocational training

从事 work on

招生类

招生recruitment

录取enrollment

申请入学apply for admission to/into

高考College Entrance Examination

出国留学study abroad

文化

传统

文化交流cultural exchanges

文化融合cultural blending/intergration

传统中国文化traditional Chinese culture

儒家Confucianism

佛家Buddhism

道家Daoism

京剧Peking Opera

中国书法Chinese calligraphy

西方文化western cultures

启蒙运动Enlightenment

人本主义humanism

后现代主义post-modernism

多元文化multi-cultures

文化多元化cultural diversity

保存珍惜preserve and cherish

取其精华，去其糟粕absorb its essence and resist its dark side

积极促进文化发展promote cultural development positively

辉煌灿烂文化遗产splendid and glorious cultural heritage

与时俱进keep pace with times

跨文化交流cross-cultural communication

文化差异cultural differences

精神文明spiritual civilization

流行

流行文化popular culture

电视广告泛滥the pervasive advertisements on TV

偶像崇拜idol worship

上网成瘾web addiction

虚拟生活virtual life

网络谣言online gossip

网络监管the Internet supervision

网络暴力the Internet violence

不负责言论irresponsible remarks

数码产品digital products

垃圾短信junk message

社会经济

经济

经济发展 economic development

生活水平 standard of living;

社会

人生哲理

独立

自立self-dependence

溺爱spoil

独生子女only child

激烈竞争fierce competition

啃老族NEET

不劳而获reap without sowing

坚持

不断努力make constant efforts

决不放弃never give up

绝不停止进步never stop making progress

勤奋diligence

人生观outlook of life

世界观world outlook

谨慎prudence

坚持自我stick to oneself

信心

自信self-confidence

谦虚modesty

缺乏自信lack of confidence

高估困难exaggerate diffculties

低估能力underestimate one's abilities

合作

团队合作teamwork

团队精神team spirit

与他人合作cooperate with others

态度

保持乐观keep optimistic

悲观pessimism

悲观的be pessimistic

积极态度positive attitude

仁慈benevolence

不到长城非好汉

He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man

兴趣爱好

hobby

合群的be gregarious

爱因斯坦Einstein

理论物理Theoretical Physics

表达描述

方位词

序数词

基变序，有规律，后面th加上去

four → fourthsix → sixth

一二三，特殊记，后面字母st, nd, rd

八去t，九去e。整数中的y要变成ie

eight → eighthnine → ninthtwenty → twentieth

f 来把ve替

five→ fifthtwelve→ twelfth

若是遇到几十几，只变个位就可以

twenty-one → twenty-first

序数词前要加the 我们一定要牢记

介词

目的

in order to

will

are going to

不仅而且

not only A but also B

in addtion to A, xx (do) B

结构

首先：To begin with, xxx.例如：As an illustration / For instance 齐次：What is more换言之： In other words

一方面：On the one hand因此： Consequently然而：Nevertheless另一方面: On the other hand-----相反：On the contrary

高级词汇

情绪

confuse -> perplex

人物素材

坚持 persistence

Thomas Edison

Thomas Edison，one of the greates inventors and entrepreneurs throughout the history of mankind, could be best case of how persistence works in the course of pursuing success. Just imagine, having experienced thousands of times of unsuccessful attempts, how could he have succeeded in inventing the first electric lamp and changed the world without persistence?

袁隆平 Yuan Long Pin

Taikonaut 王亚平 Wang Ya Pin

榜样 example

如有其父，必有其子like a father, like a son

行胜于言actions speak louder than words

真题写作练习

2008 合作 (pos)

词汇积累

王江涛范文

潘赟带练

第一段：图画描述：[引言]Almost no one in China can fail to notice the wisdom that teamwork is power.[概述]As is shown in the cartoon, along the path run two physically-challenged men, holding each other's shoulder and heading to the same direction, with a pair of crutches aside.

练习

2009 网络的远与近 (neu)

潘赟带练

第一段：图画描述[引言][描述][字数]第二段：内容含义[引言]This impressive picture has subtly revealed the relationship between man and the internet.Is the internet a blessing or a curse: Views might vary person to person.[一正]On one hand, some people might hold the view that the internet may shorten the distance between people. Furthermore, they also claim that it enables people to chat freely through wechar or QQ.[一反]On the other hand, the rest might hold the other side of this picture. They argue that indulging in the internet instead of talk face-to-face leads to the fact that we spend less time with our friends and families.[总结]Were there no cyber, never would we taste the happiness of e-chatting.Yet, were the situation of indulging internet to continue, we would feel more and more lonely.

王江涛范文

文章字数约为260，字数较多需要部分省略[第一段和中间段部分省略]第一段：图画描述 As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a large number of people are surfing on line within a stretching siper web, either to entertain themselves or to meet the needs of work. It seems rather ironic to present people sparated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate. Undoubtedly, the spider web serves as a symbol of the Internet, both connection people and isolating them from each other.第二段：内容意义 The impressive metaphorical portrayal subtly reveals the duailty of the relationship between man and the Internet. On the one hand, there is no denying that the Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication. As a college student, I get on line every day to discuss news with other people on BBS, to study English by registering for web courses, and to chat freely with my friends through MSN Messenger. But on the other hand a good many people admit that they are too addicted to the Internet to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once having indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach other and concentrate on real life. That's why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and become alienated from others.第三段：总结段 Hence, it is necessary for us to use the Internet in a reasonble way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the Internet was invented to connect us, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than setting barriers to keep people beyond reach.

练习

第一段：图画描述[引言]There is a growing national awareness of the influence of the internet.[概述]As is symbolically demostrated in the portrayal, in the sperate rooms divided by the spider net, different people sit infront of the computer table,using computer to join the internet world.[字幕]Below the picture, we are informed by the caption that the internet makes us get closer online, while further offline.第二段：内容含义[引言]In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial quesion: is the internet a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.[举例]Admittedly, a minority of people hold the view that the internet could help us to chat with our families and friends, while we can not meet each other when we in different places. Yet a majority of people hold the side, the internet have harmful information that would make us be addicted to it.As a university student, I often go online to search advanced paper to learn the latest research in the world. So internet gives me convinient chance to approach the advanced knowledge. However the internet game lure me to spend much time to have fun.

2010 "文化"火锅 (pos)

词汇积累

【图片中的名词不需要全翻译，翻译会的，拿得准且有难度的】-人名中国人名直接用拼音】毕昇 Bi Sheng 老舍 Lao She莎士比亚 Shakespear爱因斯坦 Einstein-文化常识火锅 hot pot道教 Daosim天鹅湖 Swan Lake启蒙 enlightenment京剧 Peking opera儒家 Confucianism后现代 postmorden-其他营养的 nutritious / 营养 nutrition

王江涛范文

第一段：图画描述 【加粗为通用语句】[总体描述]**As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, there is** a boiling hot pot containing various ingredients of disparate cultures.[细节]These various cultures **can be catogorized as** cultural celebrities home and abroad, such as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespear and Einstein; philosophical concepts such as Buddhism, Taosim, Confucianism, as well as performing arts or works such as Peking Opera, Kung fu and Swan Lake.[图中文字]We are informed that the cultural "hot pot" is both delicious and nutritious.

潘赟带练

第一段：图画描述[引言]These days there is a hot topic among the general public concerning cultural exchange.[描述]As is shown in the picture, on the desk stands a hotpot, boiling a wide variety of elements such as Kung-fu and the like.[字数]From the caption, we are informed that cultural hotpot is not only delicious but nutritious as well. 第二段：

练习

第一段：图画描述[概括]As the symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, the boiling hot pot of culture containing subtantial cultural elemts, such as Buddsim, humanism, kung-fu, post-morden, Lao She, Shakespear, Peking Opera.[文字说明]Below the drawing, there is a caption which says "culture hot pot, delicious and nutritious".

2011 旅程之余 (neg)

潘赟带练

第一段：图画描述：[引言]The past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that an increasing number of tourists throw rubbish in scenic spot and destroy environment, which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.[概述]As is shown in the cartoon, on the boat sit two visitors, sightseeing and chatting, with many trash such as deaed fish on the lake.[文字]The caption reads: After the Travelling.第二段：内容意义[引言]What exactly contributes to this phenomenon ? It is a thought-provoking question.[内容]Firtly, a lack of laws and regulations to punish people who destroy environments leads to pollutions in scenic spots. Secondly, a lack of consciousness to respect and protect our mother nature results in the unbalanced ecological system. Last but not least, mass media might inappropriately report misbehavior of tourists.[总结]If we keep turning a blind eye to it, the problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences.[数据证明]For example, an increasing number of scenic spots are destroyed and closed.

练习

2012 乐观悲观 (pos)

词汇积累

```人物】man,weman,boy,girl -> person ; individual动作】打翻在地lay -> overturned方位】左边的人left man -> The person on the left情绪】消极disappointment ; pessimistically积极optimistically```

王江涛范文

第一段：图文描述[概括]**As is symbolically demonstrated in the catoon**, two individuals respond to the same event in completely different ways. The person on the left airs his dissatisfiction and disappointment when a bottle is overturned, while the man on the right hrries to set it back up, with a sweet smile on his face.[文字说明与图画总结]**We are informed that** various folks different attitudes toward the same occurrence. 第二段：

潘赟带练

练习

第一段：As the vividly demostrated in the portrayal, there is a bottle of water laying on the ground with half water out and half remains. Seeing this situation, there are two men with different attitudes. The left man hides his face with one of his hand pessimistically says, "all is over".Next to him is another man says optimistically," lucky, some remains in it".

总结

角色对比使用 while】the person on the left ... , while the man on the right.

2014 相携 (pos)

词汇积累

```人物】年老的old -> aged妙龄(30)in the prime of his life动作】站在路旁a person walks along the road ->along the road walked a person[倒装]扶着hold -> suppot with arm```

王江涛范文

第一段：**In the first cartoon, three decades ago** , along the road walked a young and vigorous mother, leading her daughter hand in hand, with a sweet smile on her beautiful face. **On the contrary, in the second portrayal**, the daughter in the prime of her life is now supporting her aged mother with her firm arm. **And below the drawing, there is a caption which say:** "Mutual Support".

潘赟带练

练习

第一段：As is vividly demostrated in the portrayal, in the first catoon, there is a mother with her daugher hand in hand. While the second catoon shows, the daughter holds her old mother stands together. We are informed by the caption that the daughter and her mother help each other when they need.

总结

段落结构：两张图相反关系On the contrary

2015 手机时代的聚会 (neg)

词汇积累

王江涛范文

第一段：图画描述As is shown in the cartoon, four young people are sitting at a table, ready to have dinner.Unfortunately, instead of drinking or eating from a delicious dishes, each of them is holding a mobile phone and staring at the screen, with no thought to chatting or eating at all.The caption informs us that the picture shows a typical gathering in an era of moblie phones.第二段：内容含义[引言] 15年是中立话题所以没有结论引言句[论证]Like the Internet, moblie phones have brought a lot if convennience to our lives. With mobile phones, the home can become a library, a school, an office and an entertainment center. All kinds of transactions, from banking to shopping, can be performed elecronically, and all information, from train schedules to off-price merchanidse, is as close as the press of a key. However, despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by digital products, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences. For instance, as nearly all activities can be conducted on mobile phones, we might all become hermit-like, never feeling any need to leave our screens. This would be unforunate because by becoming so addicted to the virtual world, we might never be exposed to social interactions.

潘赟带练

第一段：[引起]There is a growing national awareness of the impact of mobile phones on young people.[描述]As vividly demostrated in the portrayal, around the table sit four young people, lowering their heads and staring at mobile phone, with a table of untounched food.[文字]The subtitle indicates: Party under the Age of Cellphone.

练习

2019 毅力与坚持不懈 (pos)

潘赟带练

第一段：图画描述：[引言]People often say," Perseverance leads to success"[概述]As is shown in the cartoon, on the way of climbing mountain sits a young man, saying that he is too tired to persist. However, the other guy is much more optimistic. He takes a bottle of water offers to his friend, encouraging him to take a rest before continuing climbing, with a sweet smile on his face.[文字]The subtitle indicates: On the Way.第二段：内容意义[引出例子]Our human history has been filled with a wide varity of examples on strong will, with the following one being the foremost.[具体例子]Kobe, honored for his succeess in basketball sports, is always remembered for his spirit of persistence and strong will, which shines through every chapter of his life.[意义总结]His experience teaches us a wisdom: without a strong will, how could it be possible for his to meet all the challenges and succeed?[数据论证]According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, almost ninety percent of successful people are influenced by strong will more or less.(或多或少)

临考抱佛脚

小作文

类型

告示/通知

``` 标题（首字母大写）正文：告示目的 时间、地点、事件、注意事项。 保持联系（留下联系方式） 署名：（特指且首字母大写） 日期：月日，年```

失物招领

标题：Lost and Found

信件

```称谓， 开头段：自我介绍（私人信函可省）+ 写信目的 中间段：总分结构，分层次阐释内容 结尾段：期待回信 + 表示感谢 + 保持联系（告示类要写） 礼貌语， 署名```

2006 请求信/希望工程

请求： I would be very grateful if you could help me do sth.

2010 告示/招人

需要自愿者 Volunteers are need for the ...

找人要求 Basic requirements are familiarity with ...

2010 感谢信/文化交流

感谢：I just want to write a letter to you to thank you for your warm reception in the ...

Please give my best regards to your family

2011 推荐信/电影

推荐：I'm writing the letter in order to recommend xxx

希望你能享受：Hope you will enjoy it

2012 建议信/大学生

欢迎：On behalf of the xxx, I would like to extend our heartfelt welcome to all who ...

建议：It is my pleasure to offer you several practical suggestions.

希望你能享受：Hope you will enjoy it

2012 投诉信/消费

我是谁，为什么投诉，希望店家能

Therefore, I would like xxx. Your help is greatly appreciated.

2013 邀请信/老师

正式称呼不要写具体名字：Dear Professor

邀请：I'm writing to invite you to be ...

2017 接受信

很高兴受到：I am extremely honored to accept your invitation to xxx

表示感激：

2018 道歉信

表示抱歉：I am sorry to say that I will therefore not be able to make xxx

委婉拒绝：If possible, I would like to xxx.

保证：I promise that xxx

最后请求原谅：Please excuse me for xxx

备忘录/报告

```From :To :Date :Subject :正文： 可分为三大段，交代时间、地点、时间和注意事项```

结构

你是谁/打算做什么

will

in order to

are going to

为什么这么做/有哪些原因【举例】

【递进结构】首先：To begin with, xxx.例如：For instance 齐次：In addtion换言之： In other words

【对比结构】一方面：On the one hand因此： Consequently然而：Nevertheless另一方面: On the other hand相反：On the contrary

礼貌语+署名

称呼 Salutation

Mr. 先生

Dr./Prof 博士/教授

Ms. 用于女性

Editor 编辑

Dear Bob明确的朋友

Dear friends,可能的朋友

Dear Sir or Madam,用于不知性别

To Whom It May Concern（一般仅用于推荐信、证明信、鉴定信）

尾段

表示感谢My appreciation to you for xxx is beyond words.

期待回信I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

结束语

正式：Yours sincerely,

亲切：Yours,

签名 Signature

根据大纲、题目要求写签名一定不要写自己真实姓名

Li Ming

大作文 20/35min (图画作文)

第一段图画描述

[话题引起]

如果社会热点类的行为描述不出来，或者哲理类的谚语毫无思路，则使用通用类，直接点名 XX 事件影响 或者 XX 精神

通用类：There is a growing national awareness of (-)/ agreement on ...

社会热点类： Almost no one in China can fail to notice the phenomenon that …

哲理类：People often say, " Xxx ." (Xxx 为谚语)

[概述] 第一句话As is symbolically demostrated in the portrayal, ...

[细节补充] 高级句式描述(倒装) 地点 + 动作 + 人物/角或者 doing and doing, with + 环境细节

[两幅图]通用：Meanwhile；相同：Similarly；相反：On the contrary左图：In the left-hand portrayal，右图：In the right-hand portrayal

[额外：文字描述]

[会翻译文字内容] 方位，there is a caption/subtitle, which says/shows, " ."

上方 over下方 under

[不会翻译文字] 方位，we are informed by the caption that ...

[简单版] over/under the protrayal, the caption indicates ,""

第二段观点论述

[引起阐述]

【表明目的】The propose of the protrayal is to show us that ...

举例调查 (+)

在我所听到的，看到的，经历过的所有与这个话题相关的例子中，最令人印象深刻的是…Among all the touching facts relating to this topic that I have heard，the most impressive one is …(例子名字).

某人， 因在…方面的成功而著名，经常被人们记住她的…, 这在其一生都散发着光辉。______________( 人 名 ) , honored for his/ her success in _____________, is always remembered for his/ her ____________, which shines through every chapter/page of his/her life.

根据最近一个权威机构的调查表明， ... According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national authority, ... almost …% of the people might hold the same view (that ...)

要不是某事或某种精神，某些人又怎么可能实现最终的目标呢？Without sth. / this spirit, how could it be possible for sb. to achieve the ultimate goal?

原因后果 (-)

[阐述引起]

(社会事件类) 在图画背后或者隐藏于 "具体内容" 显而易见：xxxWhat lies behind the picture, or "buried" in the xxx , is clear:

③ 考虑到这个问题的重要性（或严重性），有必要指出其背后的原因。Considering the significance(+) /seriousness (-) / popularity of the present situation, we ought to point out the causes behind it.

观点阐述

【递进结构】首先：To begin with, xxx.例如：For instance 齐次：In addtion换言之： In other words最后：The last but not least , ..

【对比结构】一方面：On the one hand因此： Consequently然而：Nevertheless另一方面: On the other hand相反：On the contrary

【万能理由】个人、社会、媒体、法律法规

Ø 关于… 法律法规的执行可能… Enforcement of laws and regulations about …（主题词） might be … Ø 社会缺少关注导致…A lack of attention (paid to …) leads to …Ø 个人没有…的意识导致… A lack of the consciousness of … results in …Ø 媒体：广告宣传负面：The mass media might inappropriately or irrationally advertise/exaggerate this issue. 正面：The mass media might appropriately and widely advertise sth. and lead/encourage sb. to do sth.

后果总结

③ 如果我们继续视而不见的话，上述问题会产生一系列后果。The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences, if we keep turning a blind eye to it.

中立观点(±)

[阐述引起]

事实上，这幅有着双重意义的漫画提出了一个有争议的问题：这种现象是福还是祸？仁者见仁智者见智。In fact, this comic with a dual meaning asks us a controversial question: is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? Views might vary from person to person.

对比论证

这一现象大家一直有争论。诚然，一部人可能认为…. 然而，其他的人都不同意这一观点。他们得理由是：第一， … 。 第二， … 。 比如说…this issue（whether …or not ） has long been a matter of debate. Admittedly, a minority of people may hold the view that … to some extent. Yet, a majority of people hold the other side of this picture. For one thing, … . For another, … . For instance, …

段落总结

如果没有这个事情的话，我们可能无法感受到生活的幸福。// 然而，如果这个事情消极的影响继续发生的话，我们可能要付出昂贵的代价。Were there no such thing, never could we feel the happiness of life. Yet, were the opposite facet of this situation to continue, we would pay a high price.

第三段总结归纳

[引起总结]

To sum up

Consequently

The last but not least

（七）归纳总结

1. 考虑到这个（正面 / 负面）话题的方方面面，我们应该牢记: （主题句）Considering every aspect of this positive / negative phenomenon, we should bear in mind that …

2. 情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took measures to solve the problem.

3. 就…而言，如果不小心或者没有节制，… (主题词) 可能会成为一把双刃剑。 In terms of …, if used carelessly or without restraint, … could prove to be a double-edged sword.

（八）建议措施

1. 统一做法：扬长避短

因此，正如常言道，我们应该吸取精华，忽略缺点。We should, therefore, as the common saying goes, “ absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks”.

2. 不同主体不同做法： 固定主体 + to do something 【适用】正面话题、中立话题、负面话题

Ø 媒体宣传① The mass media, such as radio, television and the internet, should make every effort to propagate and advocate i

Ø 政府立法① 制定法律：It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do sth.. ② 教育公民：The government has the responsibility to educate/encourage every citizen to do sth.

公民意识① 社会公众提高…的意识。The public should enhance the consciousness of … ② 我们应该采取实际行动做某事。We ourselves ought to take practical actions to do sth.. ③ ... 的培养有赖于社会每个成员的积极参与。 The cultivation of ... depends on the active participation of every citizen of our society.

（九）憧憬未来

如果所有措施付诸实现，前途一片光明。If all the solutions are turned into reality, the prospect will become more desirable.

（十）补充：名言警句【画龙点睛】【位置：1/7 替换；9后 】

Just as an old saying goes, "".

语句积累

Ø 谚语警句引出：1. 众所周知，… It is (a truth ) universally acknowledged that ...2. 毫不否认这一事实： …There is no denying the fact that ...3. “…”是老生常谈，但是我严重同意它。“....” is an old cliché, but I agree with it. 4. 人们常常说，“...” 讽刺地是，说的容易做的难。People often say “...”. Ironically, it is easier said than done. 5. 改编一句名言，”…” To twist a common saying, “...” 6. 正如孔子说过，”…” Just as Confucius put it, “ …”7. 正如一句古老的阿拉伯谚语所言，”…” Just as an old Arab proverb says, “...”

1、教育学习Confucius said: learning without thinking leads one to perplexity ; thinking without learning puts one in calamity .Genius without education is like silver in the mine. ( Benjamin Franklin )Knowledge is power .2、工作生活A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm. Don’t gild the lily. (William Shakespeare , British dramatist .)3、科技经济Experience is the mother of science . Science and technology constitute the primary productive force .4、社会环境Actions speak louder than words .Don’t judge one book from the cover.When in Rome , do as the Romans do .5、道德爱情A good fame is better than a good faceFriendship is love without his wings .(George Gordon Byron , British poet )6、理想现实Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.God helps those who help themselves .If winter comes, can spring be far behind ? (P.B.Shelley, British poet)7、人生逆境Cease to struggle and you cease to live .No cross , no crown .It is wise to learn at another man’s cost .8、娱乐休闲Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body .Good health is over wealth .Health is happiness