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编辑于2022-12-29 21:58:14 四川省应用文
总结
一、 左上角:Dear Mr.Wang 逗号
二、 首段
写给熟人
首句寒暄
I am very delighted to recall the past days (weeks/months/years/time) when I studied in Canada and stayed/learned in your house/family(我很高兴回想起...当我..)
二句目的
However,I am writing for the purpose of quitting, since this work is not what I expected.(我写信的目的是...,是因为..)
写给陌生人or机构
首句自我介绍
As a senior in Peking University who pays great attention to Project Hope,(作为一个... ,怎么了)
二句目的
三、 中间段
完成题目要求+辅以功能句表达 (感谢、强调、对比、建议、说明等)
强调
I am quite grateful for your kind help and it was your help that enabled me to enjoy a comfortable and fruitful trip of learning in Canada.(正是你的帮助使得...)
总结
To conclude, it is not advisable for me to continue this work.(总之,我不应该)
解释
Project Hope is characterized by people's warm help, which enables a host of poor children to gain the opportunity of education.(A的特点是B,B使得...)
四、 尾段
(再次)致歉、感谢、期待、展望
致歉
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. (再次为引发的不便向您致歉。)
Finally, I truly hope that you can stand in my shoes and accept my apologies.(最后,我很希望您能站在我的立场思考一下并接受我的道歉。)
展望
I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience(期待您尽快回信)
We are convinced that your warm receptions will enable them to enjoy a comfortable and successful trip of learning in our university.
Hope my recommendation is of great value to you
感谢
Finally, I want to say that I am quite grateful for your hard work and I am looking forward to your favorable reply at(很感谢你的...)
Finally, I want to say that I am much obliged for your hard work, because it is your de-voted work that enables us to enjoy a positive learning atmosphere here.
欢迎
welcome to join us,and I am sure you will have a meaningful experience
五、 右下角Yours sincerely逗号 Li Ming
思路
辞职+道歉
Directions: 背景:打散+改写 【Two months ago, you got a job as an editor for the magazine Design & Fashion. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decided to quit. 】Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reasons, and making apologies.
感谢&强调
+原因*
+总结
道歉+建议
Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to 1)make an apology;2)suggest a solution
再次感谢(帮助的意义)
+原因现象
+措施*
求助+描述
Directions: You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.
A是什么
是什么,有什么意义
所以,帮助谁*
大家应该这么做,我也应该这样做
怎么办*
对比说明(和其他人比,我不...,但会尽力...)
描述+建议
Directions: Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for impro-ving its service.
书的种类数量
是什么怎么办
延长时间
原因措施
招募+通知
Directions: You are supposed to write for the Postgraduates’ Association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization. The notice should include the basic qualifications for applicants and other information which you think is relevant.
第一排:Notice
第二排靠右对齐:Friday,June 10
开头
目的+意义
中间段
时间
will start on...and last for...
要求1:如何做+有什么意义(which will...)
要求2:如何做+有什么意义(强调句)
结尾:
具体面试信息
There will be an interview for applicants in the Office of Postgraduates5’Association at 14:00 on June 16.(时间人物地点时间)
期待
we are looking forward to your applying and participation
落款:右对齐
Postgraduates’ Association
通知+介绍
Directions: Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice 1) briefly introduce the camp activities, and 2) call for volunteers
开头:引入(很高兴听到...)+目的
中间段: 要举办什么活动(时间+内容)+要求+期待
结尾:面试信息