潘赟 21九宫格 英语作文

21九宫格 英语作文，内容技巧分为：第一段引出图表、图表描述、图表总结，第二段具体意义、原因后果、意义总结，第三段归纳评论、建议措施、憧憬未来，希望对你有帮助。

潘赟图表

• 第一段
  • 一、引出图表
    • 1.图表展现出了关于...的信息：The line chart/bar chart/pie chart /table presents statistic about+主题词.
    • 2.图表比较了A和B：The chart compares the number of A with that of B.
    • 3.图表展示了...在...方面的不同之处：The chart shows the differences about_____
      • in both_____and_____.
    • 4.图表展现了...如何变化：The chart shows how_____changes in+主题词 from_____to_____.
    • 5.由该表我们可以清楚地看到，...的数字发生了巨大的变化：It is obvious in the chart that the number of_____. has undergone dramatic changes.
  • 二、图表描述
    • 1.上面的图表生动地揭示了：As is vividly revealed in the chart above,_____.
    • 2.基本公式： the number of 主题+变化+程度+范围(或时间)
      • number→figure,amount,percentage,proportion份额
      • 主题=分主题叠加。例如A美国人口数量,B物种灭绝的数量，主题为 美国人口对物种灭绝的影响。
      • 静态图
        • 1.没有变化：From 年份 to 年份,the numbers of+主题词 remained steady at a lower/higher level.
        • 2.是：is，was
          • The number of C in the table above is_____.
        • 3.由...组成：The pie chart above is composed of A,B,C and D.
        • 4.占比：A accounts for 60%,the largest/smallest of all the categories.
        • 5.各自地：To be specific,the proportion of A and B accounts for 20% and 50% respectively.
      • 动态图
        • 变化
          • 上升
            • 轻：climb
            • 一般：increase,rise,grow,jump
            • 激烈：soar,rocket,surge,leap
          • 下降
            • 轻：slide
            • 一般：decline,drop,decrease,diminish
            • 激烈：plumb,plunge,slump
        • 程度
          • slightly,modestly
          • remarkably,significantly
          • sharply,dramatically
        • 范围
          • 在...范围：range from____to____.
          • 在...期间：during the period from ____ to ____.
          • 整个时期内：throughout
          • 从...开始：from ____ onwards
        • 趋势
          • The number of____was 2 in A,rising/dropping to 3 to C.
          • There was an increase/a decline of 40% in ____during the period from A to C.
          • There was an upward/downward trend in ____from 1990 to 2010.
          • 一个变量，一个趋势
          • Although the number of ____ varies,the whole tendency tends to be increasing/decreasing.
            • 一个变量，波动不定
          • 变量一基本公式。关联词，变量二基本公式+during the same period.
            • 表相同变化：likewise.similarily,meanwhile The number of A increased.Similarily,the number of B increased.
            • 表不同变化:however,on the contrary,in contrast The number of A increased.On the contrary,the number of B decreased.
            • 两个变量
  • 三、图表总结
    • 1.通用话题
      • ①尽管数字看似孤立，事实上，它们彼此紧密联系。 Isolated as the figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected to one another today.
      • ②尽管有点抽象，但是图表背后却有一个更深刻的含义。 Despite a little abtract,there is a deeper connotation behind the graph.
    • 2.负面话题
      • ①但是，这是作者要告诉我们的全部吗？当然不是。 But is that all what the author tries to tell us?Of course not.
      • ②这个图表不仅信息丰富，而且具有教育意义。 The graph is not only informative,but instructive as well.
    • 3.正面话题
      • ①显然，图表中的现象越来越引人注目。 Obviously,the phenomenon mentioned in the chart is becoming increasingly eye-catching.
      • ②事实上，这种现象在日常生活中变得越来越常见了。 Indeed,this sort of phenomenon gradually becomes the norm in our daily life.
    • 4.负面话题
      • ①显然，图表背后的事实是喜忧参半的。 Obviously,the underlying meaning of the chart is a mix of disappointing and excitement.
      • ②事实上，图表引发我们去分析该现象的利弊。 In fact,the chart leads us to analyse the pros and cons of the phenomenon.
• 第二段
  • 四、具体意义
    • 1.毫无疑问，这副图表的目的是要告诉我们应该充分重视健康生活的重要性。Undoubtly,the purpose of the chart is to show us that due atttetion should be paid to +主题词(the importance of healthy life ).
    • 2. 显然，这幅图表象征性地揭示了我们日常生活中的一个常见现象：... Apparently,the drawing symbolically reveals a common social phenomenon in our daily life: ...
  • 五、原因后果
    • 科学调查
      • 1.根据最近一项国家机构进行的调查，接近80%的受访者持有相同的观点，他们认为：... According to one latest survey conducted by a certain national organization,approximately 80% the respondents(可改成相关主体) hold the same view that...
      • 2.根据最近一项调查可以支持我的观点。这项由...进行的调查，在调查了...之后，发现大部分受访者宣称... A recent survey can back up my point.The survey conducted by...，after polling...,has found that a significant percentage od respondents claimed that...
    • 对立观点论证
      • ①引出争议+②正方观点.理由.例子+③反方观点.例子.理由
      • ①引出争议
        • In fact,concerning the issue of+主题词(whether A or B/not)_,views might vary from person to person.
      • ②正方观点
        • On the one hand, some people hold the view that 观点+is beneficial to_____.To be specific,they argue that ______.For instance,______.
      • ③反方观点
        • Nevertheless,the rest might hold of other side in this picture,arguing that the disadvantages of 主题词+is far outweigh its advantages.
      • 正方理由
        • Something is beneficial to____.
        • The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
      • 反方理由
        • Something is detrimental to____.
        • The disadvantages of something far outweigh its advantages.
    • 原因后果论证
      • ①交代现象+②引出原因+③具体原因+④结果
      • ①交代现象
        • Considering the significance of the present situation,we ought to point out the causes behind it.
      • ②原因引出
        • We may cite a variety of reasons to account for this phenomenon.
        • From my point of view,_____is primarily caused by the following factors.First of all,______.In addition,______.Last but not least,______.
      • ③具体原因
        • 第一点原因
          • 1.首先，...可能对它产生了重大的影响。 To begin with,______(sth/doing sth) might exert great influence on it.
          • 2.也许，主要原因是... Perhaps,the primary reason is that____.
          • 3.首先，通过数据我们可以看出...所占比例最大/最下，或许是因为... Primarily,we can see from the data that_____take up the largest/smallest proportion because______.
        • 第二点原因
          • What's more，_______.
      • ④结果
        • 具体结果
          • 负面：If we keep turning a blind eye to it,the problen mentioned above will generate severe consequences.For examply,_______.
          • 正面/中立：Hence,As a consequence
        • 虚拟语气
          • 正面：Were there no such thing,we may never taste a colorful life.
          • 负面：Were the situation to continue,we could pay a heavier price.
          • 中立：Were there no such thing,we may never taste a colorful life.Yet,were the opposite feacet of this phenomenon to continue,we would pay a heavey price.
      • 补充原因
        • 媒体
          • 负面：The mass media might inappropriately exaggerate the issue.
          • 正面：The mass media,such as television and the internet,appropriately advocate this spirit/encourage sb to do sth.
        • 政府
          • 负面：A lack of laws and regulations to control____leads to the expanding trend of _____.
          • 正面：It is the enforcement of pertinent laws and regulations that makes this surprising trend come into being.
        • 社会
          • 负面：A lack of due attention leads to____. Too much attetion on____leads to____.
          • 正面：Due attention paid to ____has stimulated the rapid development of___.
        • 个人
          • 负面：A lack of the consciousness of ____results in____.
          • 正面：The public has enhanced the consciousness of____.
    • 子主题
  • 六、意义总结
    • 正面：Were there no+主题词，never would we ________.
    • 负面：Were the situation of+主题词 to continue,we would pay a heavy price./never can we feel the happiness（taste the convenience） of ________.
    • 中性：Without ________,how could it be possible for sb to ________?
• 第三段
  • 七、归纳评论
    • 通用：考虑到这个(正/负)现象的方方面面，我们应该牢记... In view of every aspect of this positive/negative phenomenon,we should bear in mind that ____.
    • 负面：情况如此严重，是时候采取有效和高效的措施去解决问题了。 The situation being so serious,it is high time that we took effective and efficient measures to solve the problem .(过去式/should do)
    • 中立：...是一把双刃剑。 If used carelessly or without restraint,____could prove to be a double-edged sword.
    • 对立观点：在权衡了双方的观点之后，我更倾向于支持前者/后者。 When considering the opinions of both sides,I am inclined to be favor of the former/latter one.或 ....，I am inclined to the notion that___.
      • 弊大于利 the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages
    • 呼吁：为了...，在我看来，需要各方的努力。 To___,in my opinion,it calls for the efforts from all sides.
  • 八、建议措施
    • 需要写两句话！
    • 1.取其精华，去其糟粕。 In terms of the impact of___on___,we should take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
    • 2.不同主体，不同做法。
      • 媒体：宣传提倡/遏制
        • 大众媒体，如电视和网络，应该尽全力去宣传和提倡/揭露和遏制它。 Mass media,such as television and Internet,should make every effort to propagate and advocate the positive thing/reveal and prevent the nagative thing.
      • 政府：教育，立法
        • 政府有责任去教育每一个公民去... The goverment has the responsibility to educate every citizen to do something.
        • 应该制定法律法规并加以强制执行以... Laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to do something.
        • 必须通过法律禁止工厂/个人做某事。 Laws must be passed to prohibit factories/people from doing sth.
      • 个人：意识，行动
        • 作为自身，我们应该采取实际行动去... As for ourselves,we ought to take ptractical actions to do something.
        • 社会公众应该提高...的意识。 The public should enhance the consciousness of____.
        • ...的培养有赖于社会每个成员的积极参与。 The cultivation of ____depends on the active participation of every citizen of our society.
  • 九、憧憬未来
    • 通过这些措施，我们有理由相信问题被解决。 With these measures taken,it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the future.
    • 伴随着恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早会被解决。 With appropriate law and alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a thing of the past.
    • 只有...才 Only with these measures taken would the world be a much nicer place./can we come across various challenges.
• 原因
  • 效率
    • 正：It can greatly enhance our work/study efficiency.
    • 反：It will greatly decrease our work/study efficiency.
  • 发展
    • 正：It contributes to the sustainable development of the economy.
    • 反：It will hamper the sustainabale development of economy.
  • 环境
    • 正：主题词+contributes to the improvement of environment.
    • 反：Due to+主题词,our environment will suffer a great destruction.
  • 健康
    • 正：主题词+exerts a positive influence on our health both mentally and physically.
    • 反：主题词+poses a great threat to our health both mentally and physically.
  • 便利
    • 正：It will offer us great convenience in many aspects of our daily life.
    • 反：It will bring out tremendous inconvenience in many aspects of our daily life.
  • 文化
    • 正：It is conducive to the development and prosperity of our culture.
    • 反：It has detrimental influence on the sustainable development of culture.
  • 社交
    • 正：It can help people enhance their social skills,such as ________.
    • 反：It is not conducive to the development of social skills.